Chapter Seventy-Four: Articles of Association (Part II)
Qian Mai thought about it, and secretly sighed in his heart that the afterlife was terrifying.
He used to fight Nanban with Zhou Shumi for several years, although he was not responsible for the transfer with the army, but he had never eaten pork, and he had seen pigs run, and he thought he was also a little confident in the operation of logistics and grain. However, when I saw this article, I found many details, and sure enough, I couldn't find out if I didn't handle it specifically.
He was still pondering carefully, and Qian Dalang, who had read the beginning below, had already begun to comment: "How can there be an article like this, it's a mess!" Wasted good writing! ”
Qian Mai opened his eyes and looked at his son with displeasure.
Qian Dalang commented to himself: "Who did this? The beginning of the pen is good, it can be seen that he is a talented learner, but the back of the writing is unfocused, flat and straightforward, this article is taken to take the exam, it is important to have an inferior level! If it falls into my hands......"
Qian Mai interrupted his son's words and said: "This is not a question, you put away that thought, I told you to read the article, not the article, you have read it carefully, and then come and talk to me!" ”
Qian Dalang had been afraid of this father for a long time, and when he heard that what he said was wrong, he almost immediately shut up and looked down honestly.
He looked at it, and he really felt more and more puzzled, he really didn't know what was there to study in detail about such a boring article.
The manuscript in his hand is a thick stack, except for the first few sentences that briefly summarize the intention of the article—these few sentences are brilliantly written—and then there are long and exhaustive statements, first the general items, and then the sub-items by points, except for A, B, C, D, which are one, two, three, four, rules and regulations, at first glance, the dense handwriting, so that his scalp is numb.
That's not all, it's all extremely uninteresting. From the travel plan to the diet and rest, from the loading of grain to the inspection and acceptance, all aspects are meticulous to the trivial, and there is no literary brilliance at all, and the level of the three aunts and six women who talk nonsense on the street is also similar, even if the gossip of others is much more interesting than this article.
Where is this posture to make a fuss!
It's all vernacular!
Qian Dalang swept down ten lines at a glance, even if he was patient, it only took a quarter of an hour to turn through the thick dozens of pages.
He thought back to his father's attitude, and felt that he must have overlooked something, so he picked up his spirits again and tried to look at it from the beginning.
This time, it only took a cup of tea, and he finished it again.
I can't hold it.
Even the most difficult scriptures are more interesting than this. Anyway, the former can still make a commentary, and maybe it will be used in the poetry article in the future, this one, except for the first few sentences, the following text is so simple and rough that it is impossible to read.
Qian Dalang said with some apprehension: "This article is very detailed......
This is already the highest rating he can give.
Although Qian Dalang is only a fellow jinshi, and in Qingming Academy, he is just a trainer, but he has reviewed countless people's articles and read for decades, and he thinks that he still has some qualifications to evaluate his writings.
At this moment, because of his father's prestige, his words are so tactful, but he already has his own evaluation in his heart.
According to the text, at most one inferior, it is still for the sake of that excellent beginning, the same face as the whole article with a lot of words.
There is so much content, I don't know where it was pieced together, at first glance it looks quite scary, read it carefully, it's all sub-items, it's not for literati at all, it's like telling a story to a commoner who doesn't know how to write and ink - Rao is so, such a boring thing, which civilian wants to listen?
My father is really getting older, and his temperament is becoming more and more uncertain......
Thinking like this, Qian Dalang involuntarily half-raised his head, carefully glanced at Qian Mai's expression, and didn't want his eyes to hit the other party's disappointed face.
Qian Mai sighed and asked, "Just detailed?" ”
Qian Mai not only sighed, but also felt helpless in his heart.
How did you raise such a son!
If you can't read it, you don't say it, and you're stupid to read it!
The scientific examination relies on articles, can it be that if you become an official in the future, you can also rely on articles?
Which important minister in the government hall and the Privy Council did not stand out from the tens of millions of people by virtue of his ability to do his work? Even if it is hot now, Cai Yue, who is known for his long-sleeved dancing and three-sided swords, laughs at him among the scholars that he is a grass on the wall and falls on both sides, all relying on sycophants to get to the top.
Is this something that can be done with articles alone?
What others can't do, you can do, and what others can't, you will.
To be an official, you must be able to do it in order to be an official.
With talent, you must also have talent, and if you have talent, you must also know how to stand in line, in addition to these, if you want to be an official, he doesn't dare to say that he knows a little bit about learning.
If he really understood the samadhi, he would not have been up and down for decades, and when he resigned, he was only a scholar of the Jixian Academy, and he only did some work of compiling scriptures and commentaries all day long.
Being looked at by his father like this, it was clear that on the night of September, the weather had gradually cooled, Qian Dalang was still stared at in a cold sweat, he pinched the manuscript, and it was really no good to make it up, and after a long time, he was scared and said: "My lord...... Why is this article so important...... My son really doesn't see anything special......"
The son is not successful to this point, Qian Mai really can't stand it, but in the end it is his own son, can he still ignore it?
He grabbed the article in his hand and said impatiently: "Since you say that this article is not good, you can make a copy yourself!" ”
"Someone!"
Qian Mai called the scholar loudly, pointed to the desk on the side and said, "Go and polish the ink, so that you can serve the pen and ink." ”
He turned his head to his son and said: "Since you don't like this, you can make a look at yourself at this time, rest tomorrow, and don't worry, even when you finish writing, you will go to rest again!" ”
He also said: "I don't want you to write it so long, as long as the article is written, the transfer departments in various places can act according to this and run the grain logistics!" ”
Qian Dalang knew his father's temper, and he didn't dare to refute it, so he obediently walked to the desk and picked up the pen to start writing.
It was nearly two hours to write.
It is said that it is easy to read articles, but it is difficult to make articles, and it was really until he wrote it himself, and Qian Dalang found that this topic was really not simple.
Ancient and modern military books emerge in endlessly, but almost all of the expositions on transshipment are general, and if you really want to write a separate article, there are too few views that can be used for reference.
Qian Dalang turned over the Chinese ink, pieced it together, prepared the argument, and when the article was finished, it was already three o'clock, and he didn't have time to do any more copying, so he only whispered two sentences and presented the manuscript to Qian Mai on the side.
Dividing line ******
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