Su Min shook his head, snatched the book back and said, "No, I don't think it's good!" ”

The girl glanced at Wang Zicheng as she spoke, suddenly put the notebook on the table, put her hand on Wang Zicheng's shoulder and pressed it and said, "Otherwise, you will change it according to this line of thought!" Anyway, I helped write some, and you can't be considered a loss! ”

Wang Zicheng nodded with a smile and said, "It makes sense, then you can't be angry if I change it!" ”

"Am I that stingy?"

"There were stingy ghosts trying to trick me before!"

“…… Okay, okay, I swear I won't be angry, you can change it! ”

"Hmm."

So Wang Zicheng, under Su Min's gaze, deleted the words written by the two of them together.

For geniuses, it is not difficult to write lyrics, but the difficult thing is that there is no inspiration, but fortunately, Wang Zicheng pulled Su Min to write this song together.

From this point of view, S· T· The fourth song of the Y boy group was forced to come out under someone's "coercion and temptation", and if it is known in the future, I don't know if it will be ridiculed.

As the snowflakes fluttered, the pen on the book finally stopped, and it was here that the lyrics of the fourth song came to life.

This song was named "Return Date" by them, and it was changed from "Bai Xue Ge Sends the Military Judge to Return to Beijing" by the Tang Dynasty border village poet Cen Shen, but the central idea was changed by the two of them.

"Return" writes about the state of mind of a soldier and a woman, and also reflects the pathos in Wang Zicheng's heart and the poetry in Su Min's heart.

One is guarding the border but his eyes are full of wind and snow, and the other is waiting in Jiangnan but full of thoughts, and such a poignant love story, Su Min and Wang Zicheng did not give them an ending.

There are only endless thoughts, only full of expectations, so they can't bear it, and the first four sentences are set by them to sing.

Hu Tian August snow,

Such as a thousand trees and pear blossoms;

I want to return with you,

But look at the barren mountains and cry blood!

This is the background of time and space set by the prince as a soldier and a woman, and there is a vague feeling of sadness between the words, and Su Min's heart aches when she sees it.

"It's really much better to be changed by you like this! It's just too sad......" Su Min pursed his lips, and then looked at Wang Zicheng and said with a smile: "Otherwise, you will read this, and I will read this!" How about we have one sentence in the front and one sentence in the back? ”

Wang Zicheng's eyebrows and heart skipped a beat, because the lyrics he modified were sung the way Su Min said, so he was surprised in his heart.

But he quickly calmed down, nodded slowly, and said "um".

"That'...... You first! ”

"Well, then I'll get started."

"Uh-huh, let's go, let's go!"

So the two of them had to tell the story about you and me, and the originally lively atmosphere became solemn.

"I watched the wolf smoke rise from the border pass, flying in the sky.

The flute came in the wind, and tears drowned out the memories.

Turn around and look back at the snow-covered ground, frozen for thousands of miles.

The rain of arrows in the sky is not afraid, and the long sword in his hand stands. ”

The soldiers stood in the sea of corpses and looked up at the sky, and white snowflakes were flying in the air, and the snowflakes were flying in the sky.

The sound of a flute suddenly sounded in the gale, causing the soldiers who were fighting to burst into tears, and pieces of memories fell on his heart with thoughts.

But the war was so cruel and merciless, and when he looked back at the road covered by snow, everything behind him was sealed in ice, and the frozen land stretched for thousands of miles, and what awaited him in front of him was arrows that rained down!

But even if he was so powerless, the soldier was fearless, and in order to prevent himself from falling, he drew the long sword he carried with him to support his body, and stood in the wind like a banner!

"Ye Tingting, the water town in the south of the Yangtze River, is coming in August.

There is a singing voice lingering in my ears, reminiscing about the past

Looking up at the boundless, the clear water and the sky are green.

Write to tell your heart, and look forward to your return! ”

In August, the south of the Yangtze River is full of beautiful scenery, there are boundless lotus ponds connected with the sky to form a line, and the lotus pond is blooming with beautiful lotus flowers.

The woman and the soldier are at the same time, but they have a different scenery.

She slept in the gazebo, but she heard someone start singing Jiangnan Minor, so she remembered the bits and pieces of getting along with the soldiers.

Looking at the blue water in front of her, the longing and melancholy surged into her heart at the same time, and she slowly shed tears when the love was deep.

The woman finally put pen to paper to tell the affection in her heart, and at the same time hoped that her beloved could give her an exact return date.

"When I (you) come back to see the day and night,

The sun and the moon are no longer separated,

Look at the azure and enjoy the snow,

Which tube has a road full of thorns,

Walk the world side by side! ”

"Waiting for you (me) to return and enjoy the rainbow,

Every day and every year, hand in hand,

Painting landscapes, writing poetry,

No matter the sunset and clouds,

Wonderful pen stroke color new! ”

The chorus part is an interactive perspective, with his vows to her past, and her response to his past.

It's just that a phantom appeared in front of the soldier's eyes, and there was only a smile on the corner of his lips between the virtual and the real. His story has been forced to end, and no one knows whether he will live or die.

The woman waiting in Jiangnan is still fantasizing about the future of the two of them, and fantasizing that the two of them can live for a lifetime......

Some poignant pictures appeared in Su Min's mind, with a faint sadness on his face, while Wang Zicheng looked at the girl silent, and there was a trace of sourness surging in her nose.

She is so innocent, so she writes about the beautiful scenery of the water towns in the south of the Yangtze River, but the scene has been changed by Wang Zicheng's pen to be extremely poignant.

He was so thoughtful that he wrote his situation on the soldier, but the separation from his lover was exaggerated by him, and the chorus part was his heart's desire.

Therefore, the ignorant person feels sadness, while the calm and introverted person has hope in his heart, and both of them are caught in their own hearts.

It's just that Su Min suddenly came to her senses, she got up from the table and shook the notebook in her hand, and looked at Wang Zicheng with some sadness: "Then does this song have a tune now?" ”

Before Wang Zicheng could reply, the notebook in Su Min's hand was taken away, so both of them got up anxiously and wanted to snatch the notebook back.

It's just that the two of them saw that the person who snatched the book was Ah Quan, so they both sat back, one scratched his head to show his uneasiness, and the other bowed his head slightly to show nervousness.

Ah Quan glanced at the words on the book, and frowned in disgust: "My good Minmin, your calligraphy has been corrected by your master and me, why is the hard pen still so ugly?" Tsk, they all say that words are like their people and they are really words like people, you look at how well people write their words, they really deserve to be top students! ”

Su Min was a little unhappy in her heart, she pursed her lips and was about to say something, but she got a compliment from Ah Quan: "But your story is well written, you can use it as an outline!" ”

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