Cui Shi's article is written exquisitely, full of flowers, and the technique is very familiar, in an article of less than 2,000 words, seven or eight rows of comparisons are used, from the effect of the measures to the praise of the people, not without layers of rendering, so that people read it one breath after another, after reading it, I only feel that it is really beautifully written.

The other article is marked with the word "two", but it is another style, and it only honestly writes what Gu Yanzhang did in Yongzhou in chronological order, what effect has it achieved, and lists a lot of data, the thing is clear, but it is dry, and because it is boring, it seems tasteless.

The three girls read it, and they all thought Cui Shi's article was better.

Only Qiulu hesitated for a moment, and said: "If you talk about literary talent, this one is naturally good, but you can't just rely on Wencai theory - I just don't know what this article is used for?" ”

Ji Qingling said: "If it is used to let the Son of Heaven know the situation in Yongzhou, it is used to report on work?" ”

This time, the three began to disagree.

Qiu Shuang only said that the article marked with the word "two" was boring and unbearable, and he couldn't read it at all, although there was a lot of content written in it, but the beginning was unbearable, and who would be willing to turn it back. And although Cui Shi's article has less content, it is really good that it can't stand up to the literary style, and after reading it, it is impressive, and the purpose has been achieved.

Although Qiu Lu also felt that the other article marked with the word "two" couldn't stand it, she said: "It's useful alone, or this one is useful, just look at the one in front of me, and I don't remember what I did after reading it, I just remember that his writing is really good." ”

Qiuyue, like Qiushuang, also thinks Cui Shi's writing is good.

Ji Qingling looked at Qiu Shuang and said: "Right now, you are still in charge of the fields of the Daimyo's Mansion, if it is any year, I will give you all the land and property as a dowry, it just so happened that the Daimyo's Mansion suffered a disaster that year, and the news said that the displaced people are everywhere, the land is dry and the land is barren, and no one cultivates, I'm afraid that there will be no harvest this year, are you in a hurry?" ”

Qiu Shuang blushed and said, "I'm in a hurry." ”

Ji Qingling said again: "Because it is far away, you don't know what the drought situation is, and it doesn't matter if the tenant wants it, so I called your servant to help me go to see the situation - once and again, it will take more than a month to say the least, and it is easy to get a letter from him, what do you want to know?" ”

Qiu Shuang blurted out: "I want to know if the disaster is bad, it doesn't matter if my field is good, how many tenants have planted it honestly, and how much grain can be harvested in autumn......"

When she said this, she was suddenly stunned.

Ji Qingling laughed and asked, "Then do you want to know how much effort that little guy put into that place, what he did, how capable he was, and how many merits he achieved?" ”

Qiu Shuang opened his mouth and said: "That's what he should do......"

For a moment the room fell silent.

After a while, the three of them came to the table in unison, opened the fold marked with the word "two" and read it again, and then looked at the manuscript of Cui Shi.

This time, the opinions of the three of them were finally unified, and Qiu Yue pointed to the word marked "two" and said, "The emperor should prefer this one." ”

Qiu Lu nodded, even Qiu Shuang had no objections.

For these little girls, these folds are just articles, looking at their Chinese collection, whether they are outstanding in reading, but for the Son of Heaven, the folds in Yongzhou's newspaper are his "field property" and "tenants", and all the figures are kept in mind, how much grain can be harvested this year, how much will be lost, what disasters have occurred, how serious they are, and what is the situation now is more important.

When the Son of Heaven received the concerto, the first one was to know whether the matter had been resolved, if it had not been resolved, how it could be solved, if it had been solved, what problems had occurred in the middle of the solution, whether it mattered, and how much loss there was, these were what he cared about.

As for how much you have done in that place, and how powerful you are, and how the people rejoice, if the matter is settled, you will be last in line.

If you send an excerpt so easily, you only bring what the Son of Heaven wants to know, but you only bring it roughly, and what the Son of Heaven does not want to know, but you capitalize and close-up, come two more times, and if there is any important matter, you will not be sent to do it again.

Ji Qingling saw that the three of them were discussing in a whisper with a fold, so he didn't care anymore, just picked up the pen again and wrote the fold of the plea.

Gu Yanzhang was busy outside, he didn't even care about eating, he had to snicker when he slept for more than two hours a day, and if he wrote his own excerpts, he wouldn't have to rest anymore. There are too few people he brought, and there are too few things, almost all of them have to be taught, and there are few old ones, so that they can be in a government and a state, and most of them have staff to help draft them, but Gu Yanzhang's staff wrote enough of the chapters, and if they want to send them, they are more than a star and a half short.

The difference is not a sideline, it is a matter of position and perspective.

Everyone is a staff member, has never been an official, and even few people have even entered the officialdom, even if they have seen countless celebrities, they have learned the framework and style, but it is difficult to imitate their gods, the reason is that they have no real experience and are difficult to put themselves in their shoes.

The style of the note is completely different from the article, and the style of the discussion is completely different from the style of the story, and it is not easy to raise a staff member who can help write the story, and it is not easy to slowly adjust and modify the penmanship.

Ji Qingling saw that time was tight, and knew that everyone was busy, and it was too late to change it little by little, so he simply took it himself.

In order to send the last excerpt to the capital, she worked on the draft for two days, and then deleted and changed it, and spent another three or four days of effort, of which the most effort was the part of "asking for sin".

Gu Yanzhang acted in Yongzhou, it cannot be said that there is no problem at all, even if he has merit, there is no lack of parts that are good at making claims, such as using the rebels who surrendered without authorization, such as insisting on copying the sword before the disaster relief, these parts are the best choice under the situation at the time, but in the eyes of the people in the capital, they are not among them, and if they don't do anything, where will they understand - even if they can understand, they must not understand, and it is in line with their interests.

What Ji Qingling has to do is to guess what the courtiers in the capital will find fault with that matter, and how they will find faults, and block those faults one by one in advance, and let the Son of Heaven know that Gu Yanzhang acted like that in the past, he was really forced to do so, but if he had another choice, he would not do that, and the other thing was that he knew that it was wrong and was willing to admit his guilt.

"Confession" is the main premise, first make clear my attitude - I have no merit, even a little bit of merit, and it is also the ability of the Son of Heaven to appoint me, as for doing something wrong, it is my lack of ability, and I only want to be punished according to the law.

Although this is a step forward, few people are willing to do it, because it is easy to make a fake come true.

Maybe the Son of Heaven can't hold up the trouble of the next people, so he really wiped the credit, how can ordinary people accept the hard work for so long, and there is no reward at all?

But Gu Yanzhang is different.

He is still young, he has already made a lot of meritorious contributions, and there will be countless opportunities for meritorious service in the future, and it is impossible for him to be admitted to the hospital within a few years, so it is better to sell it in front of the Son of Heaven than to fight for that little merit at this time, so that he can remember that he still owes someone the merit at this time—isn't it more important than that first-class and half-grade?

There are not many officials in the capital with five or six grades, and they may be sold in front of the Son of Heaven to relieve the siege, I'm afraid there are not a few of them?