Extra-Extracurricular Studies(12)

The students below looked at each other, and no one answered for a long time.

It's no wonder that they are not good at speaking, just like Chang Anming said, although Han Ruohai's article is brilliant, it is not particularly rare, if it is written in imitation, ordinary people can also make it, but the framework, writing, and truth will be inferior by a few points.

But Gu Jiansi's article, if it is not good, there must be a bad article - how can there be a perfect article in the world.

But how easy is it to find fault with it?

It's easier to pick Han Ruohai, you can criticize him for not having a deep reason, his intentions are biased, and it's all the author's words, which can't be persuaded by others. You can also accuse the rhetoric of being too colorful, heavy and lightweight, and you can always find something to say left and right, and you can also justify yourself.

But Gu Jiansi's is not easy to find.

He either narrates the whole text, or puts out figures that come from nowhere, as if there is not the slightest idea of the author himself, nor the slightest inclination, no position, no conclusion, but after reading the article, a hundred people, unless they pretend to be blind, will come to the same conclusion.

There is not a word in the article that praises Luo Tongbian, but every word is praising Luo Tongbian.

There is not a word in the article commenting on Shen Cunfu, but word by word is saying that Shen Cunfu is only a technical officer, not a person who is suitable for presiding over a large project.

In addition, he also wrote down the disadvantages of Daoluo Tongbian clearly, and even many details were clearer than those officials in the court who asked to stop this matter.

It was precisely because he said good and bad that his ass sat in the middle, which made the article more convincing, and after listening to it, everyone felt that if the project was stopped, it would be a brain kick to the donkey.

It is said that literati are light, but when such words are put out, in the end, the hall is full of students, not a sour scholar who is swaying with half a bottle of water outside can open his mouth and talk nonsense, if you want to find the mistake, you can only find the fault of what he said, and it is necessary to go through the files, ask the local people, and even conduct on-the-spot inspections, and it is impossible to check them one by one in ten days and half a month.

The gentleman asked urgently, and the students had the heart to answer and make a big show, but how could they understand things that they didn't understand in the first place.

If it's really that powerful, it's not just a sacrifice in Taixue.

Seeing that there was silence in Xuezhai, Mr. Yu sighed slightly, walked around, looked at Han Ruohai, and asked, "What do you think of Jian Si's article?" What's wrong with that? ”

Han Ruohai was still holding a pen in his hand, and he was comparing the numbers listed in Gu Jiansi's article, and at first glance, he was like this, so he had to stand up, thought for a while, and said, "It's too ...... Long? ”

As soon as he finished speaking, the air in the hall seemed to be suffocated, and after a few breaths, the students couldn't hold back any longer, and laughed sullenly one after another.

Gu Jiansi, who was standing on top, couldn't hold back his laughter.

However, Mr. Yu's face remained unchanged and asked, "Why do you say that?" ”

Han Ruohai said seriously: "This one should have more than 3,000 words......" He said while looking at Gu Jiansi.

Someone dared to ask aloud, "How do you know that there are more than 3,000 words?" ”

Han Ruohai said: "Jian Si and I are on the right and left, he writes very well, usually, a page writes about 300 words, but the difference is only more than five words, I just saw him turn 11 pages, this article is more than 3,000 words." ”

Everyone also looked at Gu Jiansi.

Gu Jiansi nodded and said, "That's true." ”

Han Ruohai said again: "The imperial examination has to pass the township examination, the meeting examination, and the palace examination three times, and the palace examination is over, and only one article is written a day - even so, the paper is handed in late, if it is considered that Wensi is not agile enough and slow, it is not a good thing, as for the rest of the sessions, in addition to the article, there is also the examination of the school scriptures, etc., where is there time to do such an article for him?" ”

When he said this, he calculated again: "I have just listed the numbers cited in the Jian Si article, and there are sixty-seven groups of one-to-one correspondences, and there are other points and items, all of which are reflected by detailed examples - such an article can only be written by spending a lot of energy to survey the field and flip through the files, so how can it be written in the test?" If it is deleted, it will not be convincing, and if it is not deleted, there will not be enough time. ”

Hearing what Han Ruohai said, the middle school students nodded their heads as if they had suddenly realized.

Someone said: "If I can't write such an article in three days, I will be given a month and I will be able to make some success if I visit it once." ”

Another humane: "It's a headache to look at, and I can't do it for three months!" ”

When everyone was quieter, Mr. Yu said to the students below: "If Hai said this, you must think about it carefully - if there is no Enke, the scientific examination will only occur once in three years, and it is necessary to work steadily step by step, and there can be no mistakes." ”

When he said this, he turned to Gu Jiansi again and said, "Jiansi doesn't have to listen very much. ”

This time, not only Gu Jiansi, everyone in the school was stunned.

Mr. Na Yu said: "Since you entered the school for more than two months, you have written eleven articles in my hands, all of which have their own ingenuity, no matter the argument, writing style, or style, they all change with the change of the topic, and no matter when they are placed, they can stand out. You are still young, you don't have to rush to the end, just like this time, do an article, and figure out the ins and outs of things, the advantages and disadvantages one by one. ”

After finishing speaking, he said to the students: "You are also average, since you are too a student, you not only have to learn composition, but also learn to do things - in the future, as an official, once you go to the township and county, will you still take the examination for your essay?" Do you want to talk about it with the villagers, or do you want to talk about etiquette? Only when the channel is clear and reasonable, and the punishment is understood, can it be worthy of the monthly supply of the DPRK and China. ”

As long as you study too much, you will have money and food every month, all of which will be provided by the imperial court. The students are used to holding it on weekdays and don't feel anything, but when they heard Mr. Yu say this, many of them were ashamed.

To put it more seriously, everyone is equivalent to taking the people's fat and people's ointment to study, and in the future, they will naturally have to serve the dynasty and the country, and serve the people as the king, and they can't just blindly take the exam and compose.

Mr. Yu could see the change in the student's expression, and nodded secretly in his heart, but the conversation changed, and he said: "Let's talk about the article of Jian Si, the problem is not on the side, but the old farmer in front." ”

This article is full of real examples, no matter the numbers or examples, all of them are well-founded. Although there was no reply from the Kyoto government, I have been in Beijing for more than 20 years, and my family has checked the old account books, and there is no difference in the price of grain, rice, tea, etc. - only the old peasant family affair of Kaiwen, although it is fascinating to read, it does not fit the style of this article. ”

The students understood it at once.

At this time, it is very common to use people and words as a reference, and most of them start with "someone's cloud" and "how so-and-so is so-and-so", but in fact, it is just the author's own words under the pretense of his own words.

There are many advantages to this kind of writing, which makes it easier to read and more interesting.

can be placed on Gu Jiansi's article with "real" as the selling point, which is very inconsistent.

Mr. Yu said: "If you meet such a picky person, just ask you, who is the old farmer's surname, where he is from, and what is the situation of the children in the family, and then laugh at you about this matter, saying that you are testifying to your own words, inflating people's examples, and the rest of the words are not credible, and there will be people who follow the trend, isn't it a pity?" ”

It sounds like what Mr. Yu said is very alarmist, but in fact, there are not many such sour literati.

Give them such a random pass, Gu Jiansi is not pressed by a literary name, and it is easy to take them away.

At this time, Mo said that the rest of the students, even Han Ruohai, who was knowledgeable, couldn't help but be convinced, and only felt that Mr. Yu was worthy of being a professor of Taixue.

It's just that he never heard Gu Jiansi's answer, and couldn't help but look up, but he could see that the person above frowned slightly, looking very hesitant, and after a long time, he whispered: "Sir...... The farmer...... Surname Lin ......"