The Pitch Black Express Afterword
The postscript is basically my summary of myself, which does not involve the plot at all, and everyone selectively reads it.
The volume of the dark express train is finally finished, that is, the world of "Detective Conan" is finished, it took about 4 months, roughly statistically looked at it, there are more than 230 chapters and 600,000 words, this length is actually seriously beyond my expectations, my original assumption should be 150 chapters and 450,000 words, about a quarter more. The extra part is actually mainly the part of the Aegis ship, that is, the story of "The Detective of the Absolute Sea", counting the small story foreshadowing in front and the sweeping tail in the back, it probably accounts for about 50 chapters, and this part is actually not in my outline.
This story was added halfway, in fact, there are two reasons, one is that the story of the Aegis ship looks cool, and with Kazama's ability, it should be able to play a different flower on the sea, but I didn't do a very good job in this part, so everyone may not look very good; And the second reason is that in my outline, there was originally a chance to get on the sea and master the setting of the water attribute chakra, but I didn't think about where there was the sea at the time, and there were not too many plots about the sea in the Naruto story, and it just so happened that M17 was set on the sea, which just supplemented the lack of the outline, so I temporarily added this scene.
And then the other 30 extra chapters, that is, the pitch-black express train, this section accounts for 130 chapters, and in my original vision it should be 90-100 chapters, of which 10 chapters are to introduce the basic setting and the background of the occurrence, 20 chapters are to introduce the plot of the original text, and then about 50 chapters, which are about the follow-up bomb explosion and part of the emotional story, and the last 10 chapters or so are the finishing work. This makes sense and doesn't have too many numbers, resulting in the title being too long and can't be written in one line, so I'll find a way to modify this and try to make the title look neat. There are two main parts that are extra, one is because of the release of "Zero Executor", and I added scenes to Bourbon Amuro, including mobile phone tapping and bomb defusal, all of which are because of the touch brought by this movie, about 7 or 8 chapters; The second part is about the description of G&S, and the reason for this part is basically because of the story written in the special chapter, which happened to me because of the move, and I remembered the stalk about hair, so I added a drama to the two of them, almost a little more than 10 chapters.
The last ten chapters of 25,000 words are basically my own problem, that is, the language is not concise enough, so it takes a lot of complicated ways to say it, and there are a lot of extra words for no reason, and the 10 chapters are actually underspoken, and these are writing skills that need to be improved.
All in all,I'm still relatively satisfied with myself with this whole volume.,The first story was relatively calm because there was a manuscript from other websites when I came over.,So it's relatively calm.,There's no pressure to rush the manuscript at all.,The plot has time to ponder carefully.,The words and sentences also have time to be revised repeatedly.,So it's a good effect.。 The second story,Because the manuscript is basically consumed,Beginning to be under pressure because of the draft,After all, because it's a new plot.,There's no outline at all.,Just follow the plot.,So there's a lot of uninteresting dialogue and reasoning process.,Now I want to come to this part of the reasoning.,It's really redundant for people who have seen it.,I'm afraid I can't understand it for people who haven't seen it.,In fact, it should be brushed aside.,Compress the story into a tense and exciting police blockbuster.,I think the effect can be much better.,So I'm the most dissatisfied with this paragraph.。 The third story,I guess a lot of people don't like to read it.,It can be seen from the number of clicks and the situation that appears during this period of time.,But it's actually my favorite and most satisfying part.,First of all,It basically got up and filled in the holes buried in the first two stories.,There are not too many problems left.,Let this whole volume be completed relatively completely; Secondly, most of the elements in "Detective Conan" are involved, reasoning, sniping, explosions, Ke Xue, and love are almost all written, and from my personal point of view, the main characters who appear, whether they are red or black, are all on the basis of trying not to collapse, adding my own ideas, and trying to keep it roughly the same as the original book can also see the difference; In the end, it can be said that all my dreams about "Detective Conan" have come true, Ke Ai, GS and even the more niche fast red, have been involved, about Conan, the story of Gray Yuan, in fact, it is a copy of the Ke Aiwen I wrote in the post bar 5 years ago, the ending at that time was not completely written, but it was the end of BE, that is, it was similar to the current ending, Gray Yuan died and then the detective left Japan. At that time, I thought about such an ending, but I was afraid that I would be unlucky, because at that time, the whole Internet was spreading that the old thief Qingshan said that there would be a victim in the finale, and it was likely to be Gray Yuan, so I didn't finish writing the ending. This opportunity to turn over what I had written before.,Based on this.,Add the plot of the train chapter.,Plus the appearance of Kazama.,Further changed the development of the plot.,It's basically the source of all this paragraph.。
In the end, the appearance of Hongzi and the situation of Gray Yuan and Gin, put it in the new sub-volume is not forced to divide the volume because of the problem of space, it is all my intention, in order to have new ideas when I read it, I will not disclose it in advance.
Finally, at the end, it's close to the end of the year.,The work will definitely be heavier.,And friends' birthdays are basically piled up and Christmas.,So there's less time to use.,Take the opportunity to update that chapter in the middle of the night last night.,Adjust the update time.,Delay it later.,That is, the second chapter will be sent after 12 o'clock.,So it's still two chapters a day.,Stay up late and grit your teeth.,It's a lot better after the end of the year.。