Su Pingzhi's "Selling Equipment All Over the Rivers and Lakes"

By—Zimu tassel

Subject matter:

The subject matter of this book is very novel, and it is an anti-time travel online game text. It should be said that the anti-crossing is actually not flattering, because when readers read the text, it is a cool word. And the theme of crossing, the protagonist of the crossing is born with a huge advantage in technology, thought, experience, etc., and at the same time use these advantages to play with ancient times, this is the biggest attraction, and the theme of anti-crossing, but it has become that the protagonist does not understand anything in modern times, will not know anything, and the advantage is gone, so it is difficult to write about the anti-crossing, but the author of this book has cleverly solved this problem - the game. Although the protagonist doesn't know much about all the weirdness in the game, that doesn't prevent the protagonist from having an advantage. She has a huge advantage in consciousness and physical reactions, and that's what this book is all about. It can also be seen from this that the basic skills of early and solid Da are solid.

Plot:

It should be said that the three books reviewed today have a good grasp of the rhythm of the plot, especially this one, the plot transition is very, very smooth and natural, to talk about the shortcomings, it is still the same as the previous book, and the climax is not obvious. It is recommended that the author deliberately create a climax.

Writing:

The writing is very simple, but it is natural, smooth, and has a story, which is my favorite style. There is also a summary of the small passages that I just mentioned in the previous book, which is also reflected in this book.

Figure:

I don't see much, but in the shaping of the protagonist, it's still very good, and the disadvantage is that there are no too big and obvious setting characteristics, which makes the characters lose a lot of color.

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Commenting on "Selling Equipment All Over the World"

By—Ling Jia!

He Zao's novels are of guaranteed quality, so I jumped into the pit, even though I have always been very thunderous about the title of the book that does not highlight the highlights of the novel - "Selling Equipment All Over the Rivers and Lakes".

The setting of "Equipment" is very novel, I don't read many online game novels, and it is the first time I have read a martial arts novel that has crossed into an online game, so my curiosity has always been constant.

In a sense, I think "Equipment" is more like a reverse penetration, the Song Dynasty killer reversed into the modern online game, although the background of the game is ancient, but everything is stained with modern factors, the player is a modern person, and the thinking is 108,000 miles different from the ancients. Qin Zheng looked at things that he didn't seem to understand or didn't understand at all, and it was almost exactly the same as what happened to the ancients when they reversed into modern times.

Most of the anti-piercing essays later are about how the protagonist adapts to modern society, as well as the struggles and encounters in modern society, and in the later stage, it slowly becomes an urban text, which I don't like very much. And the article "Equipment" is wonderful, even if it is reversed, the author borrows online games and continues to tell the story that happened on the rivers and lakes, attracting a large number of readers and martial arts fans who love ancient styles, this setting is quite creative and quite successful!

There is another place in this article that is well set.,That is the identity of the heroine.,This identity doesn't refer to her killer identity.,But it means that she only exists in the game.,It's set up.,It's very worrying to watch.。

I've always been worried about the future of the heroine, after all, she is now a soul without flesh and blood, she only exists in the game, even if she is fully adapted to the game, to modern cultural ideas, then what can she do? She's always a virtual persona. I don't know what He Zao will do with her future in the future, is it the same as the ending of "Tianqing", let the protagonist become part of the network system? I'm really looking forward to it.

Only when you have a good idea can you write a good article on the basis of this idea, and only an article with highlights, selling points, and characteristics can be successful. He Zao MM is very successful in creativity, let us know that the seemingly flooded crossing or anti-crossing text, as long as you think about it carefully, you can also write new ideas, which is worth learning from all authors!

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My little opinion on a couple of male supporting actors

By—Leaf light

Some of the appearances are okay, but basically the male supporting actors who 'should' not have a chance to win the male lead throne are excluded by me. For example: Scholar Night White.

The first male supporting actor to appear was cloudless. I flipped through the comments.,I found that there are a lot of supporters of this one.,So far,He's the only male partner who has been with the female owner for the longest time.。 Ruotian's type of boy is very good, well, the relationship between these two people is probably the so-called: more than friends, less than lovers. I like that kind of ambiguous and unclear feeling.,I should be very optimistic about him.,And he's really good to the heroine.,Personality is straightforward.,There's no scheming.,It seems that it's a little tempting now.,Very promising.,It's just that this guy doesn't seem to know how to refuse girls? That's a lot of trouble.

The second male supporting actor to appear is Han Tieyi. Regardless of whether he has more supporters than Ruotian, there should be many people who think that this has a good chance to win the male lead. Personally, I don't like Han Tieyi very much, but it's not because he sold the heroine. In all fairness, the misunderstanding and conflict between these two people is simply a misunderstanding, and there is no question of who is right and who is wrong. The joy of the family mentioned by the general Xiaoyan is about the relationship between the two people, but how to say it, I just see that Han Tieyi's sex is not pleasing to the eye, but I think he must have a very good handsome face under the mask, haha, and the identity is not simple, just that momentum and those eyes, tsk! But with the personalities of these two people, if they are really together, they will have to be tossed.

Let's talk about the fourth Wu Qi first. The straightforward and proud Wu Qi also has some supporters, but, how do I think there is no ambiguous spark between him and the heroine... Sweat one first. Of course, this is just a personal opinion - and nothing is impossible, and we have to be convinced: JQ is everywhere! Well, I personally think that the relationship between him and the heroine is very natural, and it is the feeling of warmth between brother and sister. But the tacit understanding between these two people is really too good to say. In fact, I want to see that after the heroine's comprehensive value goes up, the two of them partner up to practice in retreat, and the experience of harvesting is absolutely nothing to say.

Finally, I am personally optimistic about the twenty-one strings. Although he has only made two appearances so far... Embarrassment. However, at the moment, this person is in the best condition. The vice president of the big guild, with a good voice (although I'm not voice controlled), seems to look quite demonic, and has a good personality and temperament - but it is not excluded that this guy is a knife type hidden in his smile, everyone should not forget his interesting gaze when he looks at the back of the heroine (belly black attack)! Well, there is a saying that curiosity is the beginning of motivation. I'm extremely excited to look forward to what kind of ambiguous sparks will burst out between the heroine and the twenty-first string...... But the premise is that there are enough scenes... Counted, this guy probably hasn't appeared in more than thirty chapters... And the heroine has no impression of him at all... But in my selfish heart, I don't want the heroine to get involved in the whirlpool of any guild, and the trouble of fighting for power and profit is definitely more than dangerous for the heroine who has no ability to protect herself. It's so tangled, it's tangled...

Although I am personally optimistic about Twenty-One Strings, since I read a certain crossing article, I have deeply and painfully understood a truth: the last one to appear is the big boss! So we have to know that we can't make up our minds until the end, and it's not possible to kill a ruthless character halfway... Maybe there isn't a male protagonist, after all, the current situation of the heroine is unknown, and she doesn't even know if she has a body, everything depends on how to develop in the future. Unconsciously said so much nonsense, well, that's probably it. In the end, I hope that the twenty-first string can play a little more... Hey.

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Where will Qin Zheng go home?

——Comment on "Selling Equipment All Over the Rivers and Lakes"

By—Watermark mm

"Selling Equipment All Over the World" has been chasing me since PK. I've watched a lot of online games for so long, and when I see that the first paragraph is basically out, I can roughly guess the follow-up content. In fact, many online game works are incompetent, and often after reading a book, they can't even remember the name of the protagonist, let alone the storyline. If it's still not over, it's almost impossible to turn off the screen without even thinking about it, and you won't think of collecting or even chasing and waiting for updates every day. Especially in the works of some male writers, the protagonist himself often has special abilities, and he can do whatever he wants. However, the article "Jianghu" gave me a lot of fresh feelings, and it is also one of the few online games that are still in my favorites.

Although the title is an online game, it is actually more appropriate to say that it is a time travel or "another world". As a killer of the Song Dynasty, Qin Zheng mm not only crossed over, but even the place she traveled to was not the real world, and more importantly, because of the similarity of the environment (it is still an online game with an ancient background), she didn't even realize that she was a consciousness (maybe a wisp of ghost?) that existed in a virtual environment. ）。 Such a setting is eye-catching in itself. After that, it develops step by step, and the story unfolds step by step in the game.

What attracted me most about this article was the unpredictability of the future. Often an online game work, if it is written by a male author, it will inevitably lead to the rapid development of the protagonist in it, what gang war, artifact, beauty; Martial arts cheats, point calculations, etc. are overwhelming, and then they will inevitably drive real life, exchange game currency for RMB, and finally make a fortune and return to the rivers and lakes.

If it is an article written by a girl, then the heroine will either have constant adventures; Either super lucky; Or meet countless beauties and make a name for yourself in the game with various abilities.

As for He Zao's article, after reading it for so long, I still can't predict Qin Zheng's return. Will she find out that this is a virtual world? Will she find her own way to survive in such a world? She didn't even have a purpose for herself, she just knew she was going to survive. Lift yourself up better. And how will those potential male No. 1 and No. 2 (I'm more cloudless, what a good child~), and how will they know and love a soul without a body in reality, and how will it change in the future? There are so many possible worries, and even make me worry about Qin Zheng, click on it early every morning to watch the update, and watch how such a strong and lovely girl can survive in a world that seems familiar but is actually unknown.

He Zao mm not only firmly grasped the hearts of the people in the plot, but also contracted freely in the control of the plot. If you look carefully at the title of each chapter, it is actually very ordinary words and sentences, unlike many works that make a big fuss about the title; The language depiction in the text is also smooth and straightforward, slightly witty. But often a moment of humor can be captured. For example, a while ago, when I went to the Happy Net and bought slaves from each other, the men sold the black coal kilns, and the women went to the bars to accompany the wine. So when I saw Qin Zheng throw her opponent into the black coal kiln, I would unconsciously smile. In terms of the main line, it is also changeable, and there are still many possibilities for the development of Qin Zheng mm. can have such control, in fact, it also reflects that the author has a lot of intentions in the text.

Where will Qin Zheng go home? The article is called selling equipment, this equipment is available now, how will it be sold in the future? With so many excellent ggs, will we have a perfect home in the end? Looking forward to the next update of Hezao, hurry up and change it~~ Who knows if you are as anxious as me?