I prefer "Cats" to "Jianghu". Tell you the truth, that one, don't hit me with tofu dregs.

The plot of "Cats" is still full of soft characters, I think so. The characters in it are full of personality and faction and identity, but the positions and contradictions of the characters are not very sharp. Friends are friends, there is no absolute crazy righteousness, and there is no stubbornness to think that friends are all right, and enemies are not good things. Let's talk about the young master in the characters, the first time I saw it, I didn't feel it, I went all the way, the second time I saw it, it was hateful, and the third or fourth time...... It's just that the more I look at it, the more pitiful it is, and then a little bit of cuteness (even if it's very unkind to the critically ill Sue)。。 Even have several kinds: Wen Feifei and Kong Rong. Although the methods of the bad guys are very bad, I like the main character, and even the bad guys in it like it together. I've read this three times and I don't get tired of saying that after half of the class rushed to turn it over, "Cat" was very tattered......

Let's talk about "Jianghu", I'm looking forward to it, slapping the table - how can the ban be lifted so slowly, I'm used to reading x stickers! Of course, if the book is published, I will still buy it like "Cats" to fill the shelves.

Left, left, dragged back - praise first, the article is very tense, the storyline is very emotional, the protagonist is dangerous, I will clench the mouse tightly, although I understand that it is my own mother early, I am still afraid that I will let July hang up if I am not careful. Then greet the night white or white night in my heart a hundred times, a hundred times.

But, I said why is this person so crippled (brain-dead)!! The strengths of "Cats" are all its shortcomings, see the first paragraph. The character setting is a bit rigid.,What do I think of July's friends.,Except for the star MM, they all seem to be men.,It seems that I appreciate July.,It seems that they're all desperate for July...... I think July should have a few dead friends, but can you not get tired of being together every day? and July's dating circle is too small, and it looks awkward, as if there are just a few people in the rivers and lakes. (Writing and writing suddenly realized, no wonder it looks a little awkward recently) suggests that big things happen more and the scene is more open.

Again, the night under BS is still white, although he has contributed a lot to the storyline of "Jianghu", but he is the most brutal (resolutely). If PK loses, he loses, and after a few days, his words will fade. But he always finds faults, for fear that others will not remember his defeat to July. How can a supporting character win the lead role? It's so self-aware. It's impossible for anyone's mother to be his own mother! The feud is quite excessive, I have long forgotten about him, he will either take revenge in ten years, and it doesn't have to be so obvious if he will repay the flaws, and it is okay to make a stumbling block at a critical moment, but he is so stupid and blatantly wants to kill July in broad daylight.

Also, it's rare for me to write such a long one, so I'll continue to talk about it more. Early, if you write about him as insidious or vicious, at least you have to treat women fairly! How can you write that most of the women who appear on the stage are brainless? It is not clear what the attributes of Xing MM are, and there are still a large number of people who know each other to find July's stubble for her. The goddess is brilliant, very good, very strong, and very short-sighted, and she fell in love with Han Tieyi, and then couldn't make a good deal with her friends in July, which is a bit of a pity. I strongly call for a chivalrous woman who can face feelings very chicly, and who is a bit of a veteran online game! You don't have to be antagonistic or befriend with the protagonist.,It's a person who has left the past tense and loves to gossip about her, it's very satisfying.。

The boundaries of the characters are too clear, either friends or enemies in July, and there are endless hatreds that come and go. Anyway, let's have something new, so that July occasionally impulsively robs (when there is a shortage of money, but now there are restaurants seems very unrealistic) to make a feud, instead of being passively victimized!

The foreshadowing can be deeper, like when I was forced to watch "Zero Ultimate Fantasy" last year, I felt that fireworks were more suitable for writing romance, and the online game was quite crippled, but I was desperate to find it, and I also found the advantages, such as what unknown objects were found at the beginning, and it was very late to discover the benefits of some unintentional actions in the front.

It's early, the way to take the task can be more bold and bizarre, I think since the relationship between people has ...... Now, just do a lot of tasks, and write the NPC deeply. Can you put aside the white or white night first, let him develop, don't keep mentioning him, let him go, or make my appetite easier, let the world of rivers and lakes bigger, let go of the endless "relationship" with the night or the night, and write more interaction with NPCs?

You can post a post specifically for funny quests or NPCs.

Okay, dizzy, away from my original intention, I was going to sing more praises to "Cats".

Let's see if I was moved by my love for "Cats" early on, or was I helpless to pick bones in the ribs of "Jianghu"?

It seems that the name that has never appeared at the beginning of the chapter goes and digs it wherever it goes

Okay, let's finally explain why pork ribs are because they are delicious, because I like them too!

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The help quietly sorted it out, added a title, and put it away ^^

Very pertinent long, hard work.

Well, I haven't been writing for a long time, I've only written three books so far, and there are a lot of shortcomings, everyone picks them for me, and I understand where the shortcomings are, and I can improve next time, so I can make progress ^^

In terms of characters, I also found that the polarization was a little stronger after writing, and the positions were very opposed, of course, there were some neutral passers-by, but they were not important supporting roles, and the impression would definitely not be deep. As for the female characters, they will appear later, although they won't be written in a big way, but they will be a little softer than the previous ones.

As for the shortcomings of the two characters, Half Moon Lotus and Scholar Yebai, I thought about it for a long time, and felt that it might be that I was too eager. Because my own style is tranquil and warm, the ups and downs of the plot of the whole article are not obvious, the climax is not strong, and some readers who are not used to reading plain texts may be drowsy and feel light and tasteless, so it becomes very important to create a little conflict. But perhaps it was because I cared too much and wrote about this conflict too deliberately, which led to the characters being greatly exaggerated and becoming very stubborn. Although there are many such people in reality, there is still a distance from most ordinary people, and you will feel a little crazy and distorted when you look at it. That's where I fail, and I'll learn from it.

The two characters of Half Moon Lotus and Scholar Yebai came as villains as soon as they appeared, but the original idea was that Half Moon Lotus should hide deeper, be smarter, find fault in secret, and keep the protagonist and male supporting characters in the dark. The scholar's night white should also become more slippery, and make it bad in the dark. But it may be because of my own personality, I don't like Qiao Duan who is holding his breath like this, when I used to watch "Heaven and Dragon Slayer" and saw Zhou Zhiruo's design to deceive Zhang Wuji, I hated the book so much that I couldn't read it, and I felt that there was a depression in my heart that was about to explode, so I simply didn't read it, and now it's my turn to write it myself, and I can't handle such a plot, and in the end, the bad guys are all bad on the bright side. Of course, this bad is also relative, which means looking at it from the perspective of the protagonist.

But for supporting characters like Wei Liang and Demon Sansan, I don't want to write them as bad guys, in fact, I don't think Wei Liang is bad, she just compares herself, and characters like Demon Sansan can also find a lot of prototypes in reality. I've always felt that human nature is complex, and it can't be completely bad or completely good, but probably because my pen power is not enough, and the outline is not in place, so that people don't think that these two characters are actually neutral, but look unpleasant and feel bad. Also, that, I just want to say that the female characters are not so crippled, but they are all written too straightforwardly, and there are not so many flowery intestines that go around...... Because I think it's an online game, many things don't have to be treated as cautiously as in reality, and then the more casual side of the characters comes out......

Well, in the end, I concluded that I didn't write much about the tasks of this book.,It's all about the entanglement and interaction of the characters.,Plus the book of the female frequency is not as long as the main station.,Millions of words are written.,You can open your horizons.,So it's too persistent to write grievances, and it seems that the protagonist's social and amusement circle is a little smaller.。 Although online games are online games,It's an online game with interaction.,Otherwise, it will become a stand-alone machine.,But in general, the part of my game is a little less ink.,Next time if I write an online game.,I'll pay attention to the above failures and improve them.。

You are welcome to keep shooting, but, shoot back, you still have to love me, quack, continue to read the books I wrote, and then continue to pat me...... If one day, I can write a book that I think is relatively perfect, it is all thanks to you ^^

Well, I will continue to work hard, not seeking perfection in one leap, I just hope that each book can improve a little bit, improve a little bit, and then be more attractive to everyone ^^

PS: That's what, the name of where you dig it has appeared, although only once, quack.