To be honest, I've been thinking about this book for the past few days.

When I first opened the book, I was in a hurry, and I started writing with a beginning and an end.

Because the idea is interactive, the middle content is not too deeply conceived.

Then last week I tried to get on the list of new books to get exposed, and I found that it was very bad, and then I immediately changed the introduction, and it still didn't improve much.

Effect Analysis:

The list of new books of normal works has increased by more than 200 per day;

The best-selling works of the Heat are on the new book list, and the increase will exceed 500

The new book list (book) of the works on the street < 100

This effect is separate and does not include the effect of the editor's advance recommendation, in fact, yesterday gave me a strong suspense score, and the increase in favorites is also lower than other averages.

And yesterday another book of mine was on the best-selling selection of the APP, which is a very high-exposure recommendation, and it has risen by nearly 10,000 collections in one day.

I also pushed this book in that book, and it ended up going up by 100 collections.

There is no doubt that there is a problem with this book.

A novel is not good, generally speaking, there are not many reasons, whether it is a bad title, a bad introduction, or a bad start.

At the end of the day, it's still not appealing enough.

That is, it is not good enough!

I'm sure many of the people you've seen are from psychologists, so you have expectations for Lao He.

So much so that everyone is also keen to participate in the interactive selection.

But the enthusiasm of old readers, if the quality of the work can't keep up, will slowly retreat.

And new readers will react very intuitively to whether the book is good or not.

I had been thinking about it at three o'clock in the morning last night, refining the highlights of the book, preparing to change the synopsis, and even asking the editor if it was necessary to change the title.

Later, after a lot of communication with the editor.

The following issues were found:

1) The beginning is too peaceful, and there is neither a strong conflict to open up the sense of expectation, nor the coolness of YY like fantasy works.

2) There is a problem with the layout of the main line, and suspense works must have clues, and this book does not seem to have this point, so that the plot is completely floating all the time.

It's like I'll have to give you a diary, a video, or a treasure map, so that everyone can follow the direction to explore and reason, and now the protagonist doesn't have this thing.

Of course, I don't have much problem reading it, after all, I also took a lot of effort to write, whether it is the dialogue of the characters, or the creation of characters, I don't think there is much of a problem.

But throughout the book, there is not a suitable rope that connects them,

3) There are risks associated with interactive groping.

In fact, in the current situation, I personally think that the interactive choice is successful, but I prefer the non-main line choice, and I gave everyone a few key choices at the beginning, causing the main line to fluctuate back and forth, which made a fatal mistake.

Foreshadowing, a big plot, there are a lot of arrangements that need to be arranged.

And let everyone choose, obviously, there is no way to carry out such a foreshadowing, and it belongs to where to go.

Many books will be cut on the grounds of bad grades, but in fact, a bad grade is just a score after the exam.

In the final analysis, there is a problem with the work, that is, it is not good-looking, or it is not good-looking, and I have always told myself that hitting the street has nothing to do with anything else, it is a problem of your strength.

There are many factors in this strength, the choice of the subject matter and the background world, the selection of the golden finger, the plot characters, and the content arrangement of the outline.

Although I am confident that I can continue to write a good plot in the future.

But the previous beginning was a hard injury, and it was destined to be congenitally insufficient, and now there are only tens of thousands of words, and changing the beginning is actually equivalent to rewriting.

Finally last.

The editor also gave some suggestions for reference, how to write a good suspense work, I think it is still necessary to reflect on it.

I'm really sorry, although when I wrote it, I was reminded that it was a ticket opening book.

But I also hope to be able to write well, and in the current situation, the opening is obviously not good, so I can only cut it in this position.

I'm very sorry, I also want to write it well, and I also spend money to promote it on the list, but the reality is not satisfactory.

Interactive highlights aside, this book is really not as good as it could be.

In the future, I will re-conceive a book, and it is possible to overhaul and change the title of the book directly, or to open a new book!

Sorry to disappoint everyone.

How dare men dare to admit it, this is my pot, the book of the nature of playing tickets has pitted everyone, everyone can complain to their heart's content, and if they are wrong, they must admit it.