The immortal Dao chief stopped for so long, and Lao Jiu always left a regret, after all, this story is not over.

The reason why I stopped writing is from a reader's comment. In fact, this review is quite admirable to the immortal Dao Chief, but it is the first volume that is highly praised. And the first volume was the first time in my life that I wrote about it

Say, in the third person.

Originally, the first volume was just an introduction, and I wrote it in the same way as in many movies, starting with a story from a few decades ago as the background, and then the main text. Why the first volume is in the third person and then after

The face is in the first person? This is still an inexperienced situation, because before I wrote the immortal Taoist, I had only read two novels, "Notes on Tomb Robbery" and "Ghost Blowing the Lamp". Everybody says this kind of text

You have to be in the first person to have a sense of substitution, so I used the first person.

After the adoption of the first person, because of the limitations of the first person and the patriotic death of the first volume, many friends abandoned the book. It's true that the third person will make it easier to describe the scene and render it easier

Some, it's too monotonous to have a one-person perspective in the first person.

In the description of Bai Xue, I borrowed the description of Tang Fang in Wen Ruian's "Wonder Men of China", but I didn't think that it was out of place now, and it was not the era when Wen Ruian wrote the book. again

In addition, after all, it was the first time I wrote it, so I didn't portray it too well, which caused disgust from many readers. Of course, everyone's appetite is different, and there is no dish in the world that can satisfy everyone's appetite. place

I don't bother with this anymore. It's just that this incident has shaken my confidence.

After the death of Aiguo in the first volume, I myself had many friends who didn't want to read it, so I did a lot of work, but fortunately, the stories in the later volumes were good, and this level passed. The next one leads to the abandonment of books and

The point with great repercussions was the death of the second senior brother in the Great Khan's Mausoleum. It also caused a lot of friends not to watch it. It can be seen that these two characters are still portrayed well. Although the effect is not very good, Lao Jiu is very proud.

Another point is the turn of the pen style halfway, in order to make the story more exciting, the immortal Dao Chang gradually turned from supernatural exploration to the fantasy direction, but this caused another point, that is, the protagonist Xiaoshuai is too weak,

The slow growth has caused many people to dislike the protagonist, but in fact, I don't think it is necessary to create an invincible protagonist. The protagonist of each story in each book should be different

Target. Although a lot of people who watched pirated versions gave a lot of bad reviews, I still didn't want the protagonist to grow too fast, after all, the background of the story is the current era, not an illusory background. It's amazing

This book is out of reality, so it's better to write Xianxia and fantasy, right?

It was difficult to reconcile the mouths, and I wanted to change each volume to a different style in the later stage, which caused the entire "Immortal Dao Chief" to become four dissimilar. I lost faith, so I stopped writing and focused on it

At work and at home, I gave myself a long vacation.

What now? "The Immortal Dao Chief" is like chicken ribs, tasteless to eat, and it is a pity to abandon it. But it was my first novel, and with the encouragement of some good friends, I wanted to finish it

。 Just from here, I want to change the later to the third person. This is also a practice pen for yourself. As for "Sending You to Reincarnation", it is not the eunuch that many people think, but that is just one in my heart

A good beginning of the story, so write it out first and put it there so as not to forget.

Finally, thank you for your support to the immortal Dao Chang, Lao Jiu will take the time to revise from the front, and then take time to make up for the story behind, as for when to start writing and updating, it's still there for the time being

Planned.

I just want to finish the story