"Who is it?" Ye Yi looked vigilantly at the place where the black shadow that flashed just now appeared.

The frozen Ye Yu is gone!

"Gone? Where did it go? Ye Yi looked around vigilantly, but unfortunately he didn't find the slightest abnormality.

A feeling of weakness continued to pass through his brain.

"I'm dizzy...... Are the after-effects coming again?! ”

This was the last thought in Ye Yi's mind, and his eyes were completely dark, and he fell to the ground unconscious.

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I don't know how long it has been......

The eyes blinked, a glimmer of light shot into the eyes, and the world turned white.

"What is this?" The brain is buzzing, and it seems that he is not awake yet.

Slowly getting up, Ye Yi was still looking blankly, surrounded by ruins, and he didn't know what was going on?

"Ruins?" Covering his forehead, Ye Yi seemed to think of something, but unfortunately he couldn't see it clearly.

Looking left and right, Ye Yi saw a woman on the ground not far away.

"What is this?" Curious, he walked over and probed tentatively.

"I'm out of gas!" Retracting his hand, Ye Yi looked at the female corpse on the ground and found that her heart and the surrounding area had completely turned to stone.

"Why do I feel familiar?"

"No matter, I have to go back." Shaking his head, Ye Yi, whose head was still aching, staggered away.

A few days later, Ye Yi reappeared in the crowded place, and he blended in the crowd, walking aimlessly.

"Where do I go? Where can I go? Walking in the flow of people, Ye Yi looked very confused.

“………………”

"Take it one step at a time, I don't want to go back now, because I always feel like I've lost something? When I find it, I'll go back! ”

……………… (Dividing Line)..................

Wang Yi looked at his work, the code word time came to an end temporarily, he checked the detailed data, and found that there were more than 140,000 clicks, but only a little more than 40,000 collections, and there were fewer subscriptions.

Works: Yin and Yang Yijun

Author: Yun Yizi

Hits: 148326

Collection: 41328

Subscribe: 21345

Recommended ticket: 234687

Monthly pass: 13147

Tip: 6318

"I'm very satisfied with this result!" Wang Yi pinched his chin and smiled contentedly.

"After all, I'm a rookie who has just written a book, and it can be said that I can have this kind of achievement, which can be said to be very good. After all, I don't have a high enough literary literacy, so I grow up slowly on my own. ”

"System, how about my first book? Whether the writing is good or not, now it's almost over, and I'm going to make a summary. ”

Asking the system in his heart, Wang Yi put forward a request: "The system, can you screen out all the criticisms in the reader's comment area, the comments that put forward opinions and suggestions for me, I haven't read the readers' comments carefully before, now take a good look, find out your own shortcomings, and give yourself a direction for progress." ”

"Okay! I'll do the screening right away, please wait! The electronic tone of the system replied.

"That's right! System. Wang Yi suddenly remembered something, and he hurriedly asked, "Is this charged?" ”

"No!" The system replied briskly.

"That's good!" Wang Yi said happily. "After reading these reader reviews, it's time for me to think about my new book. By the way, all the new forms of Psychic Fire in those books can be upgraded for me! The system, the fire of my heart. ”

"Okay! Upgrading the three new forms of Psychic Fire requires deducting the user's 3,000 points, is it confirmed? "The system is electronically prompted.

"Confirm!" Wang Yi replied affirmatively in his heart, and then he saw that his number of points was less than three thousand, and at the same time, three different forces converged on his heart.

The sound of the bubble bursting, Wang Yi felt that his body seemed to be a little different, but what happened to him, he was not clear for the time being.

"That's fine?" Wang Yi asked the system suspiciously, none of the special situations he made up in his brain appeared, and he thought that there would be a lot of specialness.

"Hmm." In his heart, the system replied lightly.

"I thought it would be any different?" Wang Yi muttered to himself in his heart.

"So what do you think will be different?" The system asks rhetorically.

"Uh......" Wang Yi was silent.

"Everything is too much for you to think about!" The system taunts mercilessly.

"It makes sense, I'm speechless." This is Wang Yi's last thoughts.

"Drop! Users, all the comments you need have been organized, do you want to receive them now? The system's familiar electronic tone sounded again.

"Yes!"

"While the information is in transit, please keep the connection and don't disconnect!" System alerts.

A stream of invitation was stuffed into his brain, and the huge amount of information made Wang Yi feel dizzy. "I'm a little dizzy, uncomfortable, and want to vomit! I didn't expect such a huge amount of information. ”

Wang Yi complained wordlessly.

Then, he carefully sorted out the information in his head, and then began to carefully review each item carefully.

Comment 1: Author, your story is so old-fashioned! Can it be a little new?

Comment 2: The plot drags on, is verbose, and the description is not in place, which feels so nonsense!

Comment 3: The plot makes people feel a little speechless, and the author's pen is not good, and the writing is immature!

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Comment 554: The protagonist is so naïve, can the author make the protagonist mature a little?

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Comment 713: The author is too slow to update, can you update it earlier?

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After spending a lot of time, Wang Yi finally read all the readers' reviews, except for some of the same suggestions and criticisms, Wang Yi found that his book really has a lot of problems!

"It seems that I still have a lot of work to do!" After sorting out the readers' opinions, Wang Yi slowly exhaled. "In the next book, keep up the good work! Strive to become a god as soon as possible! ”

In his heart, he constantly cheered himself up, and Wang Yi was full of energy.

But what exactly should I write in my next book? It has to be twisty and bizarre, but also more innovative! Wang Yi thought silently, his brows furrowed.

A few days later, Wang Yi finished his book, and then added a testimonial to the end of the book.

"Okay, I've finally finished my first book, what should I write next?" Touching his chin, Wang Yi thought.

“……………… Let me think about it and come up with a good idea. ”

Thinking about it, Wang Yi fell asleep in a daze, and in his dream, he heard a call.

"Who the hell is it? Who are you? Why are you calling me? Wang Yi's thoughts seemed to be a mess, and he was completely confused.

The next day, Wang Yi woke up, he was curious about the strange dream last night? "What the hell is it? Who's calling me out of nowhere? ”

At this moment, a flash of inspiration suddenly reminded Wang Yi that the same situation seemed to have occurred when he was in Wudang Mountain.

"Strange? Is it the same situation? I'll have to verify it. Sitting cross-legged, Wang Yi began to try to enter the state of heaven and man induction.