The third revision of the book
As of February 2019, this book has been revised for the third time under the suggestions and criticism of enthusiastic book friends, and the number of updates has decreased in the past half a month, the number of words has not increased, and the main focus is on the revision of the first 100,000 words.
The important changes that have been made so far are as follows: 1. The first person is changed to the third person, so that it is convenient to unfold the plot from multiple angles.
2. The previous situation is not clear, the plot jump is incoherent, and the details are not clear, and a major revision has been made, try to straighten out the logic, and unfold the previously obscure buried thread layer by layer, so that it is easy for readers to read; 3. There are too many descriptive words, the plot is not compact, and the third revision has removed 20,000 words
"Hydrology", more than 10,000 words were written to replace, and the text that I don't want to do with the development of the plot is basically removed;4, punctuation marks and rare words, before personal preference to use exclamation marks, enthusiastic book friends criticized that the exclamation marks are too much to make people nervous, bringing a bad feeling to reading, and now all have been modified, and rare words have also been transliterated and partially replaced.
Thank you very much for your support, I will definitely finish the first book with you, and have an explanation for the readers who support me.
Dear book friends, if you don't leave, I won't give up, even if I am the only reader 😘 left in the end
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