Beat the gong and drum,Gratifying,This book actually survived the second volume alive.,You know, I died in the second volume of the last book.,I didn't expect it to really come through...o And then as you can see.,The second volume of this book came to an end.,I think I'm okay to write.,It's average.,After all, the web text needs to be updated every time.,And there's no room for revision.,Resulting in a lot of things that can't be changed when they're written.。

Because I don't know how to write about these feelings, I thought of where to write, after all, I like to interact with the audience grandfather.

First of all, the abusive aspect, Lorenzo is so miserable, dead and alive, alive and dead.

In fact, my own understanding of abuse is.

Abuse that people don't like. This kind of I think is that the protagonist is frustrated in the process of reaching a goal, and in the end it is not completed, just like Li Zongsheng's song, but he can't get it, this kind of thing should be the most hated by everyone.

And one of the things I criticized the most in my last book was also the abuse of the master.

So in order to be sadistic and cool, I researched a protagonist who was frustrated in the process of arriving at one, but finally completed the goal, not only completed the goal, but also cut everything that got in the way on the way.

Judging from the feedback in this chapter, it is indeed feasible, and this kind of cool abuse is more acceptable to everyone, after all, who doesn't have a war damage macho man? It can be seen from the awesome sale of the battle damage Angel..o Let's go back to the protagonist's fight and kill along the way.,It doesn't feel like it's abusing the master.,Along the way and Lorenzo on the line are basically dead.,Those who didn't die are also half-dead.,It belongs to winning blood and earning.,Lose without losing.。

And then in terms of setting, in fact, the current setting of this book is also a little revealed, as I said, this is the intersection of two eras.

Some of the things I don't like very much are that there are a lot of settings that go beyond the world view, they appear too abruptly, the steam falls, and the new era is coming, all of which need a process of foreshadowing, and I think the foreshadowing is okay, so that the new settings are not abrupt and logical.

Of course, thanks to "The King of Light", the chariot that burns in the sky in mythology is actually an airship with four engine ports. I love the deconstruction of the elements.

There is also a feeling drama.

This is also a taboo in online literature, some brothers even directly wrote in the introduction that there is no heroine in order not to touch the emotional drama.

In fact, it is understandable, if it is well written, everyone likes it, and if it is not written well, it is literary, correct, and deliberately inciting, which will only make people feel disgusting..o So I write very restrained, as much as possible to restrain the expression of these feelings. So far, it's not bad.

There are also some weird backdrop settings.

For example, the protagonist got weapon A, not that weapon A, a long description of how good this weapon is), the result is just a flash in the eye, and it no longer appears in the later text, which is pure water word count, so at present, the weapon settings that appear in this article are actually used in the end, not the background board setting.

After all, this is a steampunk style, and steam is going to be done.

Then there is the arrangement of the combat power setting, personally, I like the battle of low magic, because the main reliance is not on superpowers, but on more variables, the weapons that appeared above, the venue of the battle, various factors can make the battle situation changeable, and it can also appear a little witty.

In fact, the trap in the last paragraph, I just want to write a sense of wit, but the feeling is still much worse.

Of course, the setting of the low devil will also make the story have more directions.,After all, the words of the high devil.,My language is a little lacking.,In addition to the two sides grinding each other out of the avenue.,I really don't know how to describe it.。

It's like the classic RG, fireball technique, big fireball technique, super large fireball technique, spiral red lotus burning sky and great flame explosion, etc., this is just a replacement of words, but it has no meaning.

There is no upgrade system, there is no solidified strength class, so that even if it is a dragon, as long as the bright blood bar will be knocked down by the battery, there is no absolute advantage, and ordinary people have a chance to resist in the face of forces beyond common sense.

I write wherever I want.

Of course, another point is that I often like to think about a problem that I like to think about is, how to use the waste superpower to play flowers.

There is also the characterization aspect, I hope to write characters with blood and blood, which is more interesting, otherwise it is like in some books, you can change the protagonist to a talking dog, and you can read it smoothly.

I need each character to have their own past and future.

Then it's about the next volume, and I expected to write a long book in the next volume, and put away a lot of foreshadowing, and then dig a bigger hole and expand the whole world even more, but I'm a little panicked, I'm afraid I can't control it, so I try my best.

And the next volume is likely to collapse.,After all, an excellent story.,To be able to infer its prequel from the existing article.,If that's it.,The next volume should be a prequel to this book.,There will be a lot of online taboo interludes and flashbacks.,I'll try my best to grasp it.。

There are also some problems of poor information, and I try to create a sense of suspense in this book, so many things cannot be named at first, and then someone will say where it is unreasonable...... It can't be helped.

Of course, there are a lot of online articles that I have touched this book, and everyone who can read this must be a fellow practitioner.

When this book was put on the shelves, it can be described as miserable and outrageous, about 150,200 orders, which is a hit in the online literature industry, and it can be regarded as a Shudra of online literature! But so far, with your support, this book has reached 860 orders, and there are two alliance leaders.

Do you know how bullish this is? If you don't recommend it, it's a great class leap, and you have risen from the people to Kshatriya, and I cried for you?

The recent situation is not very good, and when I have spare energy, I will add more as much as possible!

So thank you very much here.,Without your support.,Lorenzo might really be in the middle of the bombardment.,And then open a new book 2o That's it in the end.,In order to live up to you.,I'll think about the next drama.。

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