The first volume is over, I hope you will read it!
I want you to take a look!!!!!
The first volume is over.,Say something.,If you don't want to read it.,Just wait for the second volume for a while!
Some character settings, plots, will be said below.
From the prologue of 5.31, the first chapter, to the end of the volume of 7.6 today, for 37 consecutive days, I can responsibly say that I myself did not break the update.
The only day in the middle was 6.10, and the day was normally updated chapters 19 and 20, but because I wasn't feeling well on the first day, I drove the manuscript out early, set a time to send it, and went to sleep, because I was updated every day after 12 o'clock.
But because I'm not familiar with the writer's assistant, right.,20 chapters are wrong.,Send it out first.,So the time is 6.9 21.59.,And then I deleted it.,Change it to a timer.,Get up the next morning and look at it.,The time hasn't changed.,I learned later.,If you don't change the chapter that was deleted and reissued.,The time is still the first time it's sent.γ
I deleted it again.,Two re-sends.,Yes,I resent it for the third time and it hasn't changed.,20 chapters of time still haven't changed.,And the 19 chapters I hit the street.,It's okay in the morning.,It's yellow in the afternoonγγγγγγ
This became the first time in my writing career that I was interrupted and banned from pornography, although it was not my subjective will.
But it's not bad, I persevered, I have been working for 37 days, and when I was busy for a few days, I also made up for it afterwards, and I have written 170,000 words now.
Thank you for persevering.
And thank you to the people who have always supported me. I'm familiar with a lot of IDs.
Finally, thank you to my cold editor greatly, although I didn't reply anyway. But it still gave me a contract and put it on the shelves. Manually funny.
Let's talk about my update questions for the past two days. Because this one was put on the shelves quite suddenly, I didn't receive any news in advance, so I didn't prepare, so I only wrote three today.
I used to write very little during the day, usually at night, and there was no state to write during the day, so this thing was on the shelves relatively suddenly. The mental preparation is a little insufficient, and the thinking is a little not very good. And then add to that when I was writing this afternoon. The station that came suddenly said that chapter 52 was sealed. The mood was not good at the time.
I was going to see the fourth or fifth watch, but I couldn't write it, and I was annoyed there for a long time.
I really can't understand what those trolls think, first of all, from my standpoint, I write a book that I want to write, what I want to express, who I want, I will write. If you talk about Liu Yingying's problem, I will admit it, it was really inappropriate at the beginning, and the writing was not very good, so what do you mean by reporting me for being involved in pornography?
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What kind of book am I? Eschatological! Eschatological! Eschatological!
In the last days, fight monsters, upgrade and upgrade, and be brainless and finished? Do I need to add another one, more. I wanted to write about the dark point, the real point.
The previous 19 chapters,It's not in line with the policy.,I admit it.,I'm too lazy to change it.,Reduce the overall quality.,I can say it here.,There's my first draft of 19 chapters on the Internet.,I haven't changed it.,It's a little yellow.,But that's the initial effect I want.,It's even worse.γ
I'm not a little yellow writer, I don't have a stallion, I don't have a harem, I'm not a child, what is the most dangerous thing in the last days except zombies, human nature!
I don't mean to discriminate against women, when this kind of law is the strong, it's whoever has a hard fist and who is the boss, and women who don't have a skill will be bullied, it's normal, men are also bullied, just because the boss doesn't do it, so it's better.
Bai Shaohao appeared to describe that paragraph, and I brought out a homosexuality, do you think his men will be much better than these women? I even said that there would be a refuge in my plan that was similar to that of women's rights.
This is the end of the world.,If you write this kind of theme.,It's easy to write more realistically than other types of darker.,It's very obvious.,Please let me go.,I didn't ask you to see it.,I don't care what you want to reward.,The first on the reward list is my own number.,You have to find some stubble to come out, you go away.,Don't mess with me here.,This pornography.,That vulgar.,A last days.,Engage in culture with you here?
The more I think about it, the more angry I become.
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After the whining is over, wow, I will talk about the role positioning:
Like my very beginning, the heroine's personality positioning is in this aspect. I admit that it was not well written at first, and this character is not suitable for survival in the eschatological genre. But I didn't plan to arrange a fairy heroine for the protagonist who was fluttering and high up from the beginning, I just wanted her to change little by little. And I said, after all, it's my own article, I hope she is such a character. I want her to be kind, but to a certain extent, I don't think it's too much of a problem. It's not a so-called White Lotus or a Holy.
I think the White Lotus, the Holy is the kind that is very scheming, but pretends to be very kind on the surface.
But Liu Yingying is the kind who is very kind in nature, she can be very brainless and confused at the beginning, but slowly she will become the kind of kind and moderate person, like Zhao Qinchuan.
And before, when Liu Yingying appeared on the stage, when Zero drove him away, Liu Yingying cried and said that there was nowhere to go, this is indeed not my first draft, the first draft positioning I started, Liu Yingying is the kind of ghost horse elf, and the current one is changed later, because I think I can't control the ghost horse elf, and I hope that the two of them come together in a slow experience, not the one-sided Liu Yingying flirting with zero.
I see that someone commented that I, Liu Yingying, cried very poisonously at the beginning, and I couldn't look down, so I couldn't help it. I'm a single dog, and it's impossible to say that I understand girls too well, so I give Liu Yingying very few pictures, and I can see it in the early stage, right, there are very few scenes. But I think that in the opening background, a girl, her parents are all dead, lonely, let the zombies chase her, and finally meet a living person, and was beaten fiercely, scared to cry, incoherent is normal, 19, just an adult, the age of graduating from high school.
Maybe I'm a straight man, I can't change it, I can't help it. I started to position Liu Yingying's ability as a nurse, the kind that gives people back blood, which is more in line with the character positioning, and I have now changed her ability to a buff soldier similar to a buff. Liu Yingying will say this, okay, don't say more.
Hey, I actually stepped over the male protagonist, first talking about the female protagonist, uncomfortable.
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Zero X Zhang Wei
As for these two people, how to put it, they each account for half of my personality, and each carries some of my expectations.
Let's start with zero: First of all, I am cold on the outside, I don't like to talk, I am warm on the inside, I don't like to trouble others, and I like to pick things on my shoulder, these are all my personal characters. Then there is a good martial arts, a group of good friends, these are my expectations.
Zhang Wei: Ota, ordinary, is my characteristic, I am also a little fat, but not as fat as Zhang Wei (179,144 pounds), only one sister remains, and being good to my sister is my expectation. An only child is like having a sister, it's too lonely. When I came home for the Chinese New Year, I drank with my dad, and I said that I wanted three children in the future, a bunch of twin brothers, a younger sister, a boy with me, and a, but they all had to be good to my sister, these are digressions.
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Niu Ben X Xu Bin X Wang Yu
Niu Ben was the role I planned at the beginning, and among the first three sages, Niu Ben played a very heavy role, including the one-horned black bull awakened by Niu Ben, which was also very powerful in the future, and I buried it in the foreshadowing.
Xu Bin, this problem of playing with knives, because I have said, there is no boy's dream that he doesn't like swords, the chivalry of dancing knives, and the romance of playing swords, originally in my plan, it was another person who danced knives, and Zhang Wei slashed, a sword, but then the plot walked, and I found that Xu Bin woke up, and the left-handed knife was not bad, and the little brother who originally planned to be a merry swordsman in Hanfu was so castrated.
Wang Yu, I'm still quite sorry for him, I was the first person I officially wrote to death, and I also made up a role for him alone, and then I wrote deathγγγγγγ
It's also a matter of plot development, I felt that I needed to die at the time, and I thought about it for a long time and died Wang Yu.
These three people also contain some of my characteristics, Niu Ben's emotional impulse, Xu Bin's personality fusion afterwards, and Wang Yu's honesty are all my personal experiences.
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Old wolf X Zhao Qinchuan
Old wolf: This person is from a poor background, but he knows how to be grateful, he is good to his brother, good to his subordinates, and not so good to women, but he will not bully women, and he is reasonable and well-founded. At the beginning, I also wrote that tigers and wolves are not good things, but then I wanted to twist the old wolf into a play, so I changed the previous one, and now only the tiger itself is not a good thing.
Zhao Qinchuan: Good and moderate, as soon as this person appeared, what I focused on portraying was his kindness and degree, not blindly good, not imitating Tang Seng.
The above eight people are my current main characters, in fact, there is a Bai Shaohao, but Birdman has no role recently, so I won't write about him first, and I will open a special show for him later.
Liu Yingying herself has seven people behind her, including the protagonist, and I am also drunk.
But seriously, I just hope that in each character, everyone who watches can find a trace of their own shadow. There are a thousand Hamlets out of a thousand people, and I think the same is true for every character, and I hope the same is true for those who read my books
There are also middle-level characters and small characters in my book, many of which will be a little foreshadowing. This is what I hope to write, little people also have little people's way of living, Lu Hua'e with a name, Liu Jianren, a mouse, a "hero" Li Hu, a naΓ―ve brother with three sons, four sons, a ruthless man with no name, and a little minion who is blind to sycophants. The rivers and lakes are varied, and life is different, that's what it looks like.
Someone once suggested that I don't write so many characters, I'll think about it, I really can't control it if I have more, and the protagonist's team is really not in the climate now, and the current people may not follow, and they won't necessarily add anyone in the future.
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Plot Direction Questions:
First of all, the main story, it's zombies, no problem. Fighting monsters and leveling up is also normal.
As for the branches, there are some details interspersed in the middle.
The whole book, written until now, I guess you don't think what is the hardest thing I portrayed?
It's the song at the end of the first volume, 70 chapters.
This song is going to run through the whole thing in my plan, I won't say much about the specifics, but this one took a lot of effort, I have been planning this song since I started writing the first chapter, and I have changed many more versions until the last chapter is written today.
Referenced in the middle, Overture to the Dead, Black Fridayγγγγγγ I just want to write a song with a main theme that is more sad, weird, but not so terrifying, it's just something that people listen to and will evoke in their hearts.
Including the manuscript of today's 70 accounts, the final draft has been changed in several places.
Just forgive me for my talent, I can only write to this extent, and I have changed it many, many times.
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Plot length issues
I'm just a novice, I don't have the overall outline of the gods, tens of thousands of words, I just have a main line.
The main line is divided into volumes, and what needs to be done in each paragraph, I will plan it when I open the book, and I will bury the foreshadowing that needs to be unraveled later.
But sometimes some sudden ideas are added, so the plot is prolonged.
Like when I had more than 30 chapters before, I said once that about 50 chapters end in one volume.
But after going to the shelter for the first time, the rat led the mutated zombie to sneak attack the garage of Niu Ben, this was a temporary idea, and the old wolf who wrote it at the time said, the zombie mutation, that is written casually, you can't let the zombie never evolve, right, and then the mouse went to fight the old cow, and the two sides were together, just right, a large new plot.
There is also the part where I went back to kill the tiger, and then the zombies besieged the shelter, which I added temporarily. At that time, Zhang Wei Sword Immortal awakened, Liu Yingying had a tendency to awaken, but she didn't awaken, these were originally what I wanted to put in the second volume, why put it here, I will say in the combat power evaluation part of this book.
Little Red Riding Hood: This character, wow, it was really written early, I didn't expect me to add so many plots later, otherwise I would have played a long time ago, and now there is no suitable opportunity for the best, and now the third is in the second volume, and it will be very soon.
Finally, this is this, Lu Hua'e's plot, originally wanted to be placed at the end of the first volume, but in the end, it ended with the beginning and end of the dark song, which I set, I can't change it, there is no place to put it, I have to race Lu Hua'e's plot, I have to water a chapter of 3000 words, I don't want water, so I didn't do it, I can only put two volumes. So the beginning of the second volume is connected to the first volume, otherwise I think it's actually better to get off the joint.
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Word count:
The first 2000 words, to the current 3000 words, I don't think I'm in hydrology, because I don't make money with this, what I write is what I think, so there is no hydrological problem, the beginning of the plan is to start with two volumes or start with more 3000 on the shelves, because the previous chapter of more than 2000 words is just right, and 3000 will get water. Later, I thought I could handle it, 2000 is sometimes not enough to write, I started 3000, and it turned out to be not bad.
Don't worry about hydrology, I don't think hydrology, because there is no economy involved.
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The Problem of Balance of Forces:
First of all, since I'm writing a book I want to write, I don't want the main character to be the only one.
I want the protagonist to have friends, and the protagonist can be the strongest in the world in the end, but he was also an ordinary person before and needs help from others.
It's not the kind of guy who blows up the sky as soon as he comes up, he doesn't pretend to be forced, he doesn't breed horses, he doesn't have a harem, this is what I said a long time ago.
There's no gold finger at the moment.,It may be a little strong at the beginning.,Fu Mo is also sharp.,The level of fighting is also high.,But it's not that outrageous.,First of all, the length of Fu Mo is a problem.,The length I designed for him wasn't meant to make him comfortable.,It's also a foreshadowing.γ
And then there's some fighting, and the physical fitness is good, but it's only when I started fighting ordinary zombies, and I can already see it recently, I'm injured every day, if it weren't for my good physique, I would have been able to kill people a long time ago. If you want to say that the protagonist has a good physique, that is, a good physique, I did write about this earlier, and the physique is good.
Beat Bai Shaohao, Bai Shaohao didn't pretend to be forced, fried ashes to play, and Zero died early. Fighting mutant zombies, without Niu Ben as meat, he died early.
Understand, my protagonist is okay, I didn't say how strong it was, I haven't awakened yet, and I'll say two things after awakening.
There's also the question of the truth level of the saint and the zombie.,This is a must-have.,Otherwise, it can't be divided.,The protagonist team in one volume is ignorant.,The second volume is about to start the systematic introduction of combat effectiveness.,It's going to be soon.γ
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And then there are some bits and pieces:
Supporting roles: Some of the IDs that I am familiar with will be added to the supporting roles with heavier roles, which can be regarded as some of my feedback and gratitude. If you want it, you can also say it in the comment area, you can give it if you have me, and I want to save my name, I'm an idiot together. When playing games, you press the keyboard blindly, and what you press is nothing.
Language: In the last days, my heart is too brittle, I'm sorry first, I have some very abusive things behind me, I have been in my mind for months, that is, I am full of writing, if I were 100,000 words a day, I would have done it a long time ago.
Recommendation: I don't force everyone to do this, and I've never said that I would let you give me a ticket, right? I started writing what I thought, not for anything else, the source of the idea of this book is the dream I sat in a few times, and some people and ideas that I was thinking about, I wanted to record them, it's as simple as that. So I send recommended red envelopes, or red envelopes on the hour, including many of my current people who should be left by the red envelopes on the hour, but I'm just to increase some audiences. It's like I've never been to any circle and pushed a book or anything by myself.
I think that good is good, if I see something good, I will spontaneously recommend it to others, I think it is not good, I am not interested, I will not pay attention, that's all. Like many new writers nowadays, they push themselves in various circles, and it's useless if you can't stick to it in the end. Including me, even if it is launched, I can attract a lot of people with a red envelope on the hour, but I can't keep it, I just can't.
In my bookshelf, mystery, first sequence, poisoned milk, aren't these good? I don't need to push these things, everyone knows that it's good, it's the same, writers are like this, I also think, and I also hope that in the future, someone will take the initiative to think that my writing is good, instead of me pushing around.
I think that good books, I can push them without any compensation, or whatever, in the same way, I don't like them, I can't push them with my conscience. At the beginning, there was a person who was much better than me, I admit it, and kept telling me to let me order all his books, and he gave me chapter pushes, and when I put them on the shelves, he supported them. I didn't speak, because I didn't like it, and I knew it myself when I didn't write well, and it was useless to push me.
I never asked anyone to subscribe for me or anything, and my friends and family only knew that I wrote books, but I didn't say anything after they asked a lot, and now two friends know about my books because I want to be on my own.
Similarly, some time ago, there was a female frequency comment on me, so I went to her to take a look, I looked at two, I thought it was good, I said that I Liu Yingying wrote it is not good, so I will go to the female frequency in the future, although she didn't vote for me, but I voted for her every day, and I didn't talk to her, it's as simple as that.
After I read more, I think she writes well, and I will also say to me, good is good, and I don't need to rely on anything to exchange it or something. Of course, that's after that, I haven't read a few chapters yet, so I'll talk about it later.
I think my collection of books, secrets, sequences, poisonous milk, are all good books, and people don't need me to push them, so that's all.
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That's it, I've written more than 5,000 words, and I'm about to catch up with two 3,000 chapters, so I still have a lot of things to say, but let's do it first.
In the end, I still say sorry.,Because I don't rush the first order or something.,Plus the plan for the past two days has been a little disrupted.,I was reported in the afternoon and blew up the mood.,Today there are only three watches.,I originally wanted to have four more.γ
3000*3,9000, you just write 2000*4 when I write, and I'll talk about it tomorrow, good night, everyone, good dreams.