So, "Overwatch" is finally completely over. Pen, fun, and www.biquge.info

I don't want to say whether it's a success or a failure, but at least it's a story that I want to tell. But to be honest, Overwatch has received a lot of criticism, many times to the point where I almost want to give up. But I'm still insisting that at least the story be told in its entirety.

If the first part of "Overwatch" is a war around the core of Black Sun, then the second part of "Overwatch" revolves around the intrigues between Peacock and Shimada Ryuya respectively. So, in fact, there are a lot fewer big scenes in the next part.

Moreover, this part also exposed a lot of problems in my writing, writing, and experience. If I were to rewrite Overwatch now, I would probably be able to reduce the word count by about a third. Because when I re-read this section myself, I did feel that the amount of information contained in each chapter was too small.

This made me directly feel that the plot in many places was a little unpushable, and it was very tiring to write it myself. So, there's so much I need to improve on that front. At this time, I found that Jin Yong, as a generation of masters, can depict a martial arts picture scroll with ups and downs in hundreds of thousands of words, while I can only write one stage in hundreds of thousands of words. The gap is too big.

However, the reason why the second part of "Overwatch" is longer is also because there are too many characters described in it. Among the ten ninjas, except for the four guards and the six guards, the others have some space to describe. This has made me struggle painfully when I want to shorten the length and write the plot completely. So a lot of things still don't work out in the end.

For example, I originally wanted Hanzo and Genji to fall in love with peacocks at the same time, and then there was a conflict. But in the end, this plot ended after Genji's confession to Peacock, because if this plot unfolded again, it really couldn't be contained.

So to sum it up, I'm very satisfied with the first part of Overwatch, it's relatively compact. I can only say in the next part of "Overwatch" that I am very satisfied with the design of this plot, but I have thought too much, even too much, so that this chapter is too scattered and too slow.

Therefore, it is necessary to make your language concise, which is the first thing that needs to be improved. In addition, it is also necessary to avoid the multi-clue approach of the next part of "Overwatch" in the future plot design. This is the second one that needs to be improved.

However, in the next part of "Overwatch", I am still relatively satisfied with the characters portrayed. Peacock, D.VA, Nine Soldiers and Ten Soldiers, as well as Shimada Ryuya and Zhang Feng. I also used a lot of pen and ink to portray the characters of these people, and in the end, the characteristics were more distinct.

Then there's the question of D.VA.

Actually, it was decided a long time ago to give D.VA a bento. She must be a woman who is going to appear in the early days of Tang Yu, because in the later stage, her ability will be very embarrassing.

On multi-line operation, on reaction speed, on operation speed, can it be compared to a computer? In fact, after Tang Yu installed the photon computer in his brain, his combat power exploded a few streets D.VA. In this case, I also have to take care of the number of appearances of the D.VA, so that she has some records and does not become a vase, which is really difficult.

So you can imagine how embarrassed she would be if she brought D.VA back as 'L'. The most likely outcome is a person who sweetly says "Husband, you're back!" every time you go home! "Then let's start the snapping RBQ.

It would be a very cruel thing to leave her in the world of ten years ago. Because she will see another D.VA grow up slowly, enjoy a happy life that she did not have, become a big star, and take away all her previous halo. This feeling is more terrible than killing her.

As a result, D.VA vanished, but some of her memories affected the D.VA of this timeline, and the two somehow merged into one was the best outcome.

So that's all I have to say about Overwatch, Philips blades, give me a dozen firsts.

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Then it's time for the extras to be on camera!!

Character 1: Hank

Actor: Book friend - Uncle Zhang

Xiaojing: So Uncle Zhang plays Hank! In the first part of the watch, he became a soldier 77, and he also stood firmly behind Jack Morrison! He made appearances in both the Battle of Sejong's Laboratory and the Battle of Incheon. And in the next part, there are not many scenes, but it is also dutiful to protect the envoy Rogge, what do you want to say about this journey of Overwatch?

Uncle Zhang: It's just unwilling to be in the Resident Evil Raccoon City action, only this one is the protagonist, and other Resident Evil series are soy sauce, so I suggested that the author add such a trick, and I'm also very satisfied with Overwatch, Blizzard's work, so I've always wanted to explore its background story, but unfortunately Blizzard may only be a trial of an FPS game when this game comes out, and the background story is limited to a small part of the elaboration of each character, In addition, there are no official novels or comics about Overwatch, so thank you to the author for giving me this opportunity to make up for some of my regrets.

Xiaojing: So the prototype of this Hank is the fourth survivor in "Resident Evil 2", the Grim Reaper Hank (Hunk)! However, because of the plot, this character is more like a veteran. There is still a gap with the image of Hank, the god of death.

Uncle Zhang: It doesn't matter, I was a long time ago, I had to choose between Master Chief and Hank in the Delta Special Forces before I gave Hank this answer. I'm very happy to be a part of this story!

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Character 2: Zhang Feng

Played by: Book Friend - Arms Detroit

Xiaojing: And then there is the bad Matsushima Kaede in this plot, oh no, it's Zhang Feng's words~~~ As such a big villain, what do you think?

Arms detroit: I was originally content with a trick and I was still very happy to suddenly become a villain with a plot in the world.,I'm still very fond of the author's setting of Peacock and his own innovation.,After all, reasonable innovation is the interesting point of infinite flow.。

Xiaojing: But I'm asking Zhang Feng!

Arms detroit: My evaluation of this trick plot, a very normal villain, but I feel the deep malice in Zhang Feng's final ending. Haha, but I'm still very happy to read the novels I participated in, and I will always support the author.

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Role 3: Martin Hralfo

Played by: Book friend - Asphyxia - suffocation

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Role 4: Zhou Qing

Actor: Book friend - Zhou Young

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Interviews with the above two characters, wait for them to organize the language and put it later!

Then, "Infinite Legends: The Mechanic" is about to enter the next volume, and the promotion battle !!

PS: This chapter is free.