"Nightclub" is a movie script, this movie really has little to do with "nightclub", this name belongs to rubbing the popularity of nightclubs, it is somewhat undisciplined, it is easy to make people have that kind of association.

It's like the current KTV, what happened here, this is the nightclub, but unfortunately, the movie "Nightclub" is simply selling dog meat on the head of a sheep, and if you want to see what happens in the "nightclub", there is no possibility to see it in this "Nightclub".

To be honest, it's a bit winding, but the reality is like this, this book, this film, Bai Shiqiu almost knows its content just by looking at the name, this film is still very famous.

Thinking of this, Bai Shiqiu glanced at Yang Qing, who was still a little embarrassed just now, he is the biological father of this work, but what really made this Yang Qing famous, Bai Shiqiu remembered that it was another movie, called "Hot Pot Hero".

Of course, as long as everyone in the circle understands that the success of this "Night Club" led to the later "Hot Pot Hero", this is an inevitable process, but seriously, in Bai Shiqiu's opinion, he feels that the later "Hot Pot Hero" is not as good as this "Night Club".

I really don't mean to elevate anyone, because these two films are both a director and a screenwriter, and they are both Yang Qing's own works, but Bai Shiqiu personally likes it more, that's all.

Maybe it's because the investment in this "Night Club" is too small, it is rumored that it is only no more than 5 million, and you must know that this is still counting Xu Zheng's self-depreciation...... Glancing at the bald old driver, he was smiling and stretching his hand to a piece of meat of a beautiful girl, holding the microphone in the other hand, not to mention, he sang well.

It's not pity, there really is no such factor, it's just that Bai Shiqiu simply thinks that this "Night Club" is good, he really likes it, this will be a ...... What if we Red Star did it? What if I'm an old white star?

Thinking of this, Bai Shiqiu suddenly felt a little regretful, because in this movie, it is difficult for him to play the main role, he will have a cameo at most, and even a cameo is not good, because it will make people very dramatic, for example, there is a taxi driver in the plot of the movie, is Bai Shiqiu an old driver again?

Fang Wen messed in?

No, it's really not good, it's really a pity.

glanced at Yang Qing again, this junior brother, he is indeed a talented person, it seems that he is older than himself, but after all, he entered school later, and the current one is drinking there, and he was a little cramped at first, but under the influence of a group of senior brothers, he slowly let go, and also hugged a sister.

Our movie isn't about 'nightclubs'.

"Big brother, my ...... I ......" Bao Qiang on the side was a little weird at this time, and his eyes were quite dizzying, after all, this scene was really good-looking.

"Just look."

"Well, I don't touch it."

"For your own good."

"Big brother, you are a good person!"

"I'm an honest man."

"Then I'm going to be an honest man!"

Bai Shiqiu is protective of Bao Qiang, after all, this kid hasn't been dyed too much at the moment, although, in this scene, he played the first movie "Blind Well", he has already done it.

But when he heard that Bao Qiang also wanted to be an honest person, he had a strange feeling, shouldn't he let this guy be too honest?

Let him also learn badly?

"Done? Haha......" Xu Zheng was also serious at this time, gave up the milk in his hand, and came over directly and patted Lao Bai's shoulder with this hand, "How is it?" How about this script? Isn't it good, haha......"

Bai Shiqiu looked at his shoulder, he was afraid that he would not be able to speak clearly after he went back, what if there was a suspicious liquid on it?

"This book.,That's good.。

The word good came out of Bai Shiqiu's mouth, and it attracted much attention.

"Wow! Lao Bai said it was good. ”

"This is awesome, Xiao Yang, you are going to fly now."

"This, really?"

Yang Qing drank a lot, and then seemed to be integrated into this big family, yes, everyone came out of Chinese opera, and they may not have been familiar with it before, but when they talk now, they will immediately remember all kinds of past events.

Xu Zheng added oil and vinegar here, "Lao Bai, I thought it was good when I first saw this kid, I liked this book very much when I saw it, you see, my vision, is it amazing?" ”

Xu Zheng and Bai Shiqiu are really familiar with each other, and they both set off with him Lao Bai, but Bai Shiqiu wants to do something at this time.

"It's not bad, it's good, but I just said it's good, if this book wasn't for Brother Xu, you saw it, and if you changed someone else, I dare to say that I wouldn't get a penny." Bai Shiqiu put this notebook on the table, looking a little like a fall.

Less than a penny, what does that translate mean?

It's worthless!

Yang Qing's face, which was originally very excited, seemed to be directly poured with a bucket of ice water airlifted from the Arctic Ocean.

And at this time, when the other elders saw it, they all helped to speak.

"Lao Bai, what's wrong with you? It's not good. ”

"Yes, Lao Bai, you're not right, Yang Qing is our classmate, so you have to give some face to the book."

"That's it."

Big guy, you say a word to me.

It's a pity that Bai Shiqiu was unmoved, just aimed at Yang Qing with his eyes.

Xu Zheng suddenly understood at this time, "Oh, I'm to blame for this today, I was already thinking about it, my brothers came to my place, if my old Xu didn't invite my brothers to have a good time, it would be too much to say, in addition, this book is called "Night Club", which is just in line with today's place, haha...... Actually,It's really my fault.,I really didn't expect Lao Bai to dislike this kind of place.,This.,The previous name of the book was "Supermarket".,I think,The supermarket has no impact.,That's why I changed the name.,Haha...... In this way, it's all my brother's fault, I'll punish myself for three cups, hahaha......"

The old driver is the old driver, everything is wrong with himself, and he thinks simply, I am afraid that Bai Shiqiu has a good relationship with Xiao Taohong, they are both called sisters and brothers, Xu Zheng, who is a brother-in-law, took his brother-in-law out to make a fuss, and the brother-in-law is afraid that he wants to play with integrity.

But this is not right, I have heard it for a long time, Bai Shiqiu, this kid is also not good......

It must be said that Xu Zheng's idea is somewhat close, but not all, Bai Shiqiu came directly, "Don't worry about drinking, Brother Xu, do you really think this book is very good?" Is it perfect? ”

The words were said to Xu Zheng, but his eyes kept on Yang Qing.

"This ......" Xu Zheng was about to speak, but Yang Qing couldn't help it.

"Senior brother! I'm not bragging, but I at least think that the book I wrote is definitely not bad, and it is definitely heartfelt! Senior brother said that this book is worthless, and I can't accept it! ”

These words were very impulsive, and Yang Qing's personality leaked out at once.

The character is out, but the atmosphere is also awkward all of a sudden.

"Oh, ah, what is this doing, haha......" Xu Zheng knew that he was going to have bad dishes, so he hurried over to play a round.

"That's it, that's it, we're all classmates."

"What the hell is going on, it's weird all of a sudden."

The other old ones, who also came to help, seemed to be going to return to the previous state.

However, Bai Shiqiu sneered: "What if I can find fault? ”

As soon as these words came out, everyone understood, it turned out that Bai Lai was going to suppress Yang Qing.

Xu Zheng suddenly felt a little scary, he said in his heart, how did this old white know that Yang Qing's personality was very impulsive......

Yang Qing is not a fuel-efficient lamp, don't look at his age, but his personality is very angular, this "Night Club" is because he was fed up with sulking in a certain crew, and then he held it back, and he wanted to show his unique talent in the work.

This has a breath of its own.

When I handed Xu Zheng the notebook, it was a little restrained at first, but after that......

Xu Zheng thinks that this talented person is always a little different, such as himself, who looks like a boring honest man on the outside, but in fact, he likes to come out and make trouble, this ......

Xu Zheng thinks it's nothing, Yang Qing's character is a good thing, but if you want to introduce it to Bai Shiqiu, Bai Shiqiu is also a young and vigorous guy.

If you want to say the word arrogant, I'm afraid most people in China know how arrogant Bai Shiqiu is, right?

is already famous, so if Bai Shiqiu is against Yang Qing, it would have been a good thing, wouldn't it be ruined?

Therefore, Xu Zheng arranged today's case, especially his mother Sang's side, who had already said hello, but she came beautifully.

Unexpectedly, it still made the atmosphere scold.

"That's good! Senior brother is such a powerful character, we all know it, then ask senior brother to find a fault, as long as it makes sense, I, Yang Qing, am absolutely convinced, and even kneel down and call twice. "Yang Qing is this character.

Everyone else didn't dare to speak, how could they not know that there was such a short-tempered junior brother before?

The key is to feel that this Yang Qing is also a little expert in pretending.

And Bai Shiqiu smiled slightly: "Okay, then if I can't make you feel reasonable, I'll kneel down and call twice." ”

"Awesome! Senior brother, you are awesome! Yang Qing gave a thumbs up directly, but in fact, this was a provocation.

"Brother!" Bao Qiang next to him was scared, what happened to his eldest brother? Big brother is a good person.

But Bai Shiqiu was unmoved, and continued to smile and said: "Your "Nightclub" should be borrowed from "Crazy Stone", right? ”

When Yang Qing heard this, he immediately nodded, "That's right." ”

That's true, just because I watched "Crazy Stone" Yang Qing wrote "Night Club", that's it.

But the plot is a lot worse, but the style and technique are somewhat similar, multi-line staggered development, it looks a little messy, but it can be understood neatly.

Bai Shiqiu pointed it out at once, but this was not the fault he wanted to find, just heard him say: "The plot, in fact, is two waves of robbers, the first wave of the water brother, he is actually a good person, and the second wave of jewelry robbers, he is the real villain, and in one of the episodes, your arrangement is, one is called' The supermarket employee of the waist, he is a delivery man, but he likes to play games all night on the Internet, this person slept in the back after the delivery, and when the real bad guy came out, he woke up and came to fight this bad guy, right? ”

"That's right! Senior brother is awesome, just take a look and remember it. Yang Qing still gave a thumbs up, but it was obviously not sincere.

Bai Shiqiu didn't mind, and continued: "The problem is here, this waist appears too abruptly. ”

But at this time, Yang Qing smiled, "Haha...... Senior brother, didn't you pay attention to it, the character of the waist was mentioned at the beginning, and the heroine said that this person was driving a delivery car, and the car was parked there, but the person was gone. Can this be explained? ”

Obviously, Yang Qing was full of ambition at this time, and he felt that this senior brother Bai Shiqiu was just a waste of fame.

"Not enough." Bai Shiqiu said flatly: "It's not enough at all, it's very irresponsible to explain the character of the waist in this way, and it will make the audience can't understand it, you think this is clever, but in fact, this is a big mistake." ”

"What?" Yang Qing was unhappy, "How can this be a big mistake?" Where's the rule? Where is the truth? ”

"Hehehe......" Bai Shiqiu smiled: "Van Dyne, have you heard of it?" ”

"This ...... Heard. Yang Qing hesitated.

Bai Shiqiu continued: "Van Dyne, a famous detective and theorist, he has twenty rules about detectives, and you have violated one of the important rules. If, let's look at the appearance of the waist as a detective reasoning, then, you did explain this character before, but this character is very unclear, just talked about in a few words, the most important thing is that the word waist is not a name, and later, he suddenly appeared, as if the murderer in the reasoning appeared, but he didn't show up at all before, isn't this abrupt? Do you want fans to go back and watch it? Or how much time are you going to spend introducing the ins and outs of this waist? ”

Van Dyne may not be a playwright, but there are many of his theories that can be applied to script creation, especially in the current genre, whether it is "Crazy Stone" or "Nightclub", both of which have the characteristics of a cult film, and pay attention to a plot that is unexpected but reasonable.

Unexpectedly, of course, it has to be done according to the detective's technique, and many detectives are also easy to be adapted into film and television dramas, so this mistake is almost unforgivable.

"......" Yang Qing's mind was sweating at this time, it was useless for him to be hard, it was indeed a little abrupt in this place.

When everyone saw it, most of them understood in their hearts, what about it...... You Yang Qing still lost Lao Bai's hand in pretending to be forced.

This Yang Qing couldn't hold back in the end, and immediately said to Bai Shiqiu: "Senior brother, I was wrong!" ”

After speaking, he was about to kneel, but suddenly, Bai Shiqiu grabbed him.

"This book is very good, and I can find such a fault."

What is the ...... Isn't it a peak and a loop?

Xu Zheng was happy when he heard it, "Hahaha...... Lao Bai, you kid is playing high! Scared my brother to death. ”

So what about it......

"Welcome Senior Brother Yang Qing to join us Red Star." After speaking, Bai Shiqiu stretched out his hand.

With these twists and turns, Yang Qing burst into tears when he shook hands......