Doctor Shao's eight-hundred-word article, after he changed it like this, he saw that the paper was full of vermilion 'color'.

"Copy it again according to the scarlet letter, and I will explain the grammar to you again." Imperial Physician Shao returned the article to Xiangru, and Xiangru immediately copied it back.

After copying the full text, Xiangru compared it with the original text, and was surprised to find that this feeling after reading was compressed by half of Taiyi Shao, many of her long sentences were condensed and refined, and there were no words left in the whole paragraph, and the meaning she originally wanted to express was fully reflected in those words, and Shao Taiyi made a lot of sentences against the battle, which was catchy to read, and the emotions between the lines were rich, which was a masterpiece.

If this is the level of essays to be achieved in the exam, Xiangru thinks how many essays she has to practice writing to meet this requirement?

Scratching her head and stabilizing her emotions, Xiangru 'handed over' the re-copied article to Imperial Physician Shao.

"Teacher, I'm done."

"Let's put it down, take a break, we'll eat right away, and we'll have another class in the afternoon."

Doctor Shao's plan is quite good, but the plan always can't catch up with the changes, just after lunch, a cup of new tea is in hand, a little eunuch outside hurriedly came in to spread the word, and the old lady of a certain family outside the palace urgently called Doctor Shao to ask for peace pulse. As soon as Imperial Doctor Shao heard that it was his old patient, he immediately put down the teacup and got up to prepare, and directly gave Xiangru a half-day vacation.

"I may come back late in the afternoon, so I'll go to class here today, you go back and read the poem a few more times, if you don't understand, ask your master, and then write a review and give it to me tomorrow."

"Yes, teacher. The teacher walks slowly. ”

After Imperial Physician Shao left with the 'medicine' box, Xiangru cleaned up the environment, the tables and chairs were returned to everyone, the poetry collection and articles were put into the bookcase, and Xiangru then left.

When I returned to the 'female' medical hall, the doctors and wives were already resting, Xiangru was not easy to disturb, and I went back to my room to rest, and I got up from a good nap, and heard the sound of someone talking and walking in the courtyard outside, and estimated that they should have gotten up, so I took my two essays and poems with different styles and went upstairs to find the master.

Doctor Xie really got up after resting, and was taking the previous medical records to give Madder a lesson, and when she saw Xiangru coming back so early today, she asked the reason casually, and she was relieved when she learned that it was a holiday.

"Master, Imperial Physician Shao has assigned homework for reading poems and writing feelings after reading, I can't understand it, I want to ask the master to give a lecture, is it convenient for the master?"

"What poem? Let me see. Mrs. Xie took the poetry collection and flipped through it, quite surprised, "Ouch, how did Imperial Doctor Shao show you this kind of poetry collection?" How can you see this at such a young age? ”

"Because this kind of poem is easier to write and read, the feelings described in the poem can resonate with the reader and 'stimulate' the creative inspiration. Master, this is an article I wrote after reading, and this is an article that I will copy again after being revised by Imperial Doctor Shao. Look, is Taiyi Shao very powerful, he said that this is the standard style I want to use in the exam, I really don't know when I will reach this level. Imperial Physician Shao didn't say this at all, Xiangru didn't blink her eyes when she lied, and she was not embarrassed at all about writing love poems after reading them.

"At the age of Taiyi Shao, the level of his articles is naturally incomparable to that of young people, the key points you have to remember are the stylistic format and norms, especially the content of the article that involves the norms of ethics and norms, you should pay special attention when writing articles, and avoid the words that are avoided, for example, the two words in your father's name, in order to reflect filial piety, when writing essays, you generally have to reduce one stroke or two." When Mrs. Xie saw the article, her eyes were immediately attracted, and she didn't care about the textbook.

"Master, the strokes of my father's name are extremely simple, and they are commonly used words, if there are one or two less strokes, it will not be a word, in case the marking officer mistakenly thinks that it is a typo, will I not be wronged?"

"Let me ask you, do you remember which ones they were?"

"The state, the family, the sages and the constitution." Xiangru replied casually.

"That's it, the chapter during the exam is mainly to avoid the national and sage, it doesn't matter if you don't avoid the family, anyway, the examiner doesn't know what your father's name is, just pay more attention when you return home in the future."

"Well, I know, I'll pay more attention to it in the future. When the master has time later, tell me a poem, and I will write another one today and read it to the imperial doctor tomorrow. ”

"I'm not good at poetry, you go to Xiaoxia Doctor, she is better at poetry and songs, and she reads a lot of miscellaneous books, take your article with her to see, and ask her to tell you. In the past, when you started 'Meng', you specialized in a major, and the articles you wrote were passable, but now that you have started to specialize in articles, we have to be strict with you. ”

"Yes, master, I'll go over and retire first." Xiangru picked up the book and said goodbye to Doctor Xie and went to find Doctor Xiaoxia.

"Master, it's so difficult to write an article like that of Imperial Doctor Shao, what if I can't write it?" When Xiangru and Doctor Xie were talking, Madder was reading Xiangru's article next to her, and the article on Mrs. Shao's medical reform kept popping up in her mind.

"Write more and practice more, remember the style and format, use the words accurately, and express the meaning you want to express clearly, and it is usually not difficult to pass."

"Master, everyone says this, but you see that only one of the medical apprentices who took the exam this year passed the test, and several of those who failed the list were the last chance, so green and yellow, if this continues, in a few years, won't the number of medical women be greatly reduced?"

"Yes, the doctor herself is uneven, and the level of the apprentices brought out is naturally uneven, unless the doctors can intervene and improve the overall level of the doctor with their high level of knowledge, but this hospital makes it impossible for adults to be the master alone, and there are too many things involved behind this." I didn't expect that Doctor Xie also knew this, so I'm afraid that the other two Doctor Xia also knew it, maybe the other doctors knew the reason, but they were powerless to change the status quo.

"Just look at Xiangru, she has only studied under Taiyi Shao for a few months, and she can start to specialize in culture to prepare for the exam, if she goes well, won't she be able to enter the exam room at the beginning of autumn next year? That's a few days earlier than we had anticipated. ”

"If this is the case, it would be the best, and I also hope to see her pass the exam before I leave, and when you have her care, I can wait for you outside with peace of mind. And I believe that with the skills she learned from Imperial Physician Shao, you should not have a problem guiding you. ”

"Hehe, when we go out, the master must already have a group of 'daughters'." Madder suddenly covered her mouth and smiled, and looked at Doctor Xie narrowly.

"Okay, you stinky girl, you actually joked that your master is here, come here, see how I punish you." Leng might as well be teased by the apprentice, Doctor Xie was half a beat slow to react, and suddenly her cheeks were flushed, and the little 'girl' temper came up, chasing madder and tickling her.

Madder circled around the table, begging for mercy, but she still didn't avoid Doctor Xie's hands, and both of them finally rolled on the 'bed' and laughed. When Dr. Xie and Madder were playing slapstick games in the house, Xiangru had already followed Dr. Xia to learn new poems, Mrs. Xie was right, Mrs. Xiao Xia had a deep understanding of poetry, and it was easy to understand.

After finishing the poem, Xiaoxia also explained the grammar of the two articles to Xiangru, and formally taught her the writing skills and precautions for writing this standardized style.

After Dr. Xiao Xia roughly explained the general stylistic format requirements, she asked Xiangru to take the article revised by Imperial Doctor Shao as a template, and write it according to the imitation, don't you just have to write another article tonight.

"If you want to write any article well, you can only practice hard work, everyone has come over like this, many people have just written articles like a book from heaven, and there are just some skins and 'hairs' that are sold and "get", and the result is naturally full of mistakes and jokes, but now look at their articles, which is not clear and clean. You, just practice hard, write one a day, and after a long time, you will naturally write well, and the medical exam is very simple. ”

"Uncle Shi, that's what I said, but there is only one person this year, and I believe that those people usually work hard, and it's a pity to fall off the list."

"You don't have to worry about their fate, if their master is smarter, they should arrange a good way, so that they can be masters and apprentices, and they won't watch their apprentices be inferior palace people for a lifetime in this corner."

"That's right, the doctors can talk to the lady above, I heard that there were once doctors who recommended their apprentices to the mother's side as errands, and it would be a blessing if they could be transferred."

"The upper and lower substitutes in the mother's house have their own '' hearts, and it depends on luck to be able to squeeze into the mother's house, I haven't heard of such a thing a few times in the past few years, but there are doctors and apprentices who have been transferred to other places on errands. It is unknown whether there is a doctor's activity in this, after all, if you are old enough and don't pass the exam, you are an ordinary palace person, and the personnel is back to the internal affairs superintendent, and being transferred to another place is a transfer of the right hand, and no one will gossip. ”

"But no matter where you are transferred, you have to be fifty before you can leave the palace, and for these people who once dreamed of going home at the age of twenty, this blow is too unbearable."

"So, it's all fate, if you don't find out by your sister, your fate will be the same as those people."

"Well, so I cherish everything I have now, I must pass the exam, Doctor Shao said, I may be able to take the exam next year."

"This is very good, you have to pay more attention to your studies, and you can't slack off for a moment."

"Well, so many people care about me, I won't let everyone down." Ever since Xiangru officially started 'Meng' under Doctor Xie, no matter what you sit down to talk about, it will always end with the same topic at the end.

Knowledge changes fate, Xiangru fully believes that these 'female' doctors and apprentices all fully comprehend the 'essence' spirit, and they must implement it conscientiously in ordinary times, but in the end, everyone's fate is different, and not everyone can have a good result.

After sitting for a while, Xiangru asked some questions, and after lunch, Xiangru said goodbye to Dr. Xiaoxia and went back to her room to ponder carefully, and brought the book, compared the text on the book for a while, and compared the model text for a while, thought about writing a few words on the paper for a while, and then wrote a few words after thinking for a while, racking her brains to search the intestines and scrape her belly to piece together a palm-sized tofu block, but it didn't make sense to read it.

This kind of literary article is really natural and beautiful to look at what others write, and it will kill people to write it yourself

Entering the 'Door'