Chapter 155: National Teacher Shao Feng (1)

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The character structure is not only in its behavior, but also in its appearance, taking 10,000 steps back, even if there are handsome men and beautiful women in online novels, there must be differences in subtleties. Plus your world setting - from the character's origin, you can deduce his personality and style; From the location of the story, the characteristics of the characters' favorite food and clothing can be deduced; What flowers and plants do the characters like, what special quirks do they have, and do they touch their noses or blink when they are nervous...... These are the details. Ancient legends can create a sense of mystery and implicate some clues; The protagonist saves a rabbit and triggers the destruction of the country; The death of the protagonist's father's cousin's aunt's niece's grandson sparked a scuffle between the countries...... It's all in the details. Only when the details are rich, the character image can be three-dimensional, and only when the character image is three-dimensional, the story will be more exciting.

This is not difficult to understand, a good character from the beginning to the end, he must have a change, a little girl who has just entered the deep palace, from the initial ignorance to the end of the heart like a rock, a teenager suddenly suffered a tragedy, from the initial carefree to the final love of the family and the country, just one sentence is the summary of a book. But if you want to improve this book and make the transformation of the characters' personalities reasonable, you must not be lazy and try to achieve it overnight, the transformation of people is a process of quantitative change to qualitative change, and all the small plots and big nodes can be combined to form a flesh-and-blood growth history.

Like the name, the image of the character must reveal the author's thoughts, whether it is the external appearance or the inner character, the author is the fabricator of the character, so before writing, you must be clear: what kind of person the character is at the beginning, and what kind of person you want him to become in the end. And don't be afraid of trouble, be sure to write down your original setting (write an outline), so that there will be no character collapse in the long serialization process.

The protagonist's worldview must be clear, and he must have a trait that has never changed from beginning to end, which can be persistent, kind, or smart and greedy. This kind of worldview is clearly reflected in the fact that when the character is faced with a choice, his choice is predictable or reasonable by the reader, so that the audience can clearly perceive his position and recognize him. It's also a good thing for the writer to have a clear worldview, and if you're writing about the choice of characters, it's a sign that it's not yet considered.

Generally, it can be figured out from four aspects: first, pay attention to the identity, status, experience, upbringing, temperament, etc. of the characters in the novel, because they directly determine the words and deeds of the characters and affect the characters' personalities. second, to understand the typical characters in a typical environment; thirdly, analyze the characters through their portraits, actions, language, expressions, etc.; Fourth, analyze the character through the relationship between the characters.

There are several ways to shape characters in novels: portrait description, psychological description, action description, language description, and detail description. Frontal depiction (direct depiction), side depiction (indirect depiction).

Write a detailed outline of the chapters first, melee, mainly focus on the protagonist, and the abbreviations of others... The number of people on both sides, what are the important roles to join? How strong is it? What is the origin of the skills used?

Who is the protagonist's antagonist? How strong is it? What skills are used? What weapon?

How does the protagonist respond? What skills does the protagonist use to fight him? What is the state of the fighting between the two sides? Does the protagonist suffer a loss or win? How do the crowd react to the protagonist's performance?

What was the post-war situation? Or is there a twist in the battle? What's on board?