Chapter 121: Finding Fault

"Oh." Qin Chuchu nodded, and at the same time urged Tang Yuchen, "You go and come back quickly, I'll go to sleep when I'm done, and I have to go to work tomorrow." ”

Tang Yuchen was stunned when he heard her speak, looked at her in surprise, and smiled.

Qin Chuchu looked stunned, and then reacted to what he said, his face changed slightly, what are you thinking in your mind, what I said is to update you quickly!

Tang Yuchen didn't dwell on it much, turned around and went back to the room.

This time, he changed into a decent outfit, which was pretty decent if you ignored the clothes with his hair wet.

Hearing the movement of someone coming in, Qin Chuchu glanced up, collected the light in his eyes, and said in an indifferent voice: "Since you have done it, let's hurry up and code the word, it won't be long before zero o'clock." ”

Tang Yuchen raised his eyebrows slightly, nodded, and walked over.

"It's good for you to sit down." Tang Yuchen raised his hand to stop Qin Chuchu, who wanted to get up, pulled a stool casually, sat down next to her, and happened to see the computer.

Qin Chuchu was not hypocritical, sat down on the spot, and said, "Let's start." ”

"Let's get started." Tang Yuchen also nodded, then signaled and began to read the plot.

Qin Chuchu also recorded them one by one, his ten fingers were like flying, and the two of them cooperated very tacitly.

But slowly, Qin Chuchu felt that something was wrong with this plot.

[The first line of heaven is made of 10,000-year-old Xuan Ice Barrier, and it is cold to the bone, even people like Xiao Sixteen can't resist it, not to mention Gong Baijiu, who has already frozen into ice......]

This is a normal plot, there is nothing wrong, Qin Chuchu also played them out one by one, but later...... The female protagonist drilled into the arms of the male protagonist because it was too cold, and the male protagonist wanted to be a decent gentleman, so naturally he refused all kinds of politely.

In this paragraph, Tang Yuchen tried his best to render all kinds of ambiguous atmospheres, although he did not directly describe the explicit bed scene, but the fragrance was full of beauty, coupled with Tang Yuchen's magnetic voice, Qin Chuchu listened to it with a little dry mouth, and his fingertips began to tremble.

Qin Chuchu swallowed a mouthful of saliva unconsciously, and there seemed to be fire hidden in his eyes.

Although it is said that he is seriously reading the plot, Tang Yuchen's eyes are always paying attention to Qin Chuchu, and naturally he will not miss the slightest change in her.

When he saw that her body was tense, her body began to tremble, and she kept swallowing saliva, Tang Yuchen hooked the corners of her lips, and a glimmer of light flashed in her starry eyes.

He knew that the time had come.

So, Tang Yuchen finally changed his sitting posture and leaned closer to Qin Chuchu, and when he spoke, the breath between his breaths was on Qin Chuchu's body, and the roots of his ears were itchy.

Qin Chuchu's mind went blank, typing mechanically.

[In a daze, Gong Baijiu kissed Xiao Sixteen's mouth, his warm tongue poked in, stirring restlessly, Xiao Sixteen was like a lit firewood, and it caught fire all at once. What a righteous gentleman, what Yanagi Hui, nephrite is in the arms......]

When it was written that the scorching heat entered, Qin Chuchu finally regained his senses, suddenly stopped his hand, turned his head and glared at Tang Yuchen fiercely, gritted his teeth, and said word by word: "Tang! Yu! Minister! ”

Tang Yuchen blinked, looking innocent: "What's wrong?" ”

Load, keep loading!

Qin Chuchu slapped the table, twisted the computer screen a little, faced Tang Yuchen, gritted his teeth and said, "Look at what you wrote for yourself!" ”

Tang Yuchen glanced at it and looked very seriously.

After reading it, I read it carefully, and said: "I didn't notice it just now, but now that I look closely, I think there are still some deviations, and they should be adjusted again, such as the 10,000-year-old ice bed, which is an excellent place to cultivate, and it is also a rare treasure......"

"Enough!" Qin Chuchu interrupted him and stood up suddenly.

"Cut this paragraph!" Qin Chuchu ordered.

What is the direction of the wind now Qin Chuchu naturally knows, the above investigation is very tight, and she will be invited to drink tea if there is a slight disturbance, she doesn't want to get into trouble, and she doesn't want Tang Yuchen to get into trouble.

Tang Yuchen frowned, looked at the computer and said, "I've written a lot, it's a pity to delete it." ”

He pouted, as if he was savoring.

"If you don't delete it, OK, I'll delete it, you can continue to break it today."

Qin Chuchu did what he said, without mercy, turned around and deleted the things, and turned to leave.

"I really didn't update it today, if you don't help me, I'm going to break the update, and readers will scold me to death." Tang Yuchen tried to win sympathy.

But Qin Chuchu didn't seem to hear it, and he left resolutely.

Letting her figure disappear in front of him, Tang Yuchen didn't chase after her, but chuckled, as if he muttered something in a low voice: "It's been written for so long, what a waste to delete it." ”

As soon as the words fell, he also got up, changed his position, and sat down where Qin Chuchu had originally done.

The slender fingers covered the mouse, and after some manipulation on the computer, the deleted document reappeared.

Tang Yuchen copied and pasted, clicked send, and chuckled: "Thanks to me, I set up automatic synchronization to the cloud disk." ”

……

was upset by Tang Yuchen last night, Qin Chuchu basically had no sleep all night, and finally fell asleep in a daze, and before he could sleep for long, he was woken up by the alarm clock.

I have a splitting headache and have to go to work.

"Good morning."

"Early."

Qin Chuchu greeted the people in the office, sat down in his place, and began to process the manuscript in the mailbox.

"Senior Chu Chu, I have read the manuscript you gave me yesterday, and I have written comments and still revised my opinions, do you want to read it?"

Not long after Qin Chuchu sat down, Liu Jianing walked over, completely without yesterday's resentment.

"QQ send it to me." Qin Chuchu said businessmanlikely, and also replied to the author's message casually.

Liu Jianing was dissatisfied, puffed out his cheeks, didn't say anything, and turned to leave.

After sending the document to Qin Chuchu, she turned back again and stood behind Qin Chuchu.

Since he chose to take her, Qin Chuchu would naturally do his duty.

She closed her file and opened it after receiving the document from Liu Jianing.

But when she saw the contents of the document, she suddenly felt an explosion of pain in her brain, which was all ...... What the heck!

Comment, ok, I'll be concise and concise in ten words, but all five articles use the same comment......

Excuseme?

What are you planning to do?

Qin Chuchu took a deep breath, a little worried that he had sent the same document, and deliberately took a look at it, relieved.

"Senior Chu Chu, it's the first time I've written this kind of thing, and I don't understand it very well, so I came according to my own ideas, or you can give me a comment template, and I'll write it according to this in the future." Liu Jianing seemed to see Qin Chuchu twisting his eyebrows, and puffed out his cheeks and said.

If Kanwen still needs a standard template, then she has nothing to say.

Qin Chuchu pursed his lips, continued to look down, and read the revised text that Liu Jianing said, and was speechless for a while.

If the comments are written in a mess, forget it, the key is to make the author's text extremely chaotic, that is, it is really misleading.

Just came into contact with a newcomer, Qin Chuchu wanted to test her level, but he didn't expect ...... Quite disappointed.

Compared with disappointment, Qin Chuchu didn't show it too much, but said words of encouragement, "It's not bad, keep working hard." ”

Although it's a bit foolish, Qin Chuchu really doesn't know how to teach people, so he still has to learn slowly, with Liu Jianing.

"Really? I also think I have a lot of potential, haha, just now Wang Zicheng said that I didn't write well, I think it's because he himself is not good, a small street author, I haven't written a decent book for so many years. ”

I don't know if Liu Jianing can't understand human words or what, he put his hands into fists on his chest, laughing so much that he has no eyes, and even complaining that Wang Zicheng has achieved nothing.

Qin Chuchu: "......"

What should I do if I want to roll my eyes, can I do it? Waiting online, it's in a hurry.

"You can write me an outline in a moment." Qin Chuchu thought about it and said, and decided that he still had to be patient.

"Well, good!" Liu Jianing turned around and left happily.

Seeing that she had achieved her position, Qin Chuchu also took a deep breath and continued to be busy with her own affairs.

As if he had been recognized, Liu Jianing opened the ord document with high interest, intending to make an outline.

And Li Lingling, who was watching the whole process, rolled her eyes and opened the window of dialogue with Liu Jianing.

Li Lingling: Chu Chu's predecessors are too good

Liu Jianing: ??

Li Lingling: She is mocking you, and she doesn't teach you any skills, she is simply afraid that you are better than her.

Jianing Liu: I don't really understand.

Li Lingling: Why are you so stupid, it's just that Chu Chu's seniors don't teach you well, I haven't read those comments you wrote before, how can I say it, it's just that something is missing, you wait a minute, I'll find some templates collected from your seniors.

Immediately after, Li Lingling posted many screenshots.

Liu Jianing looked at them one by one, his complexion changed suddenly, and his whole body began to tremble because of anger.

Compared with these comments, she writes like a scum at all, and the sentence 'the writing is not good, the story is not good' should summarize everything.

Liu Jianing was doing this kind of thing for the first time, she didn't know anything, Qin Chuchu didn't tell her, this was deliberately making her ugly!

Liu Jianing stood up suddenly, and under everyone's gaze, he walked towards Qin Chuchu angrily, pointing at her with scarlet eyes and yelling: "Qin Chuchu, you did it on purpose!" ”

Qin Chuchu paused for typing, looked up at her, and didn't know why: "What's wrong with me?" ”

"What are you pretending, the boss asked you to take me, but you just threw five articles for me to read, and then didn't say anything!"

"Don't you know that I didn't understand anything when I first entered this industry, and the comments I wrote were naturally not compared with you, but now that I see it, I've been secretly cool for a long time! Is it funny for you to laugh at me like this! "I want to talk to more like-minded people about "Mr. Tang! Please advise! ", WeChat follow "Hot Network Article or rd444" to chat about your favorite books with more book friends