Many book friends said that chasing books was no longer as passionate as before, and I went back and read the book from beginning to end, and I felt a lot of emotion.

I have seen the fullness and growth of many characters, the wonderful stories, and the problems of myself.

Probably because the book is placed on the science fiction channel, I want to write the flavor of science fiction too much, so the plot no longer focuses on combat, but focuses on how to magically modify the earth in the context of this book, use technology to achieve what is possible, and make the world in the book a better world in the imagination.

It may be good for book friends who have brain waves on the upper frequency, and it is normal for book friends who don't like this part of the content to be dissatisfied.

Of course it's not a big problem, the big problem is that my mentality is not very good.

Especially when I see these recent chapters, there is a feeling of "showing off skills", which is very bad. For example, Yang Dong and his entourage went on a mission, in fact, it can be made clear in a few sentences, but I want to use 4,000 words from Yang Dong's perspective to analyze it in an all-round way, it can be said that this is a portrayal of characters, but Yang Dong's cleverness has been repeatedly emphasized before, as if there is really no need to do this.

Why is that? For water? In order to write a four-thousand-word crossover? Or is it for showmanship? To prove that I'm a writer with a brain?

I started writing a book to prove that eschatology can be written differently, but I succeeded in proving it, opening a new chapter, and trying to prove that I was a "smart" author, which was not at all smart.

So the objective fact is that although I am quite satisfied with the development of the second volume, and the plot connection and writing power have been significantly improved throughout the whole book (personal opinion), most readers think that the second volume is not as exciting as the first volume.

To tell you the truth, I would prefer the story to be wonderful rather than a person laughing at myself, and I hope you will give me a few days to think about how to write the rest of the story beautifully and wonderfully.

Also, this book was first released on the starting point Chinese network, I hope that friends who read pirated copies can subscribe to the genuine version to support Wen Yan, writing a book is really not easy, if you like a book, please don't let the author go hungry to write a book.

PS:Open the outside is simply want to write the outside.,This book is still far from the end.,Don't worry about me being a eunuch.、Unfinished.,Although I update the melon peel, I'm still pursuing progress!!