I boiled up half a chapter, and then deleted it.
I wrote more than 1,000 words in the morning, and I didn't delete it, so I didn't post it.
The content is terrible.
Let's put it simply.
The system of this book is indeed miserable and collapsed.
The original idea was to write a lighthearted, entertaining game novel.
Like the cow that gives a good pail of milk, and then kicks it over.
Now I understand...... For a novel to be long, the villain is indeed necessary, and there is obviously no villain in this book.
As a result, the protagonist's strength is too inflated and his personal strength is insufficient, which leads to the collapse of the system.
From the author's point of view, when the book was put on the shelves, it was already half collapsed, but the impact of DNF made everyone ignore this, and I only discovered this when I changed the text.
The back is trying its best to save, so the quality is also declining...... The ship that repairs the patch can't be so amazing, it's good enough not to sink.
This period of time has been unstable, not because of the new book. Although the new book is updated a lot, it takes about 60% of the time consumed by DNF.
The main thing is the loss of the goal, the loss of the theme, and the rendering of emotions.
Overall...... Looking at this book now, it is a relatively failure, and the chapter of the Great Snow Mountain is a special failure.
I'll change it first, I originally wanted the Snow Mountain chapter as a turning point, obviously...... It's a mess to play.
I thought about how to write it.
If someone wants to read that half of the chapter, they can chat with me privately in the group, and I'll send it to you. Gratuitous. There is a group number profile.
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I'll think about it again and see how to write it.
The two alliance leaders who were rewarded by the book city before can add me as friends, which is the group leader of the book friend group. Thank you.
"Live in the Dungeon" stayed up for half a chapter, and then deleted it. I am hitting it in my hand, please wait a moment,
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