First of all, thank you for the tip! Thank you for the pure white tip! Thank you for the tip! Thank you for the reward that Martial Arts has been giving a few days ago! Thanks for the tips that have been obsessed! Thank you for the reward that I only read good books! Thank you for the reward from the bookworms in the world of Xianxia! Special thanks to the continuous long comments of Seal Irissan, pointing out some problems in this book, and also putting forward some follow-up ideas, giving me good inspiration, bow and thank!

Until now, it can be said that the results are not good, and when the time comes, it can only be comforted and put on the shelves, and it is certain that it will hit the street. A book has reached more than 200,000 words now, and if the results can rise, it will have risen a long time ago.

The reason for this is all my own problem. In fact, this book has received a lot of recommendations, strong points, and clients have been on it, so thank you to my editors for the great expedition! There are also a few booklist bigwigs who have also strongly supported this book, and I should really express a belated thank you here! However, it was some mistakes I made in the early stages that led to today's results.

Among them, the protagonist's character design has some problems at the beginning, and after entering the Tianlong world, he is eager to improve his mood, which has led to discomfort and unhappiness among many book friends, which can also be said to be a poisonous point. Later, I made some changes myself, and some of the content, such as the first few chapters, were even rewritten, but it was still difficult to change its fate...... I talked to some experienced friends, and they also said that it is not meaningful to revise it now, and I can only pay attention to it in my future writing.

Secondly, in the first copy of the book, the protagonist's past life and present life are intertwined, and the past and present lives of the supporting character Duan Yu are intertwined...... I was going to make a new attempt, but when I wrote it, I was even moved by myself...... But now it seems that it is indeed a bit wishful thinking, most book friends react that these contents are a bit messy, and some book friends even feel that it is like a large number of advertisements inserted in a TV series...... Now it seems that this is a failed attempt. It can be seen from this that I can really only be regarded as a newcomer in writing, and I am not even as good as some newcomers who have done a good job...... At the same time, these also cause the first copy to be too long...... Of course, the first copy is coming to an end.

I couldn't help but wonder, if I wrote another one, how would I avoid these obvious minefields that would make people fall on the streets? The pain of the skin can be impressive, and this time I really have the pain of the skin, and there is more than one place, and I can't deal with it.

So, I've been thinking about a serious question lately, should I cut it?

Today, I see that there are brothers and sisters supporting, commenting, and rewarding, I am happy, and I feel a heavy responsibility. I think it's time to work harder, otherwise I'm sorry for those book friends who come to vote every day, and I'm even more sorry for chasing reading, especially the book friends who give rewards.

In particular, today I saw that the reward of this book was the second book that a brother had a consumption record at the starting point, and I thought that I might enter the palace in the future, and my heart sank.

I even wondered if this would make people have a psychological shadow on the whole starting point, and even the online novel? Do you dare to subscribe to tips in the future? It's not that I'm narcissistic, I think I can represent websites and online articles, but I'm really afraid of this possibility, after all, I entered the palace at the beginning of chasing the second book of the reward...... What a bad experience.

For example, the seal iris scattered brothers, today posted a lot of long comments, discussed some plots with me, put forward some opinions and suggestions, and found that he rewarded three times in a row at night. In addition to being grateful, I can't help but think of the saying: the suspect is the buyer. Of course, the book friends who silently support this book are just as amiable and respectable. The main body of a book friend is still a silent supporter, and when I read some books by myself, I also read them silently, subscribed silently, didn't speak, didn't vote, ha, the votes were left for my own books......

This book is not to say that no one reads it, no one supports it, but that the number of people is indeed relatively small, just look at the recommended votes and clicks. That probably won't keep me writing. You don't have to wait for it to hit the shelves, you can now almost judge its future results. I don't think I have the perseverance and ability to write millions of words before I rise...... It's true. All I can guarantee now is to try to write the follow-up as well as possible. It just so happens that there are some episodes that I have always wanted to write about, and I will try my best to write it well and write it out.

Above. A big mess. Lessons learned from poor grades, as well as some impressions. Let's put it bluntly.