"I mean, bastard ghost, did you really make that storyboard?"

"You've said it almost ten times! Hurry up and eat! ”

"Hey, hey~"

It seems that she is still immersed in surprises, and Yuemi is a little shaking her head when she eats, and her eyes are bent into a crescent shape, which is very cute.

Isn't it a good way to distinguish between good and bad scripts? Lin Lin looked at Yuemi's appearance and shook his head, thinking secretly in his heart. So why did you feel confident in the story you drew before?

Before, Lin Lin was worried that Yuemi would be sentenced to death because of her bad painting skills, but now it seems that she can rest assured.

As for the plot?

Ha? How could there be a problem with the plot!

I'll tell you, at this time, I'm going to blow a wave of originals.

"Hatsu" is a short manga created by Opichi-sensei and Ken-Kohata in collaboration with him, which has been mentioned before.

Who is Teacher Bone? He is called a genius by many readers, and it can even be said that no one can stand out in the field he is good at. This person can be said to be talented in short and medium stories, and his imagination is unbridled, giving people a kind of "Wow, this person's brain is so long, it's completely different from normal humans!" "I am especially good at controlling themes such as hunting and non-routine.

Why did Lin Lin choose "Beginning" as Yuemi's work to participate in the Newcomer Cup? That's because she wants her sword to go off the rails.

The theme of the shonen manga is very clear, that is, friendship, hard work and victory! Generally speaking, this is roughly the case, and the juvenile comics of the royal road system must contain these three elements, but "Chu" does not have these.

Teacher Yiyi is always writing lonely stories, and his stories, whether they are bloody and cruel, warm and healing, the tone shrouded in these emotions must be loneliness, and the same is true of "Chu".

The audience of loneliness happens to be young people who have just grown up, in other words, teenagers who live in peace but crave excitement, always think that they are special, different, and have not yet experienced the sensitivity and delicacy of the society, so they are often attracted and resonated with Yiyi's works full of loneliness.

This is undoubtedly different from the mainstream evil way, and Lin Lin just hopes that such an evil way comic can help Yuemi get a better ranking in the rookie cup.

It is true that it is not a bad choice to choose a royal work steadily, if it is under normal circumstances, if Yuemi goes to submit to "Juvenile Weekly", Lin Lin will definitely choose some normal royal works, but this time Yuemi is going to participate in a competition.

Since it's a competition, there must be a lot of competitors, and because this is the Rookie Cup of "Shonen Weekly", the themes that the opponents will choose can roughly be imagined, and most of them will be royal shonen comics.

As we all know, there will be aesthetic fatigue when you keep watching things with the same theme repeatedly, no matter how good the royal road comics are, they are mixed in countless similar works, and its charm will be greatly reduced, although Yuemi has the advantage of painting, but Lin Lin doesn't dare to bet, so she would rather win with the evil way.

As for what kind of ranking you can get in the end...... Lin Lin can only say that she believes in Teacher Yiyi, but "Beginning" is also a comic adapted from "Ah Yuan", one of the masterpieces of Teacher Yiyi's warm healing style...... Well, the development of ACG culture in this world is no worse than Lin Lin's previous life, and Lin Lin doesn't dare to boast about Haikou now and say that "Beginning" can win the gold medal of the Newcomer Cup, otherwise wouldn't it be like setting up a flag to give the author a chance to play on the topic!

In addition, it has to be mentioned that Mr. Yiyi has to be mentioned, and his readers divide Mr. Yiyi into black and white according to the style of his novels. Hei Yiyi is tyrannical and bloody, and likes to write stories with crime, horror and suspense, and ontological reasoning as the core, while Bai Yiyi is warm and healing, focusing on describing the bonds and love between people.

In short, no matter black and white, the author of Mr. Yi's work is highly recommended~

Stop! You scrap wood author who seems to have subtly exposed something! Now is not your time for Amway!

…… Ahem, please ignore the above author's words and let's get back to business.

Although Lin Lin drew the storyboard of "Beginning", there were still many details that needed to be discussed with Yuemi, so after Yuemi washed the dishes, the two sat on the sofa and stared at the stack of storyboards on the coffee table.

"So, what do you think?"

After being silent for a moment, Lin Lin finally spoke tentatively, and sure enough, he was still a little worried about whether his storyboard could be used.

However, when she heard this, Yuemi suddenly looked at her with a confused expression: "...... Yes? ”

“…… Ahhhh ”

Feeling that his radio waves did not seem to be on the same channel as Yuemi, Lin Lin knocked on the girl's smooth forehead angrily and opened his mouth to explain.

Anyway, what is this girl thinking, could it be that she is in a daze?

Yuemi is really not in a daze, in fact, she is thinking about the image design of the character, after all, Lin Lin's storyboard is not much better than a stickman, and it is strange to be able to imagine the specific appearance of the character.

"I think this is a great story~ The scene of dying at the end is really impressive~" Yuemi didn't care about the moment Lin Lin gave her just now, and said her feelings a little excitedly, and then said the answer to the question that Lin Lin cared about, "Another storyboard...... I'll probably have to redraw it myself before I can use it, but it's not a big problem~"

"Well, that's good." Lin Lin breathed a sigh of relief.

As for the compliment given by Yuemi, she accepted it unceremoniously, but wait, I always feel that Yuemi's attention doesn't seem to be right......?

"Although the scene of the first death is really good, but Yuemi's ......" Lin Lin grabbed Yuemi's little face and rubbed it, "I wanted to ask when I read the comics you drew yourself, are you very obsessed with the ending of death?" ”

And if I'm not mistaken, when this kid filled out the reader survey, most of his favorite works were of that tragic type.

"Hmm!" pinched Lin Lin's hand with his fingernails, forcing Lin Lin to let go of his hand, Yuemi covered his face and said as a matter of course: "Of course, only tragedy can be impressive, and the thought of having readers who are depressed because of reading their own works doesn't think it's very interesting?" ”

The girl tilted her head and looked up at Lin Lin floating in mid-air, her eyes were indescribably pure, as if what she said was justified.

yes, it looks like what Tsukimi said is indeed true...... Premature life! I suddenly found out that my child was a dead young man and had a tendency to feed people! How can I cure her of her illness!

The expression on Lin Lin's face at this time was quite exciting~