As the title of the latest chapter, Ning Zhi blew up, you blew up, and I blew up.

I'm sorry......

I reflect, seriously reflect

Throughout the day, I read the last few chapters back and forth dozens of times, writing full pages of notes

I asked myself many times, such a plot, if I were a reader, would I buy it? Am I willing? Am I happy to look at?

Within my ability, what is the number of chapters and the speed of updates to achieve my expected "coolness"?

After that, I brought up the review again, analyzed the psychology of these readers, and reflected on whether I had taken the reader's experience to heart.

In order to be able to put aside subjective assumptions

I also asked a lot of old authors for advice, voice, phone, and I contacted all the authors who could catch me, and then explained my situation.

The harvest is still a lot

I've probably sorted it out and have the following suggestions:

1. Overturn and rewrite the last few chapters

2. Continue to write according to the original outline

3. Cut out the details and speed up the plot

I went over and over and over to figure out which one would have a better and longer way to go.

It's a painful process

Especially the overturn and rewrite, the beginning of this book is the result of two months of overturning and rewriting a full eight times, and it is not a minor change.

It's too painful, it's tormenting both physically and mentally.

I didn't dare to make a decision when my mind was not clear, so I put it off until now to write this reflection.

I decided to combine the above suggestions:

Minor changes to the previous chapters, do not cut off the branch lines and sub-outlines, do not move the outline, and speed up the plot and updates.

In order to let everyone see the sincerity of my reflection,

I will continue to stay up all night tonight, and strive to end this episode tomorrow morning, so that everyone can see what they want to see.

Final off-topic nonsense:

I was eighteen when I started writing, and I'm just twenty years old this year, and I don't even have a million finished books.

The first book was miserable, but I learned a lot and made a lot of really good author friends.

At the age of nineteen, it really wasn't a loss

......

It's not easy to do anything, even if it's an online article.

I'm still very good at the middle of the AC for myself.

My essay has too many coincidences, insufficient logic, and is not concise enough.

Also, it may be that I have had a good life in the past half of my life, and most of the people I have met are good people.

will not create plot contradictions at all, will not write vicious female supporting roles, and will not write villains who are really bad to the bones.

Looking at the previous plot, you should be able to find that the female supporting roles of "Tang Qiqi", "Summer" and "Fei Chuchu" have been written by me.

This is all to learn the routine, and the tragic lesson of overturning the car turned out.

Later, I figured it out,

Since I tried so hard to learn the routine, it didn't work, but the effect was very poor.

Then I'll write completely according to my own routine, it's a big deal, I'll go back to writing a fixed online routine.

Thank God

No..

Then, when I tasted the sweetness, I began to swell.

If you follow your own ideas too much, you will relatively ignore the reader's reading experience.

It's my fault

I reflect

This time I fell on my head, and I won't do it again.

......

I really like to write, even though I have gained almost nothing in the past two years except experience, I still feel that in the future, I will get the hard work I put in, and I deserve to be rewarded.

It's a great feeling that hard work pays off.

I hope that all of you who see this single chapter of hypocritical nonsense can get something out of everything you do.

I also hope that everyone can see a little bit of progress and a little effort in breaking the bowl......

2018.7.5

You can't do without your dishes