Chapter Ninety-Five: Lin Lin's Revision Plan

Brushing away the debris on the manuscript paper, Lin Lin put down the pen in his hand and examined the draft of the storyboard he had just finished.

In the past few months, have you made a little progress in painting?

…… Probably not, although it is a little better than when even the human body was not well drawn at the beginning, but it is just that, even if Yuemi spent a lot of time learning how to draw when she was not paying attention, but unfortunately Lin Lin really has no talent in this area, and if she is more accurate, it may be worse than ordinary people, so even if it takes so long, all she can do is to convey the picture she wants to express to Yuemi more accurately.

Theoretically, the original author does not need to have too high painting skills, but from the perspective of Lin Lin as an editor in his previous life, his painting as the original author is really a little unreasonable, but fortunately, she can communicate with Yuemi at any time, and Yuemi has full talent in painting, so that there will be some strange foreign appearances.

"It's the twenty-sixth chapter......"

Packed up the draft of the storyboard and prepared to turn around and hand it to Yuemi, Lin Lin muttered to himself.

Indeed, because there is no need to deliver manuscripts on time every week, Yuemi's painting speed has slowed down a bit, and basically there is nothing else to do before she comes to the study or asks Bai Qiongjiu to paint some manuscripts.

But the problem is,Yuemi is the type who doesn't have any special hobbies.,I don't like to go out to play very much.,During the break, it's either lazily pulling Lin Lin to chat.,Or watching TV or books and comics.,Occasionally, if you're interested, you'll go to watch Lin Lin play games.。

So in fact, the time spent drawing comics every day has not decreased much, but I will no longer stay up late to catch up with the draft, and over time, the manuscript will naturally be a lot more.

Putting the draft of the storyboard on the table in the study, Lin Lin casually picked up the stack of manuscripts that Yuemi placed on the other side and carefully flipped through them.

She suddenly, no, not suddenly, to be precise, since Yuemi said before that she wanted to release "Death Note" for free on the Internet, Lin Lin had an idea in her heart - she wanted to try to modify "Death Note".

Originally, the original manga of "Death Note" had a total of one hundred and eight chapters, and L, who appeared from the first episode and was extremely popular, died in the fifty-eighth episode of the original work under the design of the protagonist Yagami Tsuki.

In fact, since L's death, the excitement of the plot of "Death Note" has dropped significantly, so much so that by the end of the manga, Night God Moon has made a lot of mistakes that would have been impossible to make in the first half.

This is actually very easy to explain.,As a serialized comic.,And it's a serialized comic with high popularity.,Editors generally ask cartoonists to delay the end of the comic as much as possible.,In order to create greater economic benefits.,And the original very exciting plot is dragged like this.,It's easy to become boring.,This is the price necessary to forcibly extend the serial life of the comic.。

Let's take a well-known example.,"Bleach reaper", a migrant worker manga with many fans, was originally supposed to end after solving the indigo dyeing.,But because of the editor's request.,The author had to continue to draw.,So much so that it led to various collapses in the later period.,The same goes for Akira Toriyama's "Dragon Ball.。

Originally, Yuemi was also serialized in a magazine, so there was naturally no problem with drawing according to the length of the original "Death Note", but Lin Lin was still worried about whether he would be asked by the editor to continue to delay the progress of the completion on this basis.

But now the situation is different, Yuemi is just planning to finish the "Death Note", and it is released in a free form, so naturally there is no need to delay the completion progress to cheat money, Lin Lin feels that in this way, it can be finished in the most exciting part of the "Death Note" comic.

Of course, with Lin Lin's creative level of half a bottle of water, of course she is not capable of modifying a work like "Death Note" - in fact, she is ready to refer to the ending of the movie version of "Death Note", that is, let Ye Shenyue and L die together.

Lin Lin didn't have the confidence to do this for a while ago, after all, in the end, what Lin Lin could completely remember was all the comics she had read, and the specific plot of the movie version of "Death Note", although it was roughly a bit impressive, but to turn it into a comic, Lin Lin said that this kind of thing still has to find another master, she is just a weak chicken, she can't do it, she can't do it.

But now the situation is a little different, and I don't know if this is the god who threw Lin Lin into this world on purpose or if it was simply the golden finger he gave Lin Lin at the beginning, as the star-colored sand in that glass bottle continued to accumulate, the things that Lin Lin could completely recall gradually became more and more.

The movie version of Death Note is one of them.

In fact, Lin Lin still has a little complaint in his heart: Be reasonable, you have opened it for me, why don't you open it thoroughly? For example, directly turning the content of the movie into a comic, or simply giving Lin Lin perfect painting skills, this can also save a lot of trouble...... To be precise, it should be able to save most of the trouble.

However, in Lin Lin's mind, there was no change at all in what those works should be or what they were, and what she could remember was only those works she had seen, such as all kinds of knowledge that Lin Lin had never come into contact with or had long since been thrown into her grandmother's house, Lin Lin was still the same.

Don't ask Lin Lin how she came to this conclusion, she wouldn't say that she casually took Zhang Yuemi's math handouts and found that she wouldn't do such a thing at all.

Forget it, greed is not enough to swallow elephants, it is already satisfied to have such a small golden finger Lin Lin, and Yuemi probably doesn't need her to do other superfluous things, after all, painting belongs to the field of girls, and it has nothing to do with Lin Lin.

Getting back to the point, now that he can remember the movie version of "Death Note", Lin Lin picked up the modification plan again and put it on the agenda.

If you want to say whether she has confidence or not, Lin Lin actually doesn't have much bottom in her heart, but she has drawn a storyboard draft for Yuemi for so long, and she has some experience, so she can be regarded as trying to challenge it head-on-this matter is really worth Lin Lin's attempt, a "Death Note" that ends in a climax and has no superfluous plot can definitely be called a well-deserved masterpiece!

But before that, Lin Lin felt that he had to inform Yuemi first-the girl trusted her very much, but a certain degree of explanation was still necessary, after all, the girl was also a very assertive child.