Chapter 30: The Transformation of Harry Potter
After staying on the fan list for a while, Ye Daifei continued to scroll down the page, and soon came to the comment area and began to read carefully one by one. Pen, fun, and www.biquge.info
"I'll see...... There are a few more new comments today......"
I saw that at the top of the comment area, the screen name 'Lonely Crazy Shadow' spoke: "Very novel text style, a bit similar to the ancient style, but it seems to have been improved on the basis of the ancient style, not bad...... It's my dish, chase! ”
This should be the kind of reader who loves the ancient style very much--thought Ye Daifei continued to look down.
The other is a netizen's 'inexplicably cold' comment, he said: "I don't know if you have noticed, this author seems to be building a very grand world background." There is no such thing as a beast, there are hundreds of countries, and each country has a different style...... Although these are only the tip of the iceberg, I can already foresee the future scene, and God has confirmed it! ”
"Has anyone noticed it already?"
Ye Daifei smiled happily, it seems that she tried her best to describe the background of the earth world in order that there would not be too many bugs in the book, but now it seems that she did not spend her efforts in vain.
Next, a netizen named 'Summoning Legs' said: "Although the thing called 'magic' in the book is not as powerful as the God-given ability, when it is combined with the background and storyline, some of the fight scenes still make me feel excited!" I never thought that after putting aside the template of God and Ming Chaoxing, I could still write the novel so wonderfully, and the ancient style was so impressive. I dare to jump to conclusions...... This newcomer author called 'Traveler from Another World' is creating a whole new path of web novel writing! He's breaking down the barrier that plagues the web novel world today! ”
"Oh?"
Seeing this, Ye Daifei finally couldn't help but raise her eyebrows.
I have to say that this trick is very vicious, and it is the first time that she has published such an opinion in the comment area since she published the book.
Now Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone have been written to the second half, but this is only the first part of the Harry Potter series, and there are still six more in the future.
As this person said, when she chose to write this novel Harry Potter, she was already destined to change the entire pattern of Ming Chaoxing's online novels, with such a keen eye, I believe that this person is engaged in clerical work even in the real world.
Shaking her head slightly, Ye Daifei continued to read the next comment.
Netizen 'Walking Upside Down' wrote: "Gryffindor who is brave and bold and not afraid of difficulties; the loyal, stoic, and honest Hufflepuffs; the wise, erudite Ravenclaw; Insidious and cunning Slytherin, the setting of these four houses is really fantastic, and almost everyone's different personalities are included! As much as I love the three brave little protagonists, I think Ravenclaw has a bit of an appetite for me! ”
"Well, there's finally a talk about the plot side...... Although there is nothing suggestive about it, it's good if someone likes it, and it seems that he is still a top student who likes to read and learn? Ye Daifei nodded, and her gaze moved to the next one.
"The last few chapters of Quidditch have been wonderful! I'm amazed that an antique thing like a broom can fly, but now there is a competition with it as the core, and I'm looking forward to the next episode! ”
Well, this one is finally a little more reliable.
"I kind of hate that Professor Snape, and the protagonist didn't offend him, so why should he embarrass little Potter?"
Well...... Sorry, but I can't tell you about this important foreshadowing.
"Potions feels a bit similar to our Ming Chaoxing's potion preparation, but the material in the book is obviously more imaginative, and I can't imagine anything like this anyway."
This is a fair assessment.
Ye Daifei subconsciously moved her gaze downward, but she was startled by the comment that came into view.
"Hurry up and update the old lady!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ye Daifei felt the resentment of urging her to change across the screen, she quickly glanced at this person's ID, and when the words 'autumn with frost' came into view, she calmed down again all of a sudden, and even showed a smile at the corner of her mouth.
It's a long-time fan.
In the relatively dull days not long after the book opened, the other party was already one of the few readers who were active in the comment area, and ...... Ye Daifei glanced at the first place on the fan list, it was this autumn frost, she rewarded herself with more than 10,000 star coins for this book, and she was definitely a local tyrant who was not bad for money.
Since there is only one ruling class in Ming Chaoxing, there is no such thing as currency appreciation and depreciation, and 10,000 star coins is enough for an ordinary family to live a prosperous life for two or three years, which is impossible to happen on the earth.
And every time this autumn frost appears in the book review area, almost without exception it is this sentence - urging change. At first, Ye Daifei was startled, thinking that the other party was dissatisfied with her book.
But later, over time, she found that it was this sentence every time, and she got used to it, as long as she released a part of the manuscript that was more than one yard out as a backup every time, she could send this eldest lady away.
Hurriedly glanced at other book reviews, Ye Daifei saw that it was not early, so she closed the webpage and began to write the book code words intently.
Five hours passed quietly.
When the last full stop was struck, Ye Daifei couldn't help but breathe a sigh of relief, and then it took more than ten minutes to quickly correct the wrong grammar and typos before uploading the chapter.
Turning off the computer, Ye Daifei let go of the keyboard and stood up, stretching her somewhat stiff body, while looking up at the electronic clock hanging on the wall - before she knew it, it was already one o'clock in the afternoon.
Touching her empty little belly, Ye Daifei walked to the kitchen, took out two white capsules from the refrigerator, only the size of a little fingernail, frowned and put the capsules in the palm of her hand, she gritted her teeth and threw the two capsules into her mouth together.
With a slight bite, the capsule shattered, and a thick liquid with a bit of bitterness exploded in her mouth.
Swallowing it into her stomach with difficulty, Ye Daifei couldn't help but mutter: "This nutrient solution is simply destroying my sense of taste!" The first few days were fine, but three meals a day, eating this stuff every day, really made me want to throw up......"
Complaining like this, she sighed unconsciously.
If she could eat other real food, she wouldn't choose such a thing as nutrient solution.
However, Ye Daifei had no choice, just because she was too poor.
Although Harry Potter has 10,000 star coins with autumn frost, and hundreds of star coins rewarded by other readers, the problem is that this money will not reach her account for a while.
Although she had signed a contract with her station the day before yesterday, the stipulation was that the author's uniform distribution of remuneration and reward money would need to wait until the first day of each month, and there would be six days left before the first day of the next month......
Therefore, before that, Ye Daifei could only eat nutrient liquid, which was cheap and could ensure the energy consumed by her daily sword practice......
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