Chapter 588: Come and find fault
Feng Xuezheng sat there and stood still, waiting until Du Jinning put the test paper in front of him and respectfully lowered his head and took two steps back, then he slowly lifted his sleeves and picked up the test paper to look at it.
Although Guan Lehe had a heart and wanted to come to Feng Xuezheng's side to watch it together, he still suppressed the anxiety in his heart and sat aside and waited.
What is the level of his own disciple, even if he hasn't taught Du Jinning for two years, he still knows. Because the teachers and students exchanged letters, they often talked about learning. Du Jinning would send him some of her articles and ask him to give him guidance.
He was only worried that Feng Xuezheng was picking bones in his eggs.
As long as you have the heart to find a fault, it's so easy to find a thorn. If you write an eight-strand essay, no matter how well you write, Feng Xuezheng can also reprimand you for not taking the right path and being sycophant; If you write very eloquently, he can also say that you are too formalistic and sensational, and you are not a person who can do knowledge in a down-to-earth manner; If you write too plainly, he can say that you have no literary talent, old-fashioned and talentless.
But when he saw his disciple wink at him and smile comfortingly, his heart was miraculously calm.
Du Jinning is a very magical child, as long as she says that there is no problem, no matter how difficult the problem is, there is nothing to be afraid of.
After settling down, Guan Lehe had the leisure to pick up the tea and savor it.
And on the other end, Feng Xuezheng's brows, who were about to provoke, furrowed more and more tightly.
The article in front of him is not written in the form of an eight-strand essay, so he can't find fault with the form of writing - the articles from ancient times to the present are written like this, and the Four Books and Five Classics, which are regarded as classics, are also written in this way, do you dare to say that there is something wrong with the article that is not written in the form of eight strands? He really dared to say this with a clear conscience, Confucius, Mencius, Lao Tzu and others had to get up from the ground and beat him wildly, and the scholars in the world had to let him get out of Taixue. In that kind of words, Pan Yiting, a fanatical advocate of Baguwen, did not dare to risk the world's disapproval.
So, there is nothing wrong with the form of writing.
You can't pick thorns in the form of writing, so it's right to pick thorns in the writing technique, right? If you write too gorgeously, you will naturally pick this thorn; On the contrary, if you don't write gorgeously, you can also pick thorns.
But in front of this article, it's really hard for you to say that you are deficient in this regard.
It is very plain in its writing, its logic is quite rigorous, and in some places it also uses data and historical facts as a basis to demonstrate its own views, and it goes deeper and deeper step by step, and its writing is as plain and rigorous as the case report written by the Criminal Department, and there is no false exaggeration.
But if you say that this article lacks literary brilliance, then it can't be. You know, this article uses no less than a dozen references just to the scriptures. The "dictionary" is a great way to increase the style and enhance the persuasiveness of the article when writing the article, and the sentences quoted are all gorgeous and brilliant, which makes this article of only 500 words very literary at a glance.
Feng Xuezheng couldn't help but raise his eyes and took a good look at Du Jinning.
This kid is only fourteen or fifteen years old, why is he such a chicken thief? Can you think of such a way to increase the style of your article?
No, it can't be. This kid is not very old, and he is from a small place, even if someone mentions it, don't be able to know that he is going to pick a thorn today, so he deliberately writes an article like this, right?
Moreover, such an article, rigorous and brilliant, is it really something that this kid can write in such a short time? He wanted to praise the article, and the words of praise could not be said for half an hour; But if he wanted to pick a thorn in this article, he let him read the article back and forth several times, and he couldn't pick out the thorn at all.
He stroked his beard, frowning in thought.
It doesn't matter if he thinks about it, Guan Lehe is in a hurry.
What the hell is the article, but it speaks. Now he is frowning and looking at Du Jinning, without saying a word, what do you mean?
Du Jinning was very calm, standing there with his head slightly down, his eyes looking directly at the ground, and he did not panic at all.
After a while, Feng Xuezheng raised his head and said, "I'll make a question, and you can write another article." ”
Several people present raised their heads in amazement and looked at Feng Xuezheng.
Guan Lehe hurriedly said; "Feng Xuezheng? Isn't one article enough? Why write again? ”
Feng Xuezheng said slowly: "I want to see him write an article again." ”
“……”
Well, you're the big guy, you have a point.
Guan Lehe turned his head to look at Du Jinning.
Du Jinning had lowered his eyelids at this time.
She still looked calm, and stepped forward to make a gesture to Feng Xuezheng: "Please Xuezheng to solve the question." ”
Feng Xuezheng was very satisfied with Du Jinning's neat performance, and he had a good impression of her in his heart.
"Listen up." Feng Xuezheng cleared his throat, "There is a cloud in the Book of Changes: 'Yi Zhi is also a book, and the vast number of them are prepared, there are heavenly ways, there are humane ways, and there are earthly ways. So you write an essay on the subject. ”
Du Jinning arched his hand, then turned around and sat down next to the desk, stretched out his hand and began to grind the ink.
Zhaifu hurriedly followed, took out two blank test papers, and put them in front of Du Jinning.
Guan Jiaze stood in place and hurriedly asked, "Xuezheng, what about me?" ”
Feng Xuezheng took out the article he had just written, read it hastily, and then nodded: "You don't have to write it anymore, just sit on the side." As he spoke, he pointed to the seat where Guan Jiaze had come at the beginning.
Guan Jiaze turned his head and glanced at Guan Lehe, turned around at his signal, walked to the seat and sat down.
Feng Xuezheng spoke to Guan Lehe at this time, but he became pleasant.
He said softly: "Lord Guan is busy in the yamen in the afternoon?" If you're in a hurry to go back, you might as well go first. Don't worry, as long as the article Du Jinning is writing now is consistent with his style just now, there will be no problem for him to enter Taixue. ”
Guan Lehe never understood what Feng Xuezheng's attitude changed today. When he heard this, his heart stabilized.
It seems that Feng Xuezheng is very satisfied with Du Jinning's article just now.
"It's not urgent, it's not a big deal to delay." Guan Lehe said, and instructed Guan Jiaze, "You go out, tell Ah Guan, and ask him to go back to the yamen and ask me for half an hour's leave." ”
"Yes." Guan Jiaze agreed, got up and went out.
In fact, working in the yamen is not particularly strict, unlike some modern companies that have to clock in and out of work. The pace of life of the ancients was originally slow, and everyone did not have such a thing as a watch. Guan Lehe went to the yamen a quarter or two of an hour late, and no one cared.
But Guan Le and seeing that Feng Xuezheng was not friendly to them, naturally he was unwilling to put this handle in Feng Xuezheng's hands, so he simply let the little guy run.