Chapter 27: The Drama (6)
"The way of man, the loss is insufficient and the service is more than enough, the strong are always strong, the weak are eliminated, in order to ensure their own survival, in order to make themselves strong, some people can do anything, even violate the crime. So, don't believe too much in the innocence and kindness of this society, work hard to draw comics, make yourself a strong person, personal strength is the confidence to face the competition for survival. ”
Li Hao listened to her say such a long list of words in a daze, stretched out his hand and applauded in a daze.
"Sister, you are so amazing, you can combine biology and society so well, I think you are so suitable to be a teacher! Mr. Ye! ”
As if he had discovered some new continent, his excited eyes were shining, and he shouted one by one:
"Teacher Ye!"
"Teacher Ye?"
"Teacher Ye ......"
Especially when he called her with a long tail note, with obvious coquettishness, it made people's backs chill and goosebumps all over their bodies.
Ye Feng hurriedly stopped him: "Have you finished changing the storyboard?" ”
As soon as Meng talked about work, Li Hao also learned from her and became serious, and nodded seriously: "Don't worry, sister, I finished changing it last night." ”
Ye Feng took it over and looked at it, his consciousness had indeed improved a lot compared to before.
In the past, I always grinded when I said that I wanted to change the storyboard, and I didn't want to admit that I needed to improve, and I felt that the first draft was the most perfect.
This time was completely different, not only did she take the initiative to meet to discuss the outline storyboard, but she also took the initiative to ask her to check the next part of the storyboard for the first time, promising to change it in time if it was not suitable.
This is probably a kind of growth that everyone will experience.
However, it is clear that he still has some areas to grow in his comics, such as the control of close-ups.
Ye Feng pointed to one of the pages, and had some doubts in his heart: "What do you want to talk about here?" ”
Li Hao turned his head sideways to look at it, and dictated the storyline to her: "It's that the male and female horns flirt with each other, the male horn originally used the size advantage to trap the female horn and tease her, but I didn't expect the female horn to take the initiative to take the initiative and directly press his head and kiss it, and the male horn was counterattacked." ”
"Then why does the female character take the initiative to kiss the male character?"
Hey, what's there to ask! Li Hao felt that Ye Feng's question was very strange.
"It must be because I can't control my motivation!"
"Why are you tempted, why, why?" Ye Feng asked further.
"Isn't this section all about their love story, his feelings have warmed up to this point, and then he will be tempted."
Ye Feng shook his head, the previous foreshadowing is part of it, but you must have a fuse for the two to kiss, so that it can be more storytelling and heartwarming.
At the very least, you have to give the male character a close-up, otherwise the female character will kiss the emotional changes there? When two people get close, they must at least have hormonal attraction, otherwise it will cause impulse? Female readers come to see shoujo manga, but don't look at male characters to see the author?
Li Hao bit the spoon and cautiously coquettish: "Then I'll change it after eating." ”
A smile tugged at the corner of Ye Feng's mouth and winked at him.
Li Hao held his forehead: "Sister, why don't you help me, I haven't encountered a situation where I was blocked in the corner by a man taller than me......"
This made Ye Feng very helpless.
The two of them found a stepping foot for Ye Feng to stand on it to imitate the male corner, and Li Hao leaned against the corner of the wall as the female corner. Li Hao and Ye Feng themselves have a height difference of 20 centimeters, and coupled with the setting in the comics, Ye Feng has to increase his height by nearly 50 centimeters. suddenly became a little giant more than two meters tall, which made her quite happy.