Chapter 182: Pull the Score Project
Hearing her mother say this, Bei Zhentian snorted coldly in her heart, seeing that her mother would not help her take responsibility at that time, she would start to tell herself like this now.
However, Bei Zhentian was very confident in her plan, even if she didn't have her mother Zi Yulin to help, she would have already figured out what to do.
What's more, she had already told Zi Yulin that if something really happened, Bei Zhentian wouldn't believe it, and she couldn't drag her mother to help.
Bei Yi had already taken the subway to the library at this time, and after entering, he quickly found the location of Yueluo and Lian Jiayang, and Bei Yi went over and sat down.
"Bei Yi, you're here, we have a bunch of questions."
"It's okay, I have a lot of time today, and I also found a very simple, but especially easy to ignore problem today, and one more thing, do any of you know how to improve the score of the essay" Bei Yi smiled and asked a few people.
"Hahaha, by the way, Bei Yi, you pull the sub-item is composition, you can't ask us about this, you should ask yourself, we have read your composition, and the Chinese teacher showed it to me as a negative textbook." A boy in Lian Jiayang's class replied with a smile.
During the most closed period of Bei Yi before, I watched too many anime, and that essay was an epistolary essay, and the title was written to you in xx.
Others are written to you who love, who you who will never forget, who you who respect, Bei Yi writes to you who are in heaven.
It's not much strange to look at the title, but what Bei Yi wrote was an anime character who died.
The essay is written with sincerity, but whether it is the characters or the way of sacrifice, in short, it is all too fantastical, and let the Chinese teacher say that this essay is not good, nor is it bad.
In the end, it became a typical article, so that everyone can learn from the advantages of Bei Yi's description, but I also want to remind everyone not to write such a middle two when writing an essay.
"At that time, I wanted to get to know you, but I didn't expect to be able to review together now."
"Is my article weird, but I cried very sadly, and that character died very unjustly." Bei Yi replied seriously.
"Bei Yi, please don't tease me, we can't laugh out loud in the library, but I can't help it." The boy's face was flushed, and he looked like he was holding back a smile.
Bei glanced at him, she didn't joke, when His Royal Highness Huo sacrificed, the scene was so touching, she cried a lot.
Lian Jiayang glanced at his classmates, shook his head at him, and then looked at Bei Yi, "The biggest problem with your composition is that there is too little breath of life, it's all anime content, you write very well, but many teachers haven't been exposed to it, so they can't substitute it into your composition, and many of the words you use are also related to the second dimension, and the teachers can't understand it, which leads to your score being relatively low." ”
"Oh" Bei nodded, even Jiayang said this and she understood, the teacher didn't understand the content of the second dimension, as if she was asked to read a very detailed but very professional medical book, because there are a lot of professional words in it, maybe she may not be able to understand it.
"Let's talk about the question first, I have a way to ask about your essay, according to my method, although there is no guarantee that you will get a high score, but at least during the exam, your essay will not become a scoring item."
"As long as it's no longer a pull-point project, I'm not demanding."