The patriarch has something to say
The original plan was to complete this summary yesterday and start the next plot, but yesterday I somehow caught a cold, and I was not happy to code words, so it dragged on to today, for the plot of escape, the patriarch is really not good at it, and can only be brought through it so quickly.
The novel is almost 800,000 words and has been written for so long, thanks to everyone's support, it has been updated to 800,000 words step by step, and I have also found a lot of my own shortcomings, and the first 800,000 words can be said to have deviated from the main line in many places.
All along, the patriarch has been positioning this novel, looking for a style, and now he wants to try his best to create a wild and simple world, a struggle for survival between human race and alien race, a world of eating and being eaten.
Even when I first started writing, I thought about writing a cool article according to the trend of pretending to slap my face and pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger, you can take a look at the introduction I wrote when I first uploaded.
Patriarch, Patriarch, Patriarch, it's not good, it's not good, the clansman is injured hunting!
Xiao Chen: Don't panic, this patriarch has a high-quality healing medicine to ensure that the medicine is removed;
The patriarch is the patriarch, the patriarch is not good, it's not good, the clansmen are bullied by other tribes.
Xiao Chen: Who is copying the guy and beating him with the patriarch of the clan;
The patriarch is the patriarch, the patriarch is not good, it's not good, many young people in the clan can't marry a daughter-in-law!?
Xiao Chen: What!?
Others say that our Guyuan tribe is too poor, and the girls don't want to marry them?
Xiao Chen: Sons and daughters, take your weapons and go with the patriarch to grab money, grain, and daughter-in-law!
Crossing over to become the head of a clan, others are one person who feeds the whole family and is not hungry, but he still has a tribe of people to raise, Xiao Chen feels that Yali Mountain is big.
However, it's okay!
With a seal in my hand, I have it all over the world.
However, after writing a few photos, I realized that this style did not suit me, so the introduction became.
In the wild continent, hundreds of tribes are rampant, fierce beasts are raging, and the human race is weak, and they are slaves and food.
The Huanghuang human race, fighting the great wilderness, full of blood reflects the sky, the blue blood flows dry and stains the blue sky, and the blood flows in the blood is the blood that will never give in.
Crossing over to become the head of the Gu Yuan tribe, Xiao Chen volleyed his spear into the air, and shouted an oath that shook the eons to the endless wild land: Those who offend my Gu Yuan will be punished even if they are far away!
The blood does not dry up, the battle does not stop! With my blood, the heroic soul of the human race will not be destroyed!
The positioning was wrong at the beginning, and because of the tragic subscription of the novel in the middle, I wanted to change the style, but it was too late to add some elements of pretending to slap my face, and it was a little out of the main line, making the article a little nondescript.
And the patriarch's writing is limited, and the kind of reckless momentum that he has always wanted to create is always difficult to write, the blood of the human race, the ferocity of the alien race, there is no cool point, and forcibly writing even makes the novel very contrived, and even some chapters I feel astringent and tasteless, like chewing wax, which is a bit of a reader who can't help but subscribe.
There is also a compression of the rhythm of the previous article, some of which are ruthless, and there are so many verbosities, which is also a failure of these 800,000 words, after entering the next plot, not only the strength of the protagonist Xiao Chen, but also the strength of the entire tribe will rise, there will be a struggle for hegemony, the plot of ten thousand races coming to the dynasty, and the plot of a bloody battle against other races crying blood and a great wilderness.
Yesterday in a book friend group of another author, someone said, I don't talk to you who write books, you guys are so good at, and indeed writing books is building a world.
Since the shelves these days, the patriarch's book subscription has been bleak, counting the full attendance for two months, barely reaching a thousand manuscript fees, I also understand that my novels are somewhat inconsistent with the current trend of pretending to slap the face, serious can even be said to be not a cool article, the era of fast food articles, one looks cool, and the other is the amount of updates, but the patriarch's update is up and down, but it is also in the top 100 on the VIP update word count list at the starting point, and I still have a cheeky hope that everyone will give the patriarch a support.
The rarest thing in the world is to change a person's mind, the patriarch hopes that even if the readers are looking at piracy, I also hope that you will register an account at the starting point, leave a message for the patriarch, vote for it, and support it a little, which can be regarded as a motivation to write down. (To be continued.) )