Old book friends, you can re-read the first chapter at the beginning.

With some suggestions from an author's friend, the first chapter has been condensed. Removed the description of lol's combat power, and removed the specific description of mental power...... The prologue and the first chapter were merged, and some undesirable sentences were deleted...... Book friends take a look again, is it smoother than it was at the beginning......

The author's friend's evaluation is not bad.,I won't talk about what to say specifically.,It's roughly a point.。

One, the first chapter was a little dragged, and the back of the chapter entered the state. I looked back, and it was like this, overhaul.

Second, the second volume of the sword chapter and the super god space chapter, and the first dragon and snake chapter are all good and attractive. Hehe. Daoyi is happy, and it is happy that something written with heart is definitely obtained.

Clause. Or is it a matter of the Tentordo...... Hey, this volume, I'm careful, isn't it really bad? I didn't fix it. Because each chapter in it is a reflection that I have been thinking about for a long time. I didn't write in the usual way, writing the main character set cheats, and playing a supporting actress...... As a result, during the Tianlong scroll period, a bunch of book friends still said: Can you have some new ideas? ? …… Ay...... No way......

It's about to be pushed to the shelves, and I can't save the manuscript every day, and it's impossible to overhaul the dragon scroll. That's a waste of time and energy, so it's better to spend the freed up time on later ideas. In the fifth volume, there will be a larger layout, as well as the concept foreshadowing, so you can't be distracted.

It's going to be pushed tomorrow. This is another revision.,Just for excellence.,I don't know if it's the fourth or fifth revision.,Whether it's in the genuine or pirated network.,It's best to go back to the pen fun pavilion www.biquge.info read the previous chapter again, to see if it's better......

One qiē one qiē, just to get more new book friends, the initial version of this book, only you old book friends have read it...... Hehe...... Is it an honor? Laugh......

I love overhaul so much, I love to revise chapters, pirate websites must be very helpless...... Ha ha......

In addition, the period of strong push is still the second more one, and the storage period of the second code is new, and only after the outbreak on the shelves on Friday can we ensure that there are more than two more updates per day.

Also, I recently posted in the dragon sky, and I was doxxed, and then there was a dragon ball post, saying that my goal of more than 1000 is high for your current level......

Sweat...... I really hope that I can slap my face after it is released on Friday...... What do you say? Okay, okay, don't say much, I'm a bit of a mother-in-law, in fact, there are still a lot of things I want to communicate with you I want to say, so I won't talk about it today, just put it on the shelf.

After two chapters of the code today, I endured it and continued to code, but my brain still hurts a little...... Day, is it really the limit? Maybe it's my laziness, m, take your time, take your life, take it one step at a time...... I'm so proud that I've made up my mind to write it, and it's much better than my self-pity!