In the end, Tang Cake didn't talk to Yi Nian anymore, but stopped looking at his phone like an ostrich and went to sleep directly.

In the next few days, Yi Nian did not take the initiative to talk to her, nor did she post any more Weibo, and everything calmed down.

In addition to his Weibo tops and followers, there is one more.

The cake shop has also been busy, and Tang Cake is coding at home after work.

Suddenly, QQ receives a verification message.

Ask to add you as a friend.

Seeing this news, Tang Cake remembered this person.

Hurriedly clicked through, and Tang Cake first sent a "Hello"

The other side also quickly replied with a "hello"

Then came another message.

"That...... Can you help me look at what I wrote? ”

Tang Cake, in a responsible heart, immediately agreed.

Then the year sent a link.

As soon as Tang Cake clicked in, he was attracted by the title.

"The Black Belly Young Master Lori's Wife, Chasing His Wife 99 Times"

And then there's the suffocating synopsis:

She is a famous daughter abandoned by the upper class, in the eyes of outsiders, she is ignorant of the world, weak and bullied, but no one knows that she is the owner of the world's No. 1 nightclub.

He, the sole heir of a family with hundreds of millions of assets, is cold and ruthless, regards everything as nothing, and no one seems to be able to enter his heart.

When she meets him, what kind of sparks will collide?

……

This plot ...... It's really inexplicably familiar......

But Tang Cake still ordered to read.

According to Tang Cake's observation, this should be a new article written by him, with a word count of about 30,000, but the plot has developed rapidly, and it has reached the plot of the marriage of the male and female protagonists.

It can be seen that there are many plots that are just brushed aside, and most importantly!

No abuse points!

There are no desserts either!

It's bland, and there's really no idea of letting people watch it at all.

Although Tang Cake is not very professional, she can also see that if this article is to be changed, I am afraid that everything will have to be changed.

Tang Bao raised his hand to prop up his chin, and his fingers slid on the mouse, a little tangled.

She was thinking about how to say it most tactfully, and it would not hurt Nian He's heart the most.

After several minutes, Tang Cake still didn't figure out what to say.

And the New Year over there has been waiting very anxiously.

Why didn't she reply?

Could it be that my writing is too ugly?

I knew that I wouldn't have listened to Lu Dong's words and wrote this!

Nian Yu couldn't help but complain about the bad idea that Lu Dong gave him, saying that he could write a few more words with Tang Cake.

Now he is afraid that Tang Cake will give up directly because he writes so poorly.

Nian Yu hurriedly sent a message to the past.

"I'm not writing very well, you...... Let's see if it can be saved? ”

Tang Cake laughed on the spot when he saw the last sentence of the Nian Yu.

She really wanted to say that she couldn't be saved.

But Tang Cake can't say that, think about it again, as a boy, it's understandable that he doesn't write romance very well.

Besides...... He looks so handsome again.

Thinking about Nian Yu's face, Tang Cake felt that he could forgive him for such a suffocating text in an instant.

Tang Cake put his fingers on the keyboard and tapped a few times before he wrote euphemistically: "I think your writing is actually okay, your brain hole is good, but the writing and plot need to be strengthened." ”

That's pretty much a denial of the whole thing.

Nian Yu looked at Tang Cake's evaluation and felt that he really shouldn't have listened to Lu Dong's words.

But Tang Cake's next sentence made Nian Yu glad that he listened to Lu Dong's words.

"But we can talk a little bit more and improve it," she said. ”

Nian Yu was stunned for a moment, and then he was ecstatic, he raised his lips and solemnly issued a "good" word.

Later, Tang Cake didn't code words anymore, but discussed the plot with Nian Huan.

"You wrote it in a bit of a hurry, the plot developed too quickly, you can add some twists and turns or something."

The first is the plot, after all, as long as the writing can be read smoothly, it can pass the level.

Nian Yu is also very humble to accept suggestions.

"When your male and female protagonists meet for the first time, it can be that the female protagonist insults the female protagonist, and then the male protagonist comes out."

"You can add some scenes to describe here, it will be more feeling."

Due to the inconvenience of typing, Tang Cake could only hear Tang Cake talking on the QQ phone call with Nian Huan, and Nian Huan just hummed from time to time, and seemed to be able to hear his rustling and writing.

"And then it's when the male and female protagonists get along, I can feel that you're not used to writing this kind of emotional drama, you ......"

Speaking of this, Tang Cake stopped.

Nian Yu heard that Tang Cake didn't speak, and was puzzled, "Huh?" "Yes.

"Forget it, you can feel more about the time you get along with your girlfriend, or go and see those methods of flirting with girls on the Internet."

Tang Cake originally wanted to ask Nian He if he had ever talked about a girlfriend, but with their current relationship, it is still a little inappropriate to ask this, plus Nian Huan's appearance should not be someone who has never been in love...... Right?

Tang Cake was a little curious, but she didn't ask.

On the contrary, it was Nian Yu, who heard Tang Cake's words and said with some embarrassment: "But, but I haven't been in love......"

Tang Cake was stunned for a moment, but she didn't care much about it, but said calmly: "Oh, then you can read more flirting tutorials and other romance novels, and learn more." ”

Nian Yu was on the other end of the phone, and when he heard Tang Cake's words, he snorted.

Tang Cake glanced at the time on the computer, it turned out that she and Nian Yu had been on the phone for half an hour, Tang Cake felt that this time it was almost the same, and he would talk about it after Nian Huan finished revising the text.

So Tang Cake said to Nian He: "This time I will talk about this first, you can change the text first, and ask me if you have any questions." ”

Nian Yu heard that Tang Cake was about to end the call, and hurriedly said, "Wait, wait a minute!" ”

Tang Bao had already moved the mouse to end the call, and when she heard Nian Huan's words, she stopped her movements and asked suspiciously, "Is there any more questions?" ”

Nian He sat on the chair, moved twice with some anxiety, and when he heard Tang Cake's words, he stammered a little and said, "I, I'll come to C City in a few days, can I meet you?" ”

Tang Cake didn't expect that what Nian Yu wanted to say was this, even if he was through the screen, he could feel his nervousness, Tang Cake smiled and replied: "Of course you can, you can call me then." ”

When Nian Yu heard Tang Cake's answer, he was so excited that he couldn't help himself, so he could only control his laughter and say yes.

Later, Tang Cake hung up the phone, and Nian Hu sat in front of the computer, looking at the chat box between himself and Tang Cake, feeling that all this was like a dream.

Nian Huan noticed Tang cake two years ago, at that time, Nian Huan had just started to get in touch with online texts, but most of the online texts in order to better subscribe, will deliberately set up some abuse points, Nian Huan is not disgusted with these, on the contrary, it is because Nian Huan is too serious, and the abuse point is low, every time I see the abuse point, Nian Huan has been abused to the point that it is not good, and after a long time, Nian Huan will not read much text.

At that time, his college roommate and good brother Lu Dong found out about this and recommended an author to him.

The pen name is Sugar Cake.

The reason why Lu Dong recommended this author to him is that the pen name is so sweet, it is impossible to write abusive essays!

The ghost knows that at that time, Lu Dong just found a random person with a pen name from his own website that looked good.

But later it turned out that Lu Dong's reason was right, Sugar Cake is indeed an author who does not write abusive essays, and every novel he writes is very sweet, but he is not very famous.

But it's better, it's like discovering a treasure, Nian Huan has never told others about his favorite author, just to be able to hide her.

I thought so at first, but later the article written by Sugar Cake was discovered by others, but fortunately, there are still so many people who write online articles now, and there are still not many people who really like Sugar Cake.

But under her Weibo, you can always see someone who pities the sugar cake, and the text written is obviously very good-looking, but it is not very popular.

Whenever he sees this kind of comment, Nian He also feels sorry for the sugar cake, compared to hiding her, Nian He now hopes that the sugar cake can be known by more people.

And now he has this ability.