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"Blue Laurel", Sina Blog, the former Baidu Space's screen name Xinghua Feixi, etc. Writing science fiction inspired by UFO sightings in the late summer of 1987.

Since childhood, he has loved words, shuttled the Internet for more than ten years, and learned to write various genres. The level of writing does not correspond to the diploma, and writing works depends on the writing skills and the literary knowledge mastered.

In 2015, I began to conceive and write this science fiction work, but I had never been exposed to science fiction themes before, and I didn't know how to write it.

I have watched Liu Cixin's three-body series, and I have watched some Chinese and foreign science fiction works, and I have determined my own writing ideas.

Learn the philosophy of Tai Chi and gather information about UFOs. To be honest, whether it is an editor or an author, the theoretical and literary level of these people really does not dare to compliment.

Authentic editing and web editing, for words and literature is high school? Or a university? When it comes to literary creation, I can't see who has a high level?

Haha, threesome, there must be my teacher. The reasons for the rejection are: the novel has many complex settings, and there are several story threads - first, Midi was brought to Sirius by a UFO and met many alien partners; the second is the launch of China's Blu-ray program (research on extraterrestrial civilizations and tracking UFOs); the third is the world of undersea people; Fourth, the conflict between the alien forces and the earth broke out, and Orion provoked the contradiction between the undersea people and the land people, and finally Midi rushed back to save the earth.

But it is a pity that the four threads are not intertwined and developed in parallel, but form the story in this order, and do not form a complete narrative line, because the fragmentation of the scene makes the novel slightly messy, and it is recommended to readjust the story outline and narrative strategy.

Secondly, the novel actually lacks a character who can drive the story forward steadily, such as Mi Di, who does not appear until the later part of the novel after being taken away, and he is also absent from most of the plot in the middle, so he can only be regarded as a clue character.

It is suggested that one or two main characters can be created to make the novel cohesive and not loosely structured.

Finally, the narrative of the novel can be a little more concise, and many places will slow down the pace of the story.

That's what some editors have to say.

"The novel has a lot of complex settings, and there are several story threads." Acknowledging Liu Cixin's writing ability, writing a fairly simple story into a work of 900,000 words has inspired and borrowed from me in some ways of writing.

When we write articles, we pay attention to logic, logical thinking. Science fiction, science fiction, can't do without science, only illusion, not to mention fantasy.

My novels contain planetary physics, scientific knowledge, cultural knowledge, spiritual knowledge, etc. Science needs logic, stories need logic and other aspects of logic, and the starting point of my work is that we can't just rely on whims, we earth humans will drive starships all over the universe to compete for hegemony in the universe.

Humans on Earth are three-dimensional beings, and there are many dimensional spaces above them? What do human beings on earth rely on to compete for hegemony?

We didn't even fly out of the solar system? This is pure fantasy, so to speak, delusional.

"The four clues are not intertwined and developed in parallel", do you think that in your house, the kang head to the kang tip? In the novel, three-dimensional, four-dimensional, and five-dimensional spaces are written, and as for the time cone, this is also a problem, which involves a lot and cannot be understood.

I can only use a clumsy method to calculate, interstellar distance measurements are measured in light years, light years, comrades, the story comes and goes, not sitting on your kang head and eating melon seeds!

There are several worlds involved, and there can be no direct connection with each other, and there can only be some kind of connection according to the development of the story.

The questions posed by some of these editors are too amateurish, and you could say that from a literary point of view; What "Water Margin", what "Romance of the Three Kingdoms", this is what happened on Earth.

I'm writing science fiction, not "Journey to the West", nor "Fengshen Bang". What I have expounded from the spatial dimension to the density of the universe has to be written according to this logic.

We, the human beings on the earth, are three-dimensional space beings, are the material world, and completely mirror life, so don't fail to seek understanding.

I can't talk about theories and write storylines that don't match theories.

"The novel actually lacks a character who can drive the story forward steadily, such as Mi Di, who is taken away and does not appear until the later part of the novel, and he is also absent from most of the plot in the middle, so he can only be regarded as a clue character. It is suggested that one or two main characters can be created to make the novel cohesive and not loosely structured. ""Romance of the Three Kingdoms" is all familiar, is there a main character in it throughout the novel?

How many main lines are there? And how many main characters are there? Do you think this is a foreign film, sitting on the bench to go to Taiwan?

I wrote this because "Project Blu-ray" is only the first part of this series, and this is a series of novels, haha!

Some people, no matter what kind of literary level you have, how to make evaluations can be, before you say, you should study the scientific theory and logic in the novel.