"Let's not talk about it yet, give me the manuscript paper." The man waved his hand and stretched out his hand to Yun Hanzhi.

"I didn't bring it." Yun Hanzhi's hand tightened.

"What are you doing here without manuscript paper?" The man didn't believe it, got up from his seat, walked in front of Yun Hanzhi in a few steps, and stretched out his hand again: "Give it to me!" ”

"If you don't bring it, you don't bring it." Yun Han took a few steps back, trying to distance himself from the man.

"The letter is all written, the manuscript paper is equivalent to a token, don't lie to me." He squinted at Yun Han and clasped his arms around his chest, "Do you take it out or I will grab it myself." ”

Yun Han sighed in his heart.

Under the eaves, she could only bow her head first, and she reluctantly took out the manuscript paper and handed it to the man.

As soon as the man got his hands on the paper, he immediately read it.

I have to say that his impatient appearance pleased Yun Hanzhi.

It proves that what she wrote is read, and there is still a little pride in my heart when I think about it.

After a few moments, the man put the paper away and tucked it into his sleeve.

Yun Hanzhi was surprised, "This is my thing!" Bring! ”

The man didn't care, "Little girl, don't be so stingy, don't worry about the old man." ”

Yun Hanzhi raised his eyebrows, "Give it to me, even with the last time." "It's embarrassing to grab people's things at a lot of age.

The man rolled up his sleeves, returned to his seat, and said, "Write more next time, it's good." ”

Draw a flatbread with an empty mouth, a stranger, and it's strange to believe him. Besides, she is the eldest lady of the British Prince's Mansion, and she still needs any benefits from him.

I have never seen such a thick skin, Yun Hanzhi is displeased.

After thinking about it, I can't beat it, this time forget it first, and find a chance to fight back next time.

Yun Hanzhi didn't look at him anymore, turned around and walked towards the pavilion on the rockery.

Stand tall and look far away, and find out where this is.

"Where are you going?" The man saw that the situation was not right, and followed.

"If you don't speculate for more than half a sentence, it will be indefinite." Yun Han didn't look back, and quickened his pace.

What's the use of running fast, Yun Hanzhi looked at the person in front of him and sighed in his heart.

Sure enough, she was still not fast enough, and the man used his skills and stood in front of her again.

"You little girl, you really don't know what to do, do you know who I am?" The man looked unhappy and stared at her.

"I want to hear about it." Yun Hanzhi saw that the person's expression was hateful, but he didn't make any moves that hurt her, she was a lot more relieved, and made a deferential appearance.

"Here you go." The man reached through his sleeve and took out some pieces of paper.

Yun Hanzhi took it, she opened it and looked, wasn't that what she originally wrote? Why are there so many words on it?

"This is ......," Yun Hanzhi's eyes were puzzled.

"Can't understand this?" The man smirked.

He felt that after doing a good deed, it was best for him to explain it himself, and no one could say it as clearly as himself.

"You gave me a correction?" Yun Hanzhi asked, with some disbelief in his tone.

"Yes." The man replied in a smug manner, swallowing all the words in his stomach. He wanted to brag to her.

She guessed it, but there seemed to be something wrong with her attitude, and the man asked, "Why, you don't believe it?" ”

Yun Hanzhi pursed his lips and shook his head, it's not that he doesn't believe it!

She looked at it just now, and the annotations on it were really detailed, and she had to fight with her husband to correct her homework. Does he have such good intentions?

Cloud contains

The man's expression fell into the man's eyes.

The man's face sank, what is this girl's attitude, the facts are already so clear, don't you believe it, don't you believe in him? "Believe it or not, that's the truth."

"Then why did you change it for me?" Yun Hanzhi couldn't figure it out.

"It's not because your writing is too poor, the choice of words and sentences is poor, the syntactic structure is poor, and the words are poorly written, so I really can't stand it." The man pointed out politely.

Yun Hanzhi was even more incomprehensible, "If it's really so bad, why do you have to bother with it?" ”

"Don't you understand, I'm pointing you out." Did she deliberately pretend not to understand?

"I don't understand, you have nothing to tell me to do?" Yun Hanzhi continued with a stunned expression.

"Why are you and me?" Why don't you understand, I heard that Yun Zhenkun's granddaughter is quite clever.

"Idle?" Yun Hanzhi asked tentatively, although his face was puzzled, his heart was happy. Let you scare me, tease you.

As soon as she looked at those annotations, she actually understood in her heart. She saw it when she was in Tianshu Pavilion that day, this person looked strange, and his understanding of the script was indeed quite profound.

Besides, she knows best what level she is, and she has the attitude of giving it a try, and if someone praises her, she will be embarrassed to agree.

The man looked at Yun Hanzhi fixedly, wanting to see if she really didn't understand or pretended. Seeing that her doubts did not seem to be fake, he sighed, "You are right, I am idle." "Nosy and angry.

If it weren't for the fact that he hadn't had a new writer to tease him with lately, he wouldn't have left her alone.

As soon as he remembered that no one had paid attention to him recently, he fell silent and began to reflect silently in his heart.

Did he make too many jokes, and the writers were so scared of him that even if he stood at the top of the writer's world, no one wanted to play with him.

Perhaps, he should change his attitude?

As soon as I thought about this, I already had an idea in my heart.

"Yun family girl, don't be afraid, you see that I am kind enough to point out your shortcomings and want you to make more long-term progress." The man said, the original look of sorrow disappeared, and a sincere smile appeared on his face, "Look at me, as the most successful writer in Jindu, with me personally guiding you, are you still worried about not being able to improve?" ”

Yun Hanzhi's words were really unreadable, if it weren't for the merits of her story, he wouldn't be able to read it.

Yun Han listened, this person's tone is really not small, and he claims to be standing at the top, how tall can he be?

Yun Han was a little unbelieving in his heart, and glanced at him up and down, "You said that you are the most successful writer, I will believe it?" Why don't you say you're Mr. Fengyue? ”

The man was overjoyed, "I am!" ”

Yun Hanzhi sneered, "You are Mr. Fengyue?" ”

She took a few steps back again, how could Mr. Fengyue be like this, just listening to the name, it should be an elegant and talented person, how could it be like this.

Besides, how lingering Mr. Fengyue's words and drama are written, how could they be from the hands of such a strange old man?

The old man was depressed again, shouldn't he be full of admiration and excitement when he heard that he was Mr. Fengyue? How could he seem like a liar in her eyes?

In his usual style, he would have rushed up and roared first, but now, he didn't want to be alone. He was afraid that he would scare her away, and he didn't know when a new writer would come.

"Yun family girl, what are you thinking?" Mr. Fengyue retracted his posture of rushing forward, and walked slowly towards Yun Hanzhi instead, with a friendly expression.

"Are you really Mr. Fengyue?" Yun Hanzhi asked.

"It's like a fake." Mr. Fengyue stood still and replied with a serious face.

"How do you prove it?"

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