Testimonials + new book upload

First of all, I am very grateful to every friend who was able to finish this book, and I am also grateful to those who once liked it, but later had to give up this book because of my mistakes, and I also want to say sorry, and of course thank those who saw this testimonial.

Thank you! get！

Strictly speaking, this book is my second finished book, the first book is very miserable, this book is much better, this is really thank you very much, but unfortunately for various reasons, there are objective reasons, graduation problems, and my subjective mistakes, the later stage of this book has actually deviated from the original track, lost the original style, that is to say, collapsed, and collapsed twice, the problem boils down, that is

1: I didn't pay so much attention to the main line before, but it collapsed in the later stage.

2: The background and various power systems are poorly designed, and even some worlds do not take the initiative to introduce the background and directly develop the story, resulting in some places looking messy.

3. I care too much about the so-called climax, the rhythm is too tight, there is no buffer of a peaceful plot, it is easy to be aesthetically fatigued, and most of the plot is fighting.

Of course, there are all kinds of other problems, but these three are simply fatal, and they are all my mistakes.

The new book will pay attention to these three points.,It's a background similar to the world of the East Xuan.,It's been updated——, named incompetent.,I hope you can like it.,Support it a lot.,Thank you~.

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