Qing Xiaoyu's long comment

Theme: [Long Comment] It's exciting to watch

Anyway, after so many years of mixing at the beginning, this is the first book that gave me the urge to write a review,

First of all, I feel that the author's plot is very well arranged, very rigorous, and very compact, and many plots can be foreshadowed in the front. The rhythm is also very well arranged, it is very eye-catching, and I can't stop it......

I looked at it on my phone at school, saw V, and then cried directly, and I couldn't watch it until I got home.

Secondly, the whole growth of the heroine, the whole psychological change is very natural, it comes naturally, there is no feeling that some Wenwen instantly transforms into a dynamic superman, and smashes the little monster to death with a dynamic light wave, after being reborn, I also had a little expectation for Kong XX, and after all the expectations are shattered, I really devote myself wholeheartedly to the cause of revenge. Moreover, the heroine's ability is also improving little by little, and it hasn't suddenly become IQ280, it's just the feeling that I used to love eating, drinking, and having fun.

Then, about the magical mother and daughter, I love her very much, she is extremely resilient, like a cockroach that can't be killed, and she has her own bad reasons, Qiu Wanyi is a very powerful woman, she acted well in her previous life, and in this life, after Changqing knows her true face, she can still stand, which is really admirable, and the whole image of the character is very plump, which will make me think of that sentence, hateful people must have pity.

Then, about the controversy about Brother Xiao Feng, I looked at the comment area, and the competition was very lively, personally, I hope Comrade Xiao Feng will become the male lead, for three reasons

One, with my cosmic invincible super intuition, I felt that he was the male protagonist at first sight, and he was full of anger. Well, because I love soldiers so much, I can't stop being many.

Second, I think if Xiao Feng becomes the male lead, it will be more innovative. I've seen too many of the best belly black + short protection, that kind of almighty male protagonist, if it appears, is it going to be, first get to know the female owner, and then chase after it, and then help bring down that family, and then have a reunion? I prefer Xiao Feng to be like this, who has the potential to be abusive and sadistic, and has a lot of room for development, making it difficult for readers to guess what will happen later.

Third, I personally think that Xiao Feng is more suitable for Changqing, first of all, Xiao Feng has the strength to protect Changqing, and his family background is said to be a combination of government and business, and when Changqing is rich, the two will be invincible in the universe if they hook up. Secondly, Changqing should be regarded as having a black belly now, this kind of clean man stands next to him, only then does he feel a sense of complementarity, if two black bellies are big and one is small, how tired should life be? In the end, Xiao Feng has a lot of room to grow, some people say that he is too naïve, it is incredible that the big family comes out and grows like this, well, I personally think that it is not handled very well here, but after all, it is a military family, especially with the old soldier like Xiao Feng's grandfather, we can understand it a little, after Changqing went overseas, it was time for Xiao Feng to grow up, grinding away the naivety of his youth, but that principle is deeply rooted in the bone marrow, very upright, very manly, very personable, very ...... Xiao Feng grew up.

In addition, after praising it, I also want to mention some things that I think are not good.

Xiao Feng's personality is a more obvious place, if the family background and personality correspond, it is a bit far-fetched, and it is also a point of debate for many people, (but I just love him.) )

Secondly, I feel that the description of the environment is not enough, and I can write more about the surrounding environment. Except for the part of the Gu family's mansion, the other places where Changqing appeared gave me the feeling of a cottage--, there was no feeling of a wealthy family, not rich enough, not enough nouveau riche. (Of course, it is not excluded that I am poor, so there is no way to imagine it, there is no way to be immersive).

Finally, I just saw Prince Huang appear today, and I don't love him very much, and it is certain that I will have entanglements with the heroine in the future, and it will be a very headache, whether it is an enemy or a friend, it is not clear, but whether it is an enemy or a friend, it is very obscene.

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