Theme: [Long Comment] Thirteen, go your own way, according to your own ideas, let others say go!

I saw that some people on the comments said that Yas's plots can be written briefly, and there are too many descriptions of overseas scenes, and I want to see Dou Xiaosan, Dou stepmother, and Dou my father. There are some who say that the author is dragging the plot.

I just want to say, Thirteen Big, go your own way, let others say go. You just write according to the plot you have designed

Why? Although the yokan is beautiful, it is difficult to adjust. Everyone has different opinions, each has its own eyes, some people think it is bad, just others think it is good, from the beginning to the end of an article, it is impossible to satisfy people everywhere, let alone make everyone satisfied, which is normal.

Personally, I don't like to see the author be influenced by the comments and change the original plot, because then it would feel like the original soup has lost its flavor.

And in my opinion, this reborn daughter of a wealthy family is not only a modern house fight, fighting a junior, fighting a stepmother, fighting a father, but more importantly, the heroine's strong growth process, step by step on the road to success.

Considering the plot of this article alone, I personally think Yas is a very important part. Overseas is part of the plot. What's the point of a simple house fight if it's just a house fight? And the simple house fight, don't you think it's too monotonous?

In his previous life, Changqing was a novice, and he didn't know anything, so he was framed like this. If she doesn't grow up step by step, how can she fight with her stepmother? And overseas is also part of the growth process, in the previous life, Yas was a very important person to Changqing, Changqing loved Yas deeply, but Yas, first caused her to have an abortion, and then drugged her to take drugs. In this life, these circumstances were repeated, and although Yas hesitated, he finally picked up the bag of baifen. The process may be a little different, but the result is the same, and he still has to start. Some of the children's shoes felt that Yas was not bad enough, because his premise was different. Why do you think Changqing hates him like this? You might as well think about it from another perspective, if you are Changqing and love someone deeply, first have an abortion, and then be drugged and take drugs, what will happen to this feeling? The deeper you love, the more you hate. In her previous life, a person who loved her so much hurt her like this, how could she be less ink? And if there is no such description, don't you think there is some jump in the house fight all day long? If Yas hadn't harmed her, how could Qiu's detailed description of the process have deepened this contradiction?

There is another important point, it is necessary to write about the overseas situation in detail. It was Feng Jue, because Feng and Changqing grew up in different environments, he didn't know that Changqing was reborn, and Yas hadn't fully used these harmful methods in this life. Feng didn't know that Changqing was killed by these people in his previous life, and if there was no description of this process, the conflict between him and Changqing's concept might be even more difficult to solve. Because he couldn't feel Changqing's pain, the main reason was that it didn't happen, and he couldn't feel it. After all, he didn't know that the heroine was reborn. Therefore, this section overseas is very important, and this is also the process of making Feng Jue support him more and more and deeply understand her pain. If none of this is true, how can he feel her pain so well?

As for Changqing's tennis play, I think this place also needs to be written in detail. Because this is an important way for Changqing to fight his stepmother and father who have to pretend to study poorly, in order to get into a good school. Tennis is very important to Changqing, and it is very important for her to get into a good university. This is an important part of her growth, how can I write about it? In fact, having said that, it is precisely because of Changqing's performance in tennis that Yas hesitates to start, right? Tennis is also an important aspect of Changqing's character.

Overall, so far, the author has arranged the plot well, with a degree of relaxation and plot twists.

The children's shoes who are anxious to watch the play can't become fat in one bite, and Changqing's road still has to come out step by step. Without coming out of the ground and striving to grow up, how could it be possible to fight these such powerful bad guys?

So the Thirteenth Congress, go your own way, write according to your own ideas, and don't be influenced by these comments. Let people say go!

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