Interpreting the reader's doubts (1): The vulgar way of opening?

There are thousands of ways to open, the reason why it is so chosen is because this is the most familiar way to open, you can quickly open into the scene, please rest assured, the author refuses to be clichéd, and the back is a new bridge, pretending to be forced to slap the face without stopping, to ensure that you are so cool that you cramp;

Commentator Doubt 2 (2): The pace is too fast and slightly disordered.

In fact, the content of the first chapter is actually intended to be narrated by the author in three chapters, and then compressed and deleted into one chapter, which was originally intended to quickly present the essence to everyone as soon as possible, but it directly led to the problem of cohesion, reduced the sense of substitution, and added some reasonable foreshadowing and some necessary interpretations in the revised draft.

Interpretation of readers' doubts (3): The intensification of the contradiction between the male protagonist and the female protagonist makes the article too heavy.

This is also the author's uncomfortable place, suddenly cloudy, the atmosphere is depressing, from a relaxed spoof to sadistic sadness, metaphor obscure, so that some book friends can't accept it, but read it to have that kind of heartiness to see the clouds, if it hurts everyone's heart, the author is sorry, and the revised draft will be appropriately deleted.

Exciting start:

Qingbei Noble School, noon, benches.

"Twitter..."

"Congratulations to the user on winning the lottery: you are the 888888 th user in arrears, and the YY system will be rewarded! Please redeem it in time! ”

The phone prompt sounds.

The same text message has been received three times, and Wu Fan did not hesitate to delete it.

Made, such a low fraud, a fraudster who doesn't have a brain, an idiot will be fooled!

At this time, a girl approached.

"Ding,

Name: Niu Rong

8 points for appearance,

Stature 7.8 points,

Conduct: Poor,

Value: 0"

The mobile phone, which had been in arrears for two days, actually sounded again.

What's the situation? Is this phone out of order?

Wu Fan wondered in his heart.

The person who came was none other than Niu Rong, Wu Fan's girlfriend for a year.

Wu Fan is known for her good temper, which is also one of the important reasons why Niu Rong chose Wu Fan. Niu Rong's family background is very ordinary, her parents are both working-class, not much better than Wu Fan's family background, but she has a vain heart, she has no princess's life, but she has the princess's illness.

Wu Fan hurriedly pressed the shutdown button, smiled, and said:

"Rong'er, happy birthday, look at the apple 20s I gave you!"

"Smack!"

The girl's face was gloomy as water, and she slapped the phone down.

"Now that the apple is 22, you can buy me 20s, it's still a parallel import, can I have a happy birthday? Parted! ”

Niu Rong's words were simple, direct and domineering, without being verbose, and there was no expression on her face.

"But I bought it with the money I saved from my work-study program, and my own mobile phone has been shut down in arrears."

Wu Fan tried his best to plead, hoping to get Niu Rong's forgiveness.

"That only means that you are useless, and you are even more useless!"

The girl's words were a little vicious.

"Niu Rong, you can insult me, you can't insult my dad!"

Wu Fan's face was pale, and he looked at Niu Rong.

"What's wrong with insulting your dad, your whole family is garbage, don't accept it, you come to bite me!"

A male voice sounded, and a tall figure appeared.

"Tyrant mighty!"

Niu Rong rushed over excitedly and wrapped her arms around the boy's neck to give a hot kiss.

How could this be, Wu Fan instantly stiffened in place, his face became even more ugly, how could it be him?

"Wang--Ba--Hao!!"

Wu Fan's face was full of astonishment and anger.

The boy stepped forward with his arms around Niu Rong's waist, pouted and said:

"Wu scumbag, I heard that you have been in love with Rong'er for a year, but you don't have a skin-to-skin relationship! Is it wrong for me to say that you are useless? Hehe, do you want to know what Rong'er tastes like? Let me tell you, it tastes a little sassy! ”

Niu Rong twisted her waist very cooperatively, and her entire upper body fell deeply into the crook of the boy's arm, making a coquettish shape, and the boy's hand rubbed against Niu Rong's buttocks.

The boy's provocative gaze stared straight into Wu Fan's eyes!

The clay man still has three points of fire, let alone a flesh-and-blood person!

insulting his family has touched Wu Fan's bottom line.

In front of himself, he staged a buttocks groping killing, and he simply regarded himself as nothing!

Shame, shame! Even if you fight to the death today, you have to fight for this breath!

Wu Fan clenched his fists, his anger seemed to burn his eyes through, and when he was about to fight hard, the mobile phone prompt sounded:

"Twitter...

Name: Bahao Wang

Strength: 300

Martial arts value 250

Character: Extremely poor"

What's the situation? It's turned off, why is it still ringing?

The boy is Wu Fan's classmate, and his father is a famous real estate developer in Qingbei, a standard rich second generation, as his name suggests, domineering and arrogant, and he takes pleasure in digging people's corners.

"Twitter...

User: Wu Fan

Strength: 80

Martial Value: 0

Conduct: Excellent"

"After systematic analysis, if there is a conflict, Wu Fan will be crushed! Does the user turn on the YY Reality system? ”

"Open!"

Wu Fan drank heavily, barely thinking about it.

"Fuck your sister, scare Lao Tzu!"

Wang Bahao scolded, confused by this sudden roar.

"Twitter...

If the system is successfully opened, will I redeem the newcomer package? ”

"Redeem!"

Wu Fan shouted!

"My head is in the water, I'm going to open your sister, you're still saying right?"

Wang Bahao was a little confused.

"The newcomer gift package is opened, and a copy of "Cattle Moving Dafa" is given, is it opened? ”

"Hit!"

Wu Fan drank.

"Still fighting? I can't beat you! It just so happens that Lao Tzu's hands are itchy. ”

Wang Bahao was disdainful, with Wu Fan's physique, seven or eight were not his opponents!

"Twitter...

Please select a character? ”

The sound of the mobile phone was inaudible to outsiders, Wu Fan realized.

The cattle interface opens, and a list of ancient and modern Chinese and foreign cattle people is listed in alphabetical order!

"Adriano

Avanti

Archimedes

………

Bruce lee

………

Michael jackson

…

Messi

……

Jordan

……

Pan Jinlian

……

Hitler

…………

Zhang Depei

………

Zhang Fei

………

Zhang Song"

"The interface is open, please select the character!"

"Zhang Fei!"

This time, Wu Fan didn't say it out loud, but his heart moved.

"System prompt: It is recommended not to use it due to the user's poor physical strength!"

"Use."

Wu Fan, who was on the verge of rage, did not hesitate.

"Twitter...

Zhang Fei: The fierce general of the Three Kingdoms

Strength: 10000

Martial value: 9000

Skill (1): Lion's Roar

Case: Dangyang Bridge was broken with a drink

Skill (2): Zhanghachi Snake Spear

Case: Shirtless War Horse Super

A spiritual light poured into Wu Fan's head, Wu Fan felt that the strength of his body had doubled, and his whole body was full of energy, but his muscles were extremely painful, as if they were about to tear.

User: Wu Fan

YY value: 0

Strength: 500

Mart: 500"

Due to his poor physique, he only reached one-eighteenth of Zhang Fei's ability value.

It's only 1/18, but the sense of power is so real.

At this moment, Wu Fan's mood was extremely excited.

The system turned out to be real!

Strength 500, martial value 500, enough, enough...!

The system is in hand, I have it in the world!

Possessed by cattle people, martial arts!

It won't be long before I will become a top student, become a class president, serve as the president of the student union, hold hands with the four major school flower ......, and walk to the peak of life, think about it and be a little excited!

"Are you going to fight or not? Look at your forced appearance, Harazi is so out! ”

Wu Fan shook his head and returned to Earth!

His grandmother is a bear, patronizing and looking forward to the future, and the howl of this king in front of him has not been solved.

"Lao Tzu's throat is already hungry and thirsty, just take you under the knife!"

Wu Fan squinted his eyes and said in a deep voice.

"Psycho, I'm going to blow your throat!"

Wang Bahao rushed up with an arrow step, turned his fist into a claw, and went straight to Wu Fan's throat.

Obviously, it took all his strength to kill him.

Wu Fan gathered enough strength, took a deep breath, and shouted:

"Grass ............ Buddhist nun............ Horse! ”

A sound of grass Nima is like a thunderbolt on a sunny day, earth-shattering, piercing the clouds and cracking silk.

An invisible energy is pouring out!

Wang Bahao, who struggled forward, couldn't move in an inch, and his ears were shocked and he was deaf at the moment! The body that jumped in the air fell to the ground in an instant, and his head hit the stone, and he got up a big bag.

Looking at Niu Rong again, she fell to the ground and covered her ears desperately.

The skirt was torn apart by an invisible force. The small pink thong is exposed on the outside. On the root of the fair-skinned thighs, the word "Bahao" is clearly tattooed.

Wu Fan saw it, he was furious, and his eyes were cracked.

"Cheap...... Cheap...... Person...... Person......! ”

Louder, higher and stronger voices came, and more violent energy whistled, and Wang Bahao's jeans had been torn, revealing his thighs full of black hair.

Niu Rong's upper school uniform had been torn to shreds and scattered in the wind.

Made, it turns out that this slut has been lying to me all along. I said why he kept not letting me close!

It turned out that she was just a bae-breasted, and she was forced to become a D milk.

"Cool...!"

With two roars, all the resentment, repression, and humiliation were vented...

Wu Fan spurted out a mouthful of blood.

With a weak body, it will be difficult to withstand the domineering martial arts!

However, Wu Fan was very happy in his heart.

Finally, I can happily punish these two bastards.

A lot of classmates gathered around.

I'll it, isn't that beef puree? It turned out to be a small steamed bun. That towering sense of déjà vu is cushioned! Swindler!

What happened? What are these two guys doing? His clothes were torn into small strips.

Is this going to play cosplay? What hula do the big guys do?

……

The surrounding classmates were talking.

When did Wang Bahao suffer such anger? Whether at school, at home, or in society, he has always been used to bullying others, and when did others dare to touch him.

"Stop screaming, I can't stand it!"

The hysterical Wang Bahao got up from the ground and ran towards Wu Fan, trying to choke Wu Fan's throat again!

Wu Fan himself has been hit hard, and it is difficult to perform the lion's roar skill again!

By the way, Zhang Fei's second skill, Zhangba Snake Spear.

Wu Fan hurriedly picked up a stick. Use a stick as a spear.

Wu Fan did not dodge Wang Bahao's attack, but directly met it and stabbed Wang Bahao in the shoulder with a stick.

With a click, the stick broke, and Wang Bahao's entire body was churning in the air, and the strength was so great that it could be seen.

Wang Bahao's body has not yet touched the ground in the air.

Wu Fan started, raised half of the wooden stick, and shouted:

"The spirit snake is out of the hole!"

Wu Fan saw a broken belly and stabbed it directly.

There is no typo, it is indeed broken, but the trick is wrong, it is not the spirit snake out of the hole, this is the spirit snake into the hole, the remaining half of the stick, directly into the Wang Bahao chrysanthemum...!

After a period of terrible Wang Bahao's howl, Wang Bahao had completely lost his combat effectiveness.

"Ding,

User Wu Fan successfully punishes the wicked and rewards YY value of 50

Current Balance: 50yy"

The system prompt sounded, and I remembered inexplicably again.

What the hell is YY?

Could it be something similar to a virtual coin that can be exchanged for items in the system?

Wu Fan thought to himself.

"Wu Fan, what are you doing, you don't fight for yourself, beat people to vent your anger, you deserve to be dumped by me! With your virtue, you can't find a girlfriend in your life! ”

Niu Rong protected her chest with both hands, stood up, and took advantage of the crowd to take the opportunity to humiliate Wu Fan.

Wu Fan straightened his body, looked at the other party contemptuously, and said in a deep voice:

"I really don't know where you got the courage, standing up for an ad, wearing a small ding, and daring to make a big deal here, Lao Tzu announced, I'll divorce you now!"

Wu Fan has been relieved, fortunately, after this incident, he fully understands the true face of this money-worshipping evil woman, and from now on, old and dead will not get along.

"Don't believe him, I dumped him, you see this is the copycat phone he bought for me, today is my birthday, but he gave me a broken copycat phone, because he didn't pay attention to me, I dumped him!"

Niu Rong pleaded loudly, pointing to the Apple 20s copycat machine on the ground.

All the classmates turned their eyes to the mobile phone, thinking that what Niu Rong said was true.

"Who said this phone was given to you? This is a gift from Wu Fan! ”

A graceful figure appeared, and a pleasant voice sounded.

"Hanyan!"

Everyone said in unison.

This is a real school flower.

With pale skin, graceful body, and a touching arc, ordinary school clothes can wear the temperament of a world supermodel, and a simple smile can turn everyone upside down!

"Wu Fan, thank you for the gift you gave me, it's so beautiful!"

Han Yan picked up the copycat mobile phone, put it in his bag, put his right hand on Wu Fan's arm, and pressed half of his body up.

What happened seemed to be very clear.

Whether he was dumped by Niu Rong, or Wu Fan had a new love and took the initiative to take Niu Rong, a discerning person can know at a glance!

The school girl's actions are far better than her pale and feeble arguments, and staying here can only be more insulted!

Niu Rong was ashamed, picked up Wang Bahao, dragged half a wooden stick, and staggered away.

Niu Rong was not the only one who collapsed, almost all the male classmates who were watching were heartbroken.

When did the goddess become his girlfriend?

A moment of astonishment turned to anger.

If the gaze could kill, Wu Fan would have already pierced through ten thousand arrows.

"It can't be true, the goddess deliberately angered those two bastards for the sake of justice."

A boy said.

"I think so, how can we be together silently!"

The boys breathed a sigh of relief and waited for Hanyan to let go of Wu Fan's arm.

But what was surprising was that Han Yan didn't mean to let go of his hand, and still hugged Wu Fan's arm tightly.

"Wu Fan, I'll help you make up for the class!"

Han Yan smiled and continued.

In full view of everyone, our scumbags and cowards openly walked into the classroom with the school flower.

Don't just look at it, you can collect a collection and praise something, and the Nine Days Dance will be respectful first!