Not long after the book opened, the book was only 10 days old, but someone told me that there was a problem with my book.

With the idea of humbly asking for advice, I asked the question, and the other party's reason made me helpless.

He said that my writing was too complicated, some too slow, and I could only say, isn't that what this kind of game is? Maybe it's because I can't grasp the rhythm, and it's true that some of the details are too much, but I think it's interesting!

I've also thought about being more concise, such as:

Wang Hao decided to jump from the airport, and when the plane arrived in the sky, he jumped directly and fell to the C-shaped building, and happened to see a person who landed not far away, picked up an M16 on the ground, and loaded the bullet. "Da Da Da~" killed the other party directly!

There are almost three or four more at the airport, and they will be solved one by one! I went downstairs and searched, a troll, so I walked to the radar station, and suddenly saw a figure, followed over, and solved it with one shot!

There is a solution to one, and there are two, casually strolled, I found the two people, and after solving it, he left the airport, he has now fully graduated, arrived at the bridge, began to block the bridge, lucky, circle at the airport.

In more than six minutes, the bridge was successfully blocked, fourteen were killed, and three people were killed.

The finals are at the top of Qiaotou Mountain, kill the last four people, eat chicken! Good luck!

Ahem, ahem, do you want me to write that? Do you like that? I can actually do it, just look at your thoughts, if you really think it's better, I can't help it, so, like to write like this, say it in the book review area, if you like me to keep the original way of writing, also say it, I like everyone's opinions~

By the way, some people may not be able to write comments, it's okay, plus the group told me that it's okay~~~~~ I'm not lying to you guys to join the group~~~~

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