Chapter 21: Desolate Snow
Everyone has a period of such simplicity;
The bards saw a teenager who entered the academy through his own efforts and grew up step by step.
When they learned that Lin Lei was a down-and-out nobleman, their expressions looked much better. The most taboo in the adventure story is that the protagonist has no roots, he is a commoner, and if he is a nobleman, he can become an inspirational revival, which can barely be regarded as a stream.
But when they heard the chapter 'Bleak Snow', their faces changed;
The protagonist Lin Lei stood on the snowy white street, silently watching his beloved Alice walk away, heartbreaking but unable to say a word; This real repressed emotion silenced the bards;
is different from the story of Karina, the 'General Luo' who came out of the shadows after a fierce mental struggle,
Lin Lei did not have the chivalry to dedicate himself to the empire, broke the jar, closed himself in the house, and collapsed, which made people worry about him;
But it is precisely because of this that it is different, so that this role is not a rigid template. At this time, Ge Lin took back the evaluation that had barely entered the stream, and he listened intently, with a trace of seriousness on his face.
Su Xiaobai: "The file is like a butterfly, like a dream, Lin Lei looked at the stone sculpture blankly. ”
"The stone sculpture is a woman, the Alice he loves dearly."
"Stone carving is called waking up from a dream."
The hall was quiet, with a little memory and sorrow on everyone's faces, and those who had the same experience even had tears in their eyes;
Panlong is a cool text, but these bards understand life in it...... If the words 'it's dark' appear in the story, they can all understand that the sky represents the empire, the black represents the suffering environment, and the tone is the particle of tone.
They didn't want to see Lin Lei depressed, they hoped that Lin Lei would stand up and become strong enough, and then tell Alice that the aristocratic Kalan she liked was actually like that, and then look at her regretful expression and secretly refreshed;
This group of otherworldly readers still don't know that this kind of all-purpose routine is called pretending to be forced to slap in the face!
Throughout all the routines in the online article; Fifty avenues, competing with each other, only pretending to be forced to slap the face stand out.
It stands to reason that it has stood the test of countless readers and time. At the very least, it's almost a kill for novice readers!
This group of bards can't wait for Su Xiaobai to speak faster, their joys, sorrows and sorrows are all linked to Lin Lei, or they can't wait to see Lin Lei pretending to be ......
For people from other worlds who have never been exposed to online literature and have chaotic thoughts, the birth of Panlong is tantamount to a candle flame that people flock to, and there are foreigners in the real world who rely on Panlong to successfully detoxify, which shows how high the charm of online literature is.
"After waking up from the stone carving, Lin Lei cultivated even harder."
"He entered the Warcraft Forest, the Misty Valley."
"Get stronger, keep getting stronger, in order to be able to raise your head in front of the nobles,"
"Lin Lei was covered in bruises."
But he didn't give up. Alice's betrayal, his father's expectations, made his spine as straight as a gun. ”
"Cultivate! Keep getting stronger! ”
Under Su Xiaobai's subdued and frustrated narration, many people felt tears in their eyes, and Lin Lei's resolute face and injured appearance came to mind, which was so clear, as if it was close at hand, and he could see him carrying thorns step by step.
Gorin, the master of the story, took a deep breath, slowly closed his eyes, and immersed all his spirit in the story. He knew that the protagonist of the story at this moment, the boy named Lin Lei, was no longer a dry name.
Su Xiaobai's voice was excited: "Finally, Lin Lei ushered in the assessment of Ernst Academy!" ”
The hearts of everyone in the hall were raised to their throats, and they stared at Su Xiaobai nervously.
"He passed! With the first place result! ”
"And looking at history, it can also be ranked second!" Su Xiaobai said emotionally.
At this moment, all the repression and contradictions, such as a volcanic eruption, tens of thousands of words of 'suppression', finally ushered in 'Yang'.
The hall resounded with thunderous applause, and the excitement on everyone's faces was overflowing, and there was only one thought left in their hearts, 'It's too good to listen to the story.' ’
Karina's heart was extremely hot, and for some reason, when he heard the sentence that Lin Lei was the first in the assessment, he felt very excited for some reason, as if he was the one who took the first test;
At the same time, Karina is also thinking hard, trying to analyze why Panlong is so attractive from the story structure. In an instant, a few vague words crossed his mind, and his eyes lit up;
Those words are 'a suppressed genius, everyone thinks he is not a genius, he is actually a genius', 'someone comes to step on the protagonist, merciless ridicule, the more ruthless the better', 'the protagonist's strength explodes, the 666 and stunned expressions of the onlookers', 'the supporting character's heart changes to the protagonist whose strength changes'......
I have to say, Karina is a genius!
He's trying to explore interdimensional cultures! It's just that the deeper the contact, the more frightened Karina becomes, and the seemingly simple 'first suppress and then promote' can derive so many uses behind it.
In Panlong's story, he is happy for Lin Lei, angry for Lin Lei, no matter the story structure or writing techniques, it makes him feel like he is in the vast ocean.
Master Golin's serious expression melted like an iceberg, and his appearance even frightened several bards next to him, who hadn't seen Golin smile for too long.
Gerin applauded lightly and exclaimed sincerely: "This is really a good story. ”
He stood up, and under the shocked gaze of everyone, he gave him a deep hug without caring about the dirt on Su Xiaobai's armor.
"Congratulations, Mr. Soul, you're qualified!"
Ge Lin personally put a feather badge on Su Xiaobai's chest.
Su Xiaobai, successfully passed the assessment of the Bard Guild!
He was happy in his heart, and hurriedly said, "Thank you for your recognition, Master Golin. ”
Several other bards also stood up and congratulated.
"Mr. Hahasur, I must come to the guild to sit down when I have time in the future, I still want to hear Lin Lei's story."
"I have great respect for you, Lin Lei's story is so exciting."
"Oh my God, for some reason, I'm desperate to know the next chapter."
"Although there are some flaws in the beginning, the adventure story is not valued by the aristocracy...... But I still have to say, Panlong is really good. Do you want to come to the Bard? ”
Su Xiaobai couldn't hold back their enthusiasm, the group of self-proclaimed elegant and clean bards used to be disdainful of his dirty outfits, but now, I can't wait to come over and hug them one by one, like a group of fans who have discovered TFBOY... The contrast is too great.
The scene was extremely lively, and a group of bard apprentices in the hall coaxed Su Xiaobai to continue talking, but the assessment continued, and finally Master Gelin had no choice but to come forward and let everyone stop.
Master Gelin turned his head to Su Xiaobai and smiled, "Mr. Suer, how about making a friend?" I appreciate your story very much. ”
Su Xiaobai nodded happily, he couldn't ask for a relationship with Gelin.
Under the envious gaze of everyone, they left the assessment hall and came to the quiet second floor.
Sitting down around the round table, the two chatted about their experience in story creation, Su Xiaobai has the blessing of the concept of Huaxia online literature, and every sentence is to the point, which makes Ge Lin, who lives under traditional thinking, feel like a Mao Sai epiphany.