1. Actually, I don't think the draft is as well written as the first volume.

In addition to writing about the game in the first volume, I carefully portrayed the personalities of important characters, such as Qi Lin's four teammates:

Luo Yuchuan, who works hard and has a strong desire to get ahead;

Zhou Feng, who is most like an ordinary person, has mediocre talent and an average mind, but he has his own responsibilities at critical times;

Iceberg-shaped cold, not talking much, but his heart is like a mirror, and he is very decisive;

is also an ordinary character of Lu Shanshan, but she is slightly biased towards the Virgin Mary and lacks perseverance.

Qi Lin's four teammates, each of them has their own personality, and each of them is reflected in the text.

Although it may not have left a deep impression on everyone, I did my best to write it.

In addition, there are also the arrogant Zhu Ling, the mature Lin Qi, the lonely rain master, the Yang Invincible of the Inner and Outer Kings, An Guangqian, who is accustomed to compromising with reality, Zhao Qingkong, who is unscrupulous to achieve the goal, Mu Qiao, who is young and old, Sister Zhuque, who decides the White Tiger, and the domineering Lafayette......

Of course, there is also Qi Lin, a poisonous tongue, self-reliant, genius, hard-working, and a positive energy teenager who adheres to his own principles.

I'm generally satisfied with the first volume, because I've basically implemented my idea:

Start small, no longer needlessly enlarge the background, write a little more detailed, make the pattern a little smaller, and strive to describe some characters with thousands of faces.

However, when it comes to the draft volume, the newly debuted Little Hades, Blood Demon, Hidden Wolf, and Ricardo are still more like a symbol and don't have much of their own character.

It's mainly a space limit.,This volume was originally set to be a transitional volume.,Can't write daily.,It's difficult to outline the character design.。

So these characters don't feel like they're being written successfully.

I'm not very satisfied with myself, and I'll try my best to flesh out the image of these people in the future. You may think it's useless, but I'm more demanding of myself.

There is also a problem with this volume, that is, there are too many competitions, and I don't like the chapters that are all competitions, but on the boat, I really can't write too many daily adjustments, so some book friends may feel bored.

I will try my best to avoid it in the future, and when I enter the Chinese Super League, there will be more things to write. Or as I said before, strive for half of the competition and half of the narrative of daily life, so that book lovers who like both styles can be compatible. In fact, I tried my best to avoid this volume.,Strive not to make everyone feel repetitive.,For example, the way to divide the winners and losers in the final battle between Qi Lin and Zhu Ling.,Just thinking about this plot, I sat for two hours.,More time than the real code word.,Just to make everyone not feel repetitive and boring.。

I try my best to satisfy everyone and make everyone's reading experience better and better. I also hope that you can support the subscription of the monthly pass to make the score of this book better. The fate of a book, after all, does not depend solely on the author.

Tomorrow will open a new volume, let me know in advance, the next volume should be longer than the previous two volumes, everyone is looking forward to the protagonist's first season in the Chinese Super League