Write a small chapter when you calm down
First of all, I want to apologize to you, I was too busy during the Chinese New Year, because my sister got married this year, and basically all the relatives who could go had to go through, plus the construction of a new countryside in the countryside, and the housewarming wine never stopped. Pen @ fun @ pavilion wWw. ο½ο½ο½Uο½Eγ ο½ο½ο½ο½
So the plot of these days is really a little water.,Because it's all in a hurry.,Although it's still written according to the outline.,But basically two chapters and three chapters are written.γγ
And then these days there are more and more people reading books, and many problems that I haven't found before have gradually been raised, to be honest, it's very sad, because I'm a pure newcomer, and when I opened the book, I originally wanted to write a brain hole, and I didn't think about all kinds of settings clearly.
These are my questions, and I accept them when everyone puts them forward, including the role of Liu Shiyi, which is indeed a bit collapsed, and it was Kavin that day, I don't know how to pick it up, so I just added a new role, and the character design was not done well at all, so it can be regarded as a premature baby.
Reading the book review today, I was sprayed with disgust, saying that the country can't be so kind, and it will definitely slice balabala, and I was disgusted all of a sudden, and I won't say anything else, do you think about what can be cut out of the slice, if you cut it and see nothing, isn't it confused.
Of course, let's be angry all at once, and don't care about it. However, a book friend in the group comforted me, saying that my book was sprayed when I wrote it, and gave a few examples, which I really heard when I heard it.
Let's not talk about spraying the country.
Patriots will say, you, the protagonist, always think about your sister when you join the country, and you don't have any consciousness at all.
Those who like war blood will say, what are you grinding about, how good it is to push it directly.
Those who like military affairs will say that your weapon battle scene is really badly written, and you don't have the feeling of writing modern warfare at all.
If you like the two-dimensional girl, you will say,, your emotional drama is really bad.
γγγγ So I finally know why there aren't many big guys who open this kind of theme, it's one thing to have river crabs, and it's one thing to be too difficult to write.
But fortunately, the author doesn't rely on writing books to eat, and it's good to have a little part-time money, but if you don't have it, you can pull it down.
So let me choose more and more on the road to death.
Today's opening of this single chapter is to tell those readers who like and have always supported me, although the future is difficult, but the author will write with a happy mood, in fact, to be able to write to today is all thanks to your support, everyone who insisted on voting for me, rewarded, I remember it.
It's been almost a month since I wrote a book, whether I'm tired, annoying, happy when I give a reward, sad when I collect it, or angry when I'm sprayed, it's a rare experience in life, the author is still very young, only 22 years old, and some ideas are still very naΓ―ve, but these experiences are not a precious process for the gradual maturity of thoughts~
In the end, my father said that people who know how to be grateful will live a full and happy life.
So thank you!