"What?" Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu looked at Zheng Shuanglong with a confused face.

"The content is great, exciting, and perfect, the role of the younger sister, the attributes of the sick girl, the acting skills when she was killed, etc., are all very attractive, such a legendary work, enough to attract tens of thousands of fans and make them full of expectations." Pressing on the outline with one hand, Zheng Shuanglong shook his head slightly and said, "But this is not enough. ”

"Legends, adventures are worth looking forward to, and everyday, peaceful daily life is also amazingly moving." Turning his head to look at Lihua Song beside him, Zheng Shuanglong said meaningfully: "Is there such a feeling, ordinary interaction, I feel so happy." Even if it's not green and sweet, even if we maintain our usual tone, we're very happy. ”

"Ordinary going out, ordinary embarrassment, ordinary remedy, ordinary two people walking, ordinary holding hands, ordinary exchanging gifts, ordinary eating desserts, ordinary chatting. There are no big surprises, just talk and make for a happy time. ”

"Please get to the point, okay, Mr. Zheng Shuanglong." Watching Zheng Shuanglong and Lihua Song staring at each other, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu felt particularly uncomfortable, and interrupted with a dark face.

Facing the gaze of Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu, Zheng Shuanglong shrugged his shoulders and said relaxedly: "What I said is the point, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu, there is such a daily warmth missing from your outline, so An Yilun can't make up her mind and make up her mind to adopt it, after all, no matter what, Xiaohui is still an ordinary girl." ”

Speaking of this, Zheng Shuanglong looked at An Yilun, a standard otaku, and said with a smile: "Legend, adventure, mythology, and god turns, although it is very exciting." However, in the hearts of all otaku, there is still an expectation of a dialogue between otaku and ordinary people, although it is a little unusual, and there is no sense of fatalism at all, however, because of this. As creators, we must respond to the expectations of our readers. ”

"That, when you say something like this, can you not look at me, otherwise, I always feel that Zheng Jun's words hide a malice that cannot be ignored." An Yilun, who was uncomfortable by Zheng Shuanglong's pointed gaze, raised his hand and smiled bitterly: "Although this is ......"

"Ethics classmates." Shiyu Kasumigaoka, who had a black face, looked at An Yilun with a super cold gaze and said.

"What...... What's up......? An Yilun, who was stared at by Zheng Shuanglong and Kasumigaoka Shiyu, was also frightened. He asked with a dry smile.

"I want you to die, right now." The contemptuous eyes of Kasumigaoka Shiyu simply regarded An Yilun as having an affair with someone else's wife, and getting along with the daughter of that family, and wanted to abandon the concubine but made the other party angry and forced his daughter to marry another man, so he was unwilling to break into the marriage ceremony and rob his relatives. "Fundamentally, this is all An Yilun's problem, so now Ethics Jun. You are not qualified to speak. ”

"Well, this is a project I worked so hard to come up with!" An Yilun, who was denied the right to speak by Kasumigaoka Shiyu. Quite unwilling to say.

"How hard do you feel about yourself, in the business case, in addition to one that makes Megumi Kato the heroine, what else is in your business plan, it's not all we do! Well! Listening to An Yilun's defense, Kasumigaoka Shiyu's eyes swept away. made An Yilun shut up instantly.

"I'm sorry!" An Yilun, who quickly retreated, once again drew circles in the corner.

There is no human rights for supervision without ability, no human rights for supervision without funds, and no human rights for supervision without good ideas! Supervision that feels the problem but can't point out where the problem is. Not even a voice! Cry...... An Yilun, who was despised, also kept muttering, and really had the urge to cry.

"Ethics classmates ............! Do you have any grievances! Listening to the muttering sound coming from the corner, Kasumigaoka Shiyu said softly.

"Not at all! Senpai! Although Kasumigaoka Shiyu's voice was by no means loud, it should be said that the volume was lower and smaller than before, but the depth of the epicenter of An Yilun seemed to be quite considerable, and even the courage was deeply shocked.

"Shut up if you don't, ok!" An Yilun also glanced at him, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu turned his head to look at Zheng Shuanglong, his eyes were unusually serious, and he asked seriously: "Peaceful daily life!" What do readers expect? So, what about your feelings, the feelings that belong to the creator? ”

Feeling it, Kasumigaoka Shiyu's body stiffened a little. Feeling it, Kasumigaoka Shiha's body temperature has dropped a little. However, even though the air pressure became so low, Zheng Shuanglong still had a warm smile on his face. Stretched out his hand and patted Megumi Kato's head, and said with a smile: "My feelings, my expectations, are here." ”

For me, who is very tired from rushing to sketches, I usually express my concern.

For the abnormal me, it is generally accepted.

Frankly and unpretentiously, unceremoniously presented himself in front of me.

Every time we spend time together, we can sincerely and fully enjoy the pleasure again.

Sometimes it gets a little headstrong. It's going to get a little hard when you're chasing me. And I didn't reject me who had otaku attributes.

The attitude was very natural, and although he was a little withdrawn from some of my habits, he still looked at me normally.

A conversation that feels like a date, but it's also carefully neutralized with a nonchalant attitude. behaving like a friend between words and deeds makes people feel like a spring breeze.

Every time I parted, I had a slightly puzzled expression. However, when parting, he was willing to send me off with a smile.

Because it's Xiaohui, it's really good, she won't leave me at all, but she won't force me to dye other colors.

If I was tough, she would absorb it smartly.

Calm attitude. Even if I do weird things, she can still blend in.

The appearance is unobtrusive. Xiaohui is ordinary, which makes me happy to get along. It is only then that I can keep my mood relaxed, which has been carrying heavy pressure......

If, if there is no Lihua around the existence.

If the world he arrived in for the first time was this world, perhaps Zheng Shuanglong would use Xiaohui as an anchor to fix himself in this world, as a harbor for the soul, and as warmth.

"And then ......?" Kasumigaoka's voice became low and cold again.

Retracting the hand that was touching Megumi Kato's hair, Zheng Shuanglong said calmly, "Then, and then it's the rewriting of your big outline by Teacher Xia Shizi." Although I have to admit that the outline you wrote is really interesting. The plot is magnificent. The scale of the story is huge, and it feels like a masterpiece...... However, revisions are still required. ”

"Why do you want to rewrite it when you're so good?" Shiyu Kasumigaoka, who looked a little depressed, looked at Lihua Song, then at Megumi Kato, and finally set his eyes on Zheng Shuanglong. Low road.

"I've already said it, that's because in that plot outline, there are only generations-long grievances, only unfortunate fates, and only blood-related fate." Calmly facing the complicated gaze of Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu, Zheng Shuanglong said indifferently: "The outline does not write the plot of retrieving daily life. The ending didn't let the patrol ...... From the glass back to an ordinary female classmate.。 It didn't respond to the expectations of otaku. ”

"But if you arrange it this way, the glass will disappear." Facing Zheng Shuanglong's indifferent gaze, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu stubbornly resisted: "If the glass is eliminated, the past chapter will be meaningless." The plot foundation accumulated over several generations will be in vain, right? ”

This struggle, this unyielding, has a great significance for Kasumigaoka Shiyu.

Sigh slightly. Zheng Shuanglong said indifferently: "Teacher Xia Shizi, don't you understand, the expectation of the otaku, because of that sense of substitution, they all yearn for a perfect ending, for them, although fun is very important, but the important thing is not only fun, but also the love for the heroine." Glass is very important, and patrol glass is also very important. Even if it's ordinary, even if it's ......"

"In this way, it doesn't logically make sense...... Xunli has inherited the memories of the past. How could the personality she had formed in this life not be affected by the memories of the past? Looking at Zheng Shuanglong, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu had disbelief in his eyes. There is unwillingness.

"Is logic important? In the game, love is greater than fun. Fun is greater than logic, as long as there is love, there is none. And the essence of the patrol glass is the glass, I don't think she has built the memory and character in this life. It can be eliminated! Patrol does agonize over the memories of the past; It will also be hard to turn around; also let their lives change; Maybe that's why I like someone who has been connected by karma since my previous life. ”

"Otaku, not expecting endless adventures, endless blood. Sometimes playing with ordinary girls makes the house very happy. It's fun to have a patrol there. I think it's fun to live an ordinary daily life with Patrol Glass. Looking forward to the happiness of the patrol glass, looking forward to the happiness of the glass, so it doesn't have to be fantastic, it doesn't have to be magical, sometimes they just want to see the plot development that doesn't lose to fate and takes back daily life. I want a normal patrol ending. I want to see an ordinary love that can be better than the intertwined plot line of the past life! ”

"Is that okay?" Listening to Zheng Shuanglong's words, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu was unwilling in his heart.

Nodding, Zheng Shuanglong said calmly: "That's it, it responds to the expectations of the creators, the expectations of the readers, and the expectations of the supervisors, a story with love, that's enough!" ”

Looking at Zheng Shuanglong, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu didn't know if he still couldn't agree, let go of his hugging arms, and looked very tired. Then, after a moment's hesitation, the words that came out of her throat were...... "So, are you going to kill Ruri?" Really...... Is the present mind more important to you than the causes of the past? In that case, it is better to change it all and rewrite it...... That's how I can let go of everything. ”

Kasumigaoka Shiyu couldn't give up her thoughts, and her voice seemed unwilling. She really can't let go, she has her own insistence that she can't compromise. Although this insistence is so small in the face of reality, it is so impossible. However, if you can't put it down, you can't let it go.

Looking at the disappointed expression of Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu, Zheng Shuanglong shook his head slightly, and said softly: "I don't have the consciousness to kill Liuli, Xunli is very pitiful, and Liuli is just as cute." Without any of them,Can't fully respond to the player's expectations.,Patrol glass is love,Liuli is also love,Lack of love game,Even if the plot is exciting,,It will give people the feeling of something missing,After all,Love is the ultimate subject。 ”

"A creator who can respond to the expectations of players and readers, and who can respond to their own expectations, is really a great creator." Looking at Zheng Shuanglong, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's expression was a little down, and he said in a low voice: "So, what about my expectations, and what about the response to my expectations." ”

Listening to the words of Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu, Zheng Shuanglong was speechless.

Zheng Shuanglong, who has already carried the love of Lihua Song, has no way to respond to the expected love, a love, can only be exchanged for a love, this is an equivalent exchange.

Although love has never been unreasonable, Zheng Shuanglong deeply understands that exchanging one part of love for ten parts of love is not called love, this is fraud, this is abusive love, and indiscriminate love is not love, it is desire.

After a long time, looking at Zheng Shuanglong's silence, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu put back his usual somewhat cold smile and said, "Okay, since the problem has been found, let's revise the outline from now on!" In short, to add new options, adopt the policy of choosing to patrol or glass at the end of the game! ”

…………

"Now that the problem has been found and the game has been restarted, then, I'll go back to the Far Moon Academy first, after all, I have quite a lot of things to do in the Far Moon Academy." Looking at Kasumigaoka Shiyu and the others, who were seriously carrying out the [correction homework], Zheng Shuanglong, who was sure that the game production could start, took Lihua's little hand and stood up and said.

"Hey, are you going back now!?" Looking at Zheng Shuanglong and Lihua who got up, An Yilun, who was discussing on the side, said puzzledly: "It's rare to come once, don't do more things, and leave like this, it's too bad." ”

"Hawkers, An Yilun Yejun, you also have to consider the situation on my side, Yuanyue Academy is an aristocratic academy, and the curriculum and competition are very tense." Waving his hand at An Yilun, after signaling to Megumi Kato, Shiyu Kasumigaoka and others, Zheng Shuanglong said: "Send me the account, I'll transfer the money to the account after I go back, and then, if you have any questions, remember to contact me, I'm looking forward to this game." ”

With that, Zheng Shuanglong took Lihua's little hand and left the audio-visual classroom.

Looking at the hands held by Zheng Shuanglong and Lihua Song, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's expression darkened, and then he put his messy long hair behind his ears, and concentrated his mind on the revision of the game outline.

Her selection is not just Zheng Shuanglong.

The first is to fix the character setting of the patrol glass. Then the character line samples are constantly being revised over and over again. (To be continued.) )