Recently, Chubby, who has nothing to do, found that a few book friends reported in the comment area that the third volume was boring and not good-looking.

Here Chubby wants to know what went wrong, and I hope that the comments of book friends can point out the problem, and the criticism is too general to make Chubby scratch my head.

Xiaopang first talks about his views on this aspect, the authorities are fascinated, and I ask book friends to add if they are incomplete.

First of all, the content of the entire third volume is composed of events again and again.,The main line is that the protagonist is a hero.,Chubby I was full of passion when I wrote it.,I want to write what it's like to have superheroes in an ordinary world.,But when I wrote it, I found that I couldn't add other superheroes to solve the process of the event (Brooke is the representative.,There should have been a lot of ink to serve) because it was originally an event.,It looks very messy (it's also a book friend who can't understand it.。。 Add a few more, and it's even more messy. As a result, the world is not expressive enough (my heart is too big, and I have to estimate it for another fifty chapters to express it) and I am afraid that people will say that I am water, so the gap between the resolution of events is not well described, and there is no daily life, which is also a mistake.

The second is the positioning of this world, the protagonist's challenge road Chubby doesn't want him to have smooth sailing, it's not that he wants to abuse the master, he just wants to give him a reason to become stronger, which requires setbacks, and Bomberman is Chubby's obstacle to the protagonist. The character of Annie in the villain is also less penny, and she doesn't show much of her neuroticism, a bit of a failure, and I hope that the ending can show a little bit (I will explain some of the foreshadowing in the front), and the character in Bomberman is not described, which is also a mistake. Steven is a stubborn and selfish person, he originally wanted to be fuller, and at the same time wanted to whitewash him a little, but in the end he gave up, and could only intersperse descriptions that made this character not outstanding.

As a roadblocker, the bomberman can't be weak.,It's necessary to be stronger than the protagonist.,And added a hidden buff to them.,The protagonist can't find them when he launches the relationship.,So they can't have a premature head-to-head showdown.,The protagonist is in the dark with a bomber.,The protagonist is led by the nose.,Maybe some book friends think that such a protagonist is too wretched.,Can't kill the Quartet.,So it's not happy? This is also considered by Chubby.,I've tried my best to let the protagonist play prestige on the local battlefield.,And I want to write as interesting as possible.。。 I just want to say that the growth of the protagonist needs to be trained, please be patient, book friends, and this situation is rare in the later world (it may still appear, after all, the ultimate challenge of each world is too difficult)

There are also some small problems.,For example, the book friend said that IQ is a hard injury (and don't specifically say which IQ is problematic)There's nothing to say about this.,Chubby thinks there's nothing big about it (there must be a small bug),It's originally a different world.,Please don't apply the real world.。 For example, Brooke's identity was found out in a way that was too idiotic, I just want to say that I read more American comics and movies, and there are more things than that idiot, compared to Brooke, he is more careful, many comics do not show how superheroes turn back into ordinary people after solving the criminals, maybe they can't justify themselves, it's normal to be discovered, it's difficult not to be discovered, and Chubby's hiding of the protagonist is also a pen, not everyone is as cautious as the protagonist. (Without such and such coincidences, there will be no continuation and in-depth of the story) The novel is not reality after all, it cannot be as rigorous as reality, if it is really that rigorous, it is really difficult to write, and the protagonist is difficult to mix. (As rigorous as reality, the protagonist really dies several times.) ）

There are also readers who say that I water. Chubby said that the style of writing is like this. This is not a paid chapter, Chubby doesn't need water! (I won't be able to water the word count in the paid chapter, serious face.) ）

Finally, I would like to thank all the book friends who have been with me all the way, for those comrades who abandoned the book because of the third volume, Xiaopang said sorry here, and could only try his best to write the next story, and the third world will end with a maximum of ten chapters, thank you for your support. (It's really hard to write at the end.,I guess everyone will be dissatisfied again.。。 ）

Another:The manuscript has been killed.,Xiaopang can only endure the pain and keep a change now.,I originally said it would be fine in a day or two.,Too optimistic and too simple.。。