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To explain the above sentence, it is really not recommended, and it is not under the pretext of "don't think about an elephant" human behavior to lure you into subscribing. This chapter has nothing to do with the main story. Since it is not recommended to subscribe, the reason why I want to post a VIP chapter is: I want to be lazy and work hard occasionally, so that I have the money to send red envelopes in the group...... I haven't sent a red envelope for a long time, so I waited until the 10th to send a bigger one, and made up for the red envelopes in front of me.
This chapter is mainly about what happened when the author was communicating with a very good writer.
Today, I showed this to a good writer, and he was quite serious at first. But from the second chapter, the guy began to turn pages quickly, and page-turning...... Flip all the way to the end. (Yes, I also added a mean order)
After reading the book in less than ten minutes, this friend said, "You are an expository essay!"
I probably opened my mouth for about two seconds.
You can imagine that expression at that time.
This is obviously a long serialized article at the starting point.,It's said to be an expository text, and I'm also drunk.。
And he said, you know, of all the literary genres, expository essays are the most difficult to write. It's much harder than any poem, prose, couplet, or something.
Hearing his words, my mood became better.
This...... Is this supposed to be complimenting me? You see, "The 13th Tsunami" is such a difficult expository essay to write, and it actually made me write it.
He then explained the source of his statement: Why is expository writing more difficult to write than others? This is because the writer of the expository essay must be at least two levels higher than his readers, at least two levels higher than his readers.
I was complacent when I heard this.
The word realm, as a Chinese, understands. "Big Bowl" Ge You and Guan Zhilin have made an excellent interpretation of the word realm, and I still remember it vividly. What does this mean? This shows that my buddy recognizes my cultivation.
Then he went on to explain to me, soothing my wounded heart from the bad grades of my subscription. He said, first of all, the expository thing must be trying to explain something. And this thing must be something that the reader doesn't know and you know. If you want to tell the reader about this knowledge, this principle, or this skill, this is the expository text.
I said yes.
Then he went on to comfort me: why is it said that the author of the expository essay is two levels higher than the reader?
First of all, the author needs to understand this knowledge. For example, some readers don't understand why flowers are so popular, but you, as the author, understand, this is a higher level.
Then, you need to explain this sentence in a language that the reader does not understand, that is, "I made my enemy pay the price, shed blood, and this blood is as red as a flower, and this sentence was widely used in the literature of the stall 10 years ago". In this way, you are one level higher than the reader, and in this way, you are at least two levels above the reader.
Therefore, expository essays are the most difficult to write.
When I heard him say this, I was very complacent.
See, I am already two levels higher than ordinary people in the realm, which means that my realm is high.
Then he gave examples of primary school texts, such as "The Bridge" written by Mao Yisheng, such as "March to the Desert" written by Contradiction, (I forgot which author he was talking about, anyway, I remember that there was a thatched toilet), which are all examples of expository essays. Great writers must first understand this knowledge, and then they can also use words that elementary school students can understand, and explain this knowledge clearly, which is the standard expository text.
I was very happy to hear it. You see, that's a comparison between me and the great writers who have been famous for a long time.
But in the end, he said: I'm talking about other people's great writers, but I don't include you, don't think too much.
At the time I was: Nani?
You can imagine my expression at that time.
In other words, my good writer friend paved the way for a long time, mainly to prepare for the last sentence.
You say how annoying that is.
Here's what he said at the time: I'm talking about a well-written expository essay. But you have these two levels...... Then he snorted a few times, and the first question was: Do you know how good the current elementary school students are?
I'm definitely not convinced, I said that I know that the current elementary school students are very good.
He said that this is not the case, you just know that the current elementary school students are very good X, but you don't know that the current elementary school students have "then" Niu X.
Then he showed me the new version of "100,000 Whys" that is now being read by elementary school students. At that time, I was an OCAO, which was even more exquisite than the little yellow calligraphy and painting I saw in person. Illustrations, text, don't mention, suddenly when I was a child, I read it and remembered the 4 major books of "Chinese Children's Encyclopedia", although it is also a classic book, but the times are changing, I have to say that people are more popular than people, that's it.
Then, what is the primary school student's view of love, the primary school student's view of mate selection, the primary school student's view of the joke, the primary school student's view of the famous watch and luxury car, and even the primary school student's view of the League of Legends King of Glory Crossfire Overwatch...... All in all, I suddenly felt like I was living on a dog all my age.
Then my buddy made a phased summary: So, first of all, you can't be said to be higher than the current primary school students in the realm of understanding this knowledge. The reality should be that it is much lower than that of today's elementary school students.
When I heard this, although I was faintly not convinced, I still had to admit that what my buddy said was not completely unreasonable.
Then he went on to analyze another level for me, which is the "level of expression" as a writer.
In other words, whether I can tell something I know in a coherent sentence, that is, the ability to tell a story.
Originally, as an author, I was quite confident in this.
However, my buddy continued to make up for me mercilessly. What he used to mend the knife was the three words "wool".
He said that the question is not whether your writing is smooth or not, the key is that many people don't read these expository essays when you write them!
When I think about it, it seems like that's really the case.
Then I asked him, what do you say readers like to read?
At this time, my buddy is unpredictable. He said, "Why don't you mess with me?" ”
I said, what to write?
He said you can write a little yellow text.
I had that look on my face...... You can imagine it.
By the way, my buddy is now writing little yellow articles to make money.
I was just slapping my thigh, I said do you think I don't want to write a little yellow text? The key is that now the 10% 9% big check is so strict, I used to write a national war theme that was blocked several chapters, and if I wrote a little yellow text, the book would be directly 404. Another reason is that my book is full of two women......
My buddy shook his head and said that things are not like this, brother, you first look at the two girls in your book: if it weren't for the previous explanation. Where can you tell it's a woman? You're basically going to find someone to turn your expository essay into a dialogue format.,And then it's inconvenient for your protagonist to say it.,Just borrow two women to say it.,That's the thing, right?。
I'll just say yes.
That's right, that's what I thought.
My buddy said, what's the point of your two sisters' existence?
I thought about it, and I came up with the idea that you said well, and I didn't know how to answer.
Indeed, tears come from it, and that's right.
Then my buddy said to me: So, follow me to write a little yellow essay to have a future.
Then we went to the writing of Xiao Huangwen that we had been discussing until lunch...... This paragraph is omitted...... All in all, in the end, I decided not to write a little yellow article.
Why pinch? Because the readers who wanted to read Xiao Huangwen at the beginning have been scared away by me......
And then that's the end of the paragraph.
There may also be such chapters in the future.,All such chapters,I'll be in the title prompt.,And in the first line of the text it is not recommended to subscribe.。
Oh yes, when the 10th press fee is issued, a big red envelope will be sent in the QQ group. I want to lead into the group.