After the two of them finished eating, thinking that Izumi Masamune invited him to such a big meal, wouldn't it be too impersonal if he didn't say anything.

So, after Li Lin helped Izumi Masamune dispose of the dishes and chopsticks, he volunteered to discuss the light novel with Izumi Masamune.

Izumi Masamune, who has always hidden his hobbies, heard Li Lin ask him to discuss light novels together, he couldn't help but feel a little happy, he used to only discuss these contents with netizens from the Internet, but this time it is rare to discuss these with a professional like Li Lin.

So the very happy Izumi Masamune ran to the study and carried several large stacks of paper to the coffee table in the living room.

Li Lin, who was sitting on the sofa with a twitch in the corner of his eyes, looked at Hequan Masamune, who was sitting next to him and looking at him with an expectant expression, Li Lin said a little cautiously: "Eh, that, Masamune, what about the article you wrote?" ”

Asked by Li Lin about this, Izumi Masamune said in a sluggish tone: "Ah, articles, these are all ah!" The outline of the 50 works I recently wrote, the plot of the first chapter, and the idea of anime and broadcasting after that. ”

Li Lin said that he had been shocked by the fact that the output rate was faster than that of a sow......

It's no wonder that Izumi Masamune was able to directly debut after winning the "Jury Encouragement Award" in the original work, although he cut a lot of works in half......

However, this world and Izumi Masamune seem to have changed the trajectory of his life because of Li Lin's butterfly, it turned out that he submitted and debuted just after graduating from elementary school, and now he has not debuted and is mixed in online novels.

However, Li Lin believes that he should be more mature now than he was in the original book! In the original work, he made his debut directly through the submission all the way, and many of his works in this world have been rejected, and this experience has naturally accumulated a lot.

Although the trajectory of his life has changed, the nature of the country is easy to change, and the high-yielding and super-sowing Izumi Masamune is still quite strong.

So Li Lin coughed and regrouped and said, "Then, Zhengzong, you can take out your most proud work first!" If you read them all, you probably won't be able to find the point, but if you come up with a work that has your own characteristics and you are quite confident in the work, I think it should be able to tell me directly about your writing style and writing problems. ”

Hearing Li Lin's professional words, Izumi Masamune nodded and said with a serious expression: "I understand!" ”

After that, he took out a document from the pile of documents and looked at it, then he nodded and handed the document to Li Lin and said: "This one should be my most proud work now, and I plan to submit it to the major libraries after the New Year." ”

Li Lin looked at the cover of this document, well, "The Silver Wolf of Reincarnation", it seems that Izumi's path is also on the right track.

Flipping through the documents, Li Lin began to appreciate the world he depicted.

Uh-huh, Li Lin, who has read a lot of light novels in this world, confirmed that it is a novel of the academy's superpower battle series on the first page, like many orthodox light novels, at the beginning, an ordinary student was involved in an incident and awakened his power, and since then he has lived a long Aotian-type harem career of people blocking and killing Buddhas.

Li Lin then went on to explore this light novel in depth......

An hour later, Li Lin turned the last page.

Izumi Masamune, who had long been unable to hold back the impatient mood in his heart, hurriedly came up and said, "How is it, Tanisita-kun, how is what I wrote." ”

Li Lin raised his head and looked at Izumi Masamune and said, "Well, Masamune, I feel that if you go to the major libraries to submit this novel, you will definitely be able to pass it." ”

Hearing Li Lin say this, Izumi Masamune stood up with some joy and hurriedly said, "Really! It's really great......"

Seeing his excited face, Li Lin felt that it was time to pour a basin of cold water on his head, so that he could calm down and calm down, and then recognize his problems and rectify them later.

So he directly pressed Hequan Masamune onto the sofa, with a helpless face, Li Lin said: "Okay, Masamune, calm down." ”

Hearing this, Izumi Masamune calmed down a little, and he said apologetically: "I'm sorry, Tanisita, I can't help but feel a little happy that my novel has finally been recognized." ”

Hawkers! Man is a creature that longs to be recognized.

Li Lin then said in a somewhat serious tone: "Okay, Hequan, I admit that if you send this work to the library, you will definitely be able to pass it, but I think it can only stop there." ”

Stop there? Hearing Li Lin's words, Izumi Masamune said cautiously: "Gushita, the meaning of stopping here is ......"

Li Lin shrugged his shoulders and said, "It's the ...... that will be directly cut in half."

Thinking that his work would be cut in half, Izumi Masamune, who was in a mood like a roller coaster, screamed again and again: "Ahhhhh ”

Then he changed his face to look at Li Lin with a serious expression, he bowed slightly towards Li Lin and said in a conscious tone: "Then, Tanishita, please, I hope you can point out my problem without hesitation." ”

is worthy of Matsuoka CV's Izumi Masamune, as a male protagonist, he is still very modest and studious, for such a good young man, Li Lin does not mind pointing out his own problems to him.

So Li Lin nodded and said, "Okay, then authentic, listen up." The first point, and the most critical question of this article, is also the most important one. ”

As he spoke, he pointed to the manuscript and said, "It's true that it's an orthodox academy combat ability department, and it should also be able to pass the review and be published, but you must know that there will be many articles of the same type as yours that will be released at the same time, and if you don't get good grades, you will be cut in half." ”

Indeed, this competition is very fierce, and Izumi Masamune nodded approvingly.

Li Lin then said: "And the biggest problem with your current article is that it is very good, but it is too ordinary, as ordinary as the light novels of your academy combat ability department in the same period, so ordinary that when readers forget your work after reading this novel, they tend to feel: Ah, this is very ordinary!" Whether it's the routine or the occurrence of various events, it is simply like the template carved out of other novels, and it will not be long before readers forget about your novel completely. ”

Just like the sage Hui, although the qualifications are very good, they are too ordinary, so ordinary that they can be easily forgotten, and novels are the same, too ordinary often make people difficult to remember.

Is it too ordinary? Izumi Masamune looked thoughtful, and then he raised his head and asked, "Then Tanizata, what should I do......