Reflection at the end of the volume
The first volume lasted more than two months and finally came to an end, and in general I was not very satisfied with the writing myself.
Although I often say that I don't have an outline for writing, I still write an outline, but for some reason I can't write it halfway through, so I can only improvise without the outline.
This made me write tiring and led to a lot of serious problems.
There are almost three problems.
One is that the character creation is a mess, and there is a comment that I deleted, saying that the characters are all ZZ, which makes me unable to think of a way to refute it for a while, so I can only delete the matter. Alas, I'm really sorry for the big brother.
Because in order to barely push the plot, I did sacrifice too much rationality, so that the sense of separation between the characters and the plot was very violent, and it couldn't complement each other at all, which made me very miserable for a long time.
The second is scene switching, which is actually closely related to the first problem, which is due to the lack of pen power and the confusion of the outline.
The third is the lack of atmosphere rendering and fighting pictures.,This is a relatively easy problem to solve.,As long as you keep writing, you'll always become more and more proficient.。
After the first volume was written, I looked back, and I realized that the whole plot and setting were completely different from what I originally thought.
Originally, I only planned to complete the accumulation of strength within twenty chapters, and initially had the power of self-preservation to break into the multiverse, and then after fighting the boss, I began to enter the infinite flow plot.
But when I really put pen to paper, I found that there were too many problems, and I secretly changed the setting of the protagonist many times alone.
For example, at the beginning, the protagonist has a memory inheritance, and after leveling up, he can automatically master a certain level of knowledge, but this will lead to too fast the upgrade speed, and there is almost no bottleneck. So I directly gave the protagonist the ability to evolve infinitely, and at the same time added the restriction that it needs to be researched and mastered with new knowledge. It's not a unique setting, but it does make the next plot a lot better.
There's also the setting of the split, at first, it was very difficult to set up a split, and it took a lot of energy, but then I found that many interesting scenes couldn't appear without a doppelganger, so there were protagonists all over the mountains......
Regarding the final seal, many people may think that they are cheating, but this is also so that the protagonist can better play in those low-magic worlds in the future. Otherwise, in any world, as long as the protagonist unfolds the split body and eats like crazy, he will be able to remove the earth from the solar system in less than a month, so what else is there to play? Of course, there is also a way to open a trumpet, but I personally don't like this very much.
As for Lori's appearance...... The main reason is that there are not many attributes of alien Lori in the online text.,So I want to give it a try.。 But don't worry.,I won't have any malicious selling of cuteness or otaku plots.,Even if you want to write Lori,,It's also about a crazy alien monster wearing a Loli skin.。 As for how long I will maintain the Lori mentality, I will refer to your opinions and my own writing feelings to decide, and I will probably break out of the Lori form in one to three volumes.
Regarding the setting of the protagonist, there are too many sources to borrow, such as the original form of torture, Cthulhu, and the flower of Saya...... So find your own entry point.
The plot is mainly refreshing, and I don't like to abuse the master.
The next step is to enter the stage of Hakoniwa (infinite streaming), and even I am a little excited. I will focus on the touching plot and imaginative (self-perceived) setting, while depicting various distinctive characters, reinforcing the chaotic and evil nature of the protagonist, grasping the characters and plot logic, and trying not to make the mistakes of the first volume.
Finally, I would like to thank all my friends who have always supported me, including those who have never known me in my life, your support is the biggest motivation for my writing! Thank you! I will respond to your support with more serious writing!
If you have any comments, you can post them in the book review area.,The one at the end of the chapter really can't be replied...... I'll think about it and adopt it.
The next volume, "The Land of the Sun".
Stay tuned!