"Ahh Li Zhen stretched his waist and moved his muscles: "OK, it took some time, and I finally finished reading the works you created before!." If only they could be called works. ”

"Any questions?" Calvin asked, confused.

"Oh, that's a big problem!" Li Zhen looked at Kavin with strange eyes: "I want to know who gave you the courage to write a novel now?" God's identity? Now, Carvin, tell me what are the three elements of a novel? ”

As soon as Kavin was about to speak, Li Zhen directly stopped him: "Don't use your god's power to search for answers!" Tell me the truth! ”

"Well, I don't know." Kavin hesitated for a moment and said.

"The three elements of the novel, the characters, the plot, and the environment! Then let's take a look at your work! First of all, the characters: the Wen family's double evil, the description is very vivid, and there is nothing wrong with that. Environment: Earth, Heaven, Purgatory, Hell! It's also well written. ”

"Thanks for the compliment." Kavin happily accepted Li Zhen's praise.

"Then tell me, how did you write this aspect of the plot so badly?" Li Zhen threw the book in his hand in front of Kavin.

Kavin was a little stunned: "Is it really that bad?" ”

"Huh." Li Zhen sneered: "Do you know? Before reading the book you wrote, I always thought that the online writer named Cai in the world I lived in was bad enough! Since I finished reading your book, I realized that I owe him an apology! ”

("Ahh A handsome guy in the world sneezed fiercely. ）

"Then what do you think I should change?" Kavin was also a little annoyed, I'm God! Is it okay to save some face?

"Okay, I'm just making a suggestion. There is no need to be angry~" Li Zhen leisurely poured himself a glass of wine, ignored Kavin's annoyed eyes and continued: "Perhaps, you didn't find the point!" ”

"What do you mean?" Kavin asked, frowning.

"Like these chapters that you wrote about Kavin, which is your human identity. Don't you think it's too much to spend? Forced out the chapters that people are interested in! Li Zhen flipped the book to the chapter where Kaven had just appeared.

"For example?" Kavin asked.

"Archangel Lucifer, for example, you wrote a couple of snippets in it here! Shouldn't you say a few more words? ”

"What does he have to say?" Carvin was a little muffled.

"Did you know that every hero or villain is defined by their opponents? And you don't write about how Lucifer fell, or how you punished him! You ......"

"Let's change the subject, I don't want to talk about him." Kavin directly interrupted Li Zhen's words.

"Well, you're God." Li Zhen shrugged his shoulders indifferently.

"So let's talk about the new chapters you wrote, Casidio wants to take your place and become the new God! For this reason, the door to purgatory was opened, and countless souls in purgatory were absorbed. Killed Raphael with great force, and even wanted to kill the angels! Well, if you ask curiously, you're not angry at all? Li Zhen picked up the newly written draft of Kavin, looked at it and asked curiously.

"Trust me, he'll get the punishment he deserves!" Kavin smiled mysteriously and said, "Keep watching." ”

"God was furious and sent his closest angels down to protect the angels and make him stop Casidio. What the hell is this? Li Zhen continued to look through it, but found that the later chapters were very different from what he remembered!

"Oh~ I forgot to write, this closest angel by God's side is named 'Kyle'!"

Kavin smiled and said something that surprised Li Zhen, and Li Zhengang wanted to say something. Kavin quickly reached out and snapped his fingers to teleport Li Zhen out!

"Humph! Let you denigrate my work! The chapter about me must be well described, how important is Lucifer to me? During the transmission, Li Zhen vaguely heard Kavin's slightly arrogant voice.

The boat of friendship is capsized! It turns out that it's not just women who turn their faces faster than books, but also God!

In a beautiful forest on earth, Casidio, who has gained great power, walks on the lawn with a confident smile on his face. As he walked, he said:

"I think you should understand that if you continue to rebel against me, I will definitely punish you. And you will have nowhere to hide! Our father has been gone for a long time, and I used to think that what we needed was free will! But now I understand that you just need a new strong leader! You need a new father! ”

He stopped, looked at the few angels left in front of him, and said firmly, "Now, I am your father!" Be obedient, or this will be your fate! ”

As he looked at it, on the beautiful lawn, corpses of different shapes fell! These corpses were male and female, old and young, but they all had one thing in common, that is, each of them had a pair of wings burned to ashes behind their backs!

"Get ready for a new era!" Casidio opens his hands as if embracing a new world! But what he embraced in his arms was a figure that made him look familiar!

"Excuse me, interrupt. I don't like men! If you need it, I suggest you go to your tsundere pet, Dean. ”