"Sweet? Is the ending of the male and female protagonists sweet? Gao Jun complained, as if he was disgusted with the sweet feelings of the elderly. Pen, fun, and www.biquge.info

"That's why it's called "Sweet Taste", and the ending will surprise people with habitual thinking." Kuroba said.

"That's a good comment too...... What a thing! Chen Rui said. The sentences in this comment were very intricate, and he felt the malice in the other party's language and writing skills.

Hei Yuan read that comment and understood Chen Rui's surprise: there are two things that can be improved. The first point, in the first act, Momiji is a sports reporter. Because one day she made a serious criticism and her boss sent her to another city for a food report?

Kuroba understood: "The other party is saying that if Momiji is because he made a mistake, things will go well." Being assigned to work in a field that does not match the major increases the interest of the article because it is difficult. Let people pay attention to how the protagonist in the back saves the day. ”

Gao Jun said: "But the heroine's words use the modifier of food, and the original major is sports reporting, I'm afraid it can't be said." ”

Kuroba nodded, "Indeed." ”

Chen Rui continued: "You go on: the second point, in the fifth act, it would be good if Momiji didn't get sick, it seems that it was Kurohara's fault, and the rest would be fine...... How to understand this? ”

Kuroba translated again: "If Momiji is not sick, it will not be cliché or distressing." If the fault of the matter is in Kurohara, their conflict may be more smoothly resolved. ”

"The heroine is not sick? I almost want the heroine to die......" As soon as he said it, Gao Jun said what he wanted to say in his heart: "I mean, then the tragic ending can be more in line with the immortality of literature, after all, tragedy can be deeply rooted in the hearts of the people." Unlike comedy, there is nothing left after a laugh. ”

"Not sick? That makes the heroine allergic, cake allergies. Chen Rui said.

"Cake allergies...... Can you eat it at the beginning?" Gao Jun questioned.

"If you eat too much, you'll be allergic, so the foodie heroine doesn't like the male protagonist. But she still hid it from the male protagonist, and in the end she left him for food. Chen Rui said.

"And then ate to death?" Gao Jun said.

"You can't eat to death, what should I do if I eat the plot later." Chen Rui said.

"So I'm so embarrassed, I just wrote directly about the call I received from my boss, the choice between career and love, and I chose my career." Gao Jun said.

"However, I always feel that if I don't go back to slap the male protagonist, it won't be exciting." Chen Rui said.

Kurobahara's face was a little embarrassed. Slap me? Why do you want to scare me, I'm the protagonist! Although there are only two protagonists in this script.

Gao Jun began to analyze deeply, and he had sunk into the sea of stories with Chen Rui. He said: "No way, the heroine wanted to have a one-night stand with him at first, and the man took the initiative to be in love." ”

Chen Rui clapped his hands: "Yes." But he thought about it again and said, "But the civilized network says that there can be no sexual ......."

Gao Jun frowned, but then smiled: "Is the conflict between traditional and modern concepts still so big?" I see, if there is no sex, then support trading, or ...... Hey! ”

"Hey!"

Kuroba coughed twice and said, "You two should almost be in moderation." ”

Imperial City, Rainy Night.

If you are a wanderer traveling alone, lost in the rain because of the cold night, then don't be sad, you are not alone.

Xia Dongyang slowly walked out of the palace as if he had lost his soul. He looked up at the sky, it was pitch black, and the rain would fall straight into his eyes, making him unable to see everything around him.

He muttered, "It's raining, then you won't be able to see the moon." He kept walking, wading through shallow puddles and walking on the edge of the road. The rain was still so heavy, and he passed by a lot of people hiding under the eaves.

"Some people like it to rain, but then they won't see the moon. How nice the moon is, I love the moon. ”

He passed by a house with a garage, and at the door stood an old man and a mixed-race man. When the man saw that Xia Dongyang was drenched, he couldn't bear it, and said, "Thomson, go get an umbrella for this gentleman." ”

"No need," Xia Dongyang said, "embarrassed people don't need to be decent. He covered his mouth and made an exaggerated expression of surprise.

"Your ace of hearts has dropped." The mixed-race man reminded.

Xia Dongyang turned his head to see that playing cards were sliding out of his pocket. Since he wasn't an older brother, wasn't a magician, and didn't use playing cards as weapons, the new cards weren't out of order.

I don't know how long they have been sneaking out and slipping, and now they are behind Xia Dongyang, and it is the peach blossom card floating in the stagnant water. King of hearts, King of spades...... Queens of hearts, queens of spades...... 5，4，3，2…… They are getting closer and closer to Xia Dongyang from big to small.

Now, the closest to Xia Dongyang, the one that falls at Xia Dongyang's feet is the Ace of hearts. Xia Dongyang kicked it and helped it leave. Since it chooses to be free and chooses to endure the rain and go with the flow, let the ace of hearts go.

"That was my only true heart, but it was frozen into an iceberg by me. Perhaps, when the sun comes out and replaces the moon to bring light and warmth, the ace of hearts will flow down with the water of the iceberg and merge with the earth where everything is recovering. Xia Dongyang said.

He took out an ace of spades, which he touched casually, and it was already the last card in his pocket. Many manufacturers of playing cards like to use the ace of spades as the first poker card when packaging.

"Do you know what the ace of spades stands for?" Xia Dongyang held up the playing card and showed it to the half-race man and Thomson.

The mixed-race man likes to play cards to pass the time, saying, "The Ace of Spades and the 3 of Spades are divided into one team, and it represents the power. The mixed-race man said the rules of four-player poker "eating alone". When the ace of spades and the three of spades are separated, the game is a two-on-two contest, and when the ace of spades and the three of spades are in the same hand, that person has to play one against three.

One dozen three, no bombs, no lepers, the difficulty of eating alone is higher than fighting the landlord.

Steward Thomson replied, "If spades represent professions, then it is spears, representing soldiers." If spades represent utensils, then it is olive leaves, which represent peace. It is a contradiction between war and peace, and it is also a co-containment. ”

Xia Dongyang shook his head, shook his head, shook his head: "It's not right, you just saw the same thing in everyone's eyes, you didn't see the spades in my eyes, you didn't see the spades in your respective eyes!" ”

"It's black hearts, no passion for hearts, and when I have spades, I lose hearts. I missed the love I deserved for the sake of the so-called divine position! ”

Xia Dongyang flew away the playing cards, and the ace of spades couldn't go far under the rain, and soon it fell to the ground, chasing the figure of the heart along the direction of the water.