Lin Yang and Dusk Jing still didn't talk much, and after saying a lot of things, they stopped, and any more was over. Pen "Fun" Pavilion www.biquge.info

After waving goodbye, Lin Yang and Liu Xue moved their things to the research institute. The terrain here is relatively high, and the camp is not far below, and the evolution beast must first break through the camp before it is possible to get here, so it doesn't matter if there is no door. And Lin Banyue and they are really planning to do a big job, this mountain has been combed several times, and even the trees have been put down a lot.

"Yoko, are we going to stay here in the future?" Liu Xue's little face was slightly red under the light of the fire, and the night breeze in early spring was still a little cold, she tightened the pair on her body, blurred her eyes, and asked.

"Hmm. Let's stay here for a while. We don't have anywhere to go. Lin Yang nodded, stirred the fire with a wooden stick, took a little spark, and floated towards the research institute under the drive of the breeze. Several people were sitting at the door of the research institute, afraid that the smoke would be uncomfortable, so they sat outside, and it was not too late to enter when they were sleeping. The research institute is like a staircase, with only one exit from the front, and it is enough to leave one to guard the door.

"Hmm." Liu Xue looked down at the fire and answered softly.

"It's better than running around. Quite a bit on security. Lin Yang lifted the pot on the fire, glanced at it, smiled, and said, "It's cooked, come and come, give me the bowl, and I'll serve it to you." ”

Liu Yidao, who was next to him, handed Lin Yang the bowl of himself and Anda, turned his head and looked at the core of the research institute that was emitting glow, and countless luminous gases were lying on the ground in a hemisphere, whether it sprayed some and formed light chips and sprinkled on the ground. Liu Yidao hesitated, looked at Lin Yang, and said, "Mr. An, you are today. It's a bit too much to show, I'll say a little more, and I don't show my wealth in vain. ”

"Hmm. It's okay. Lin Yang made a bowl of soup, handed it to Liu Xue, and said, "It's okay, if they are united, then they have to worry about it, in this situation, there is no need, they need our strength." We're not helpless, and if either side wants to eat us, they have to think that they will have to have a piece of meat torn off, and their teammates won't be kind enough to wait for them to digest us. After speaking, he made another bowl of soup and handed it to Liu Yidao.

"Mr. An, it's good if you think about it." took the soup, handed it to Anda beside him, and said, "I'm sorry, Mr. An, I didn't think that Liu Xuefeng would go to Lin Banyue. ”

"People weren't with us in the first place." Lin Yang handed Liu Yidao another bowl of soup and said, "Don't worry, don't think too much, it's okay, people will leave if they think it's not suitable, they won't spend it with you, or they will stab you at a critical time, it's fine." ”

"Yes, Mr. Ann." Liu Yidao nodded, took the bowl with both hands, and said.

"Hmm. Clean up here tomorrow. Lin Yang also picked up a bowl of soup and drank it carefully. After several people answered, they all began to eat.

It was quiet for a while. The wind blew from the bottom of the mountain, and the grass and trees surged like waves, and a leaf broke free from the tree's hold in the wind, and rode the wind, swirling, skimming the people on the ground, and rushing into the starry sky. Coming with the wind, there were also small disputes, Lin Yang stopped his movements, put down the bowl, glanced at the brightly lit camp below, the corners of his mouth turned up slightly, raised the bowl again, and savored it carefully.

"No! Why are we sending things to those people! We have a lot of people, and they have been requisitioned, and now that they are in our place, they should listen to us! When you wanted to cede land to them, I didn't agree! A fat man slapped the table in front of him and shouted loudly.

"Requisitioned? Are you kidding me! If something goes wrong, can you take it! Do you know that person is the one who invented evolutionary weapons, and do you know how popular those little kids who know how to do evolutionary weapons now! One person for a hundred catties of meat, plus three women, and there is no counteroffer! Do you know how valuable his brain is! The middle-aged man opposite the fat man also slapped the table and yelled at him.

"So it's all the more time it should be requisitioned! There were children and women in their ranks, and we grabbed them and threatened him, not afraid that he would not obey! The shirtless man next to the fat man showed a hint of cruelty on his face and said fiercely.

"Shut up! You didn't see that little girl make something that big by herself this afternoon! You get one for me! It's not enough for people to stuff their teeth when you go up, and you still grab it! Think about it with your brain, living until now, still alive and well, and still T and M are a child, it can be simple! If you want to die, don't pull us. The middle-aged man on the opposite side yelled again.

"You're really going back the more you live, just a few people, you're afraid of being like this, you're still not a man!" The shirtless man glanced at the middle-aged man disdainfully and said.

"You can do it! What is this b, b! Last time, I don't know who a group of people were killed by one person and fled back to the base, and they cried for their father and mother! The middle-aged man smiled even more disdainfully and said mockingly.

"You! You really want to fight, don't you? The shirtless man slapped the table, stood together, and yelled at the other side.

"Sit down!" Lin Banyue, who was sitting in the first place, roared.

"Humph!" The bare-chested man glanced at Lin Banyue, and after looking at Dusk Jing and Chen Xi who were standing beside her, he smiled disdainfully, but he still sat down honestly.

"Classmate Lin, the teacher has a lot of words, you can't do this, people's hearts are not enough to swallow elephants, you meet their requirements again and again, in the end they will only become tigers and swallow us all." A polite man with glasses pushed his glasses and said.

"I know how much to talk about. I don't know who the parasite is! Without waiting for Lin Banyue to speak, Twilight beside her said coldly.

The glasses man's face suddenly became very ugly, and he glared at the twilight, but he didn't have the courage to confront him, so he could only sit there with a straight face and anger.

"The voting data just now has come out, and if it is passed, cooperation will inevitably take place. Next, continue to vote on the areas of cooperation and the depth of cooperation. Lin Banyue tapped the desktop lightly with the paper in his hand and said.

"What! How did it pass! We didn't agree, how did we pass! Shady! Shady! The group of people sitting at the back were not happy and shouted.

"Student, listen to the eldest brother, you are still too young, the eldest brother will not lie to you." The eldest brother next to the bare-chested man pointed his finger on the table and said.

"The vote has been completed, if you are not satisfied, then remember to say it before the next vote." Lin Banyue was unmoved to sort out the documents in his hand and said, "The next topic, the scope and intensity of cooperation. ”

"Stinky bitch, what's your attitude! Our big brother is talking to you! Isn't it just that there are many men! Before Lin Banyue finished speaking, she interrupted her words with an angry shout. Everyone stopped, looking at the little brother behind the eldest brother man in amazement, watching him protect his eldest brother with a loyal face. The little brother felt that the atmosphere was a little wrong as he spoke, and his voice gradually became quieter.

The man who was sitting under Lu Si, who was playing with the dagger boringly, raised his head, looked at the little brother, and when his voice disappeared, he looked at the big brother.

"It's not me, it's not me. Shadow, I didn't let him say it, he made his own decisions! The eldest brother looked at the younger brother with a frightened face, slowly turned his head, met the shadow's eyes, and hurriedly waved his hand to clear the relationship.

"Big brother, I..." The younger brother looked at the eldest brother in disbelief, and before he could finish his sentence, the shadow under his feet jumped up, wiped his throat cleanly, faded again, and disappeared.

Lin Banyue glanced up at the eldest brother, lowered his head and flipped through the documents, and said, "Now vote on the scope of cooperation, construction cooperation. . . ”

The night is still long.

==== The following is the old nonsense ====

I'm sorry, but the outline of the fine print was rewritten, so it was back to one chapter in the past two days. This passage is not placed in the author's words, because the author's words can only be put in 500 words.

Now that I think about it, four months to become a successful writer, it's really a bit of a big deal. Lao Li felt that he was fighting on a road of defeat, laughing~

But even if you fail, you want to leave something behind, at least to make it easier for those who follow this path. So the following is a summary of Lao Li's writing, for you who want to write in the future~ Others can skip the following. [Summarize to make people progress, constantly summarize, reflect on yourself, in order to make faster progress, I hope you don't dislike the old and long-winded. I can't help it.,Lao Li is such a hopeless summary fetish.,Spread your hands~] (The Internet calls this a review.,Hahaha (What am I laughing at?) ））

I was busy until six o'clock in the morning last night, flipped through a few novels at the top of the list, and carefully analyzed the routines and conflicts. The main object of analysis is "God-level Big Star" (I also voted for this big monthly ticket, haha), I have to say that the wheel routine is still the strongest in urban literature. I didn't pay much attention to it when I watched it before, but yesterday I carefully analyzed it and found that the structure of its Chinese chapter is really breathtaking.

The structure of classical Chinese novels is generally twists and turns, and modern popular culture is represented by Hollywood in the United States, which generally uses a story structure called the Hollywood model (beginning-opportunity-small climax-trough-redemption-rise, Lao Li remembers that it should be this structure), and the two story structures have strong similarities, so when Lao Li originally designed the outline, he used a twist-and-turn structure. Then the way of writing is to imitate the writing method that Stephen King said in "Writing This Thing", the writing method of designing characters, building the world, encountering accidents, and then the story happens naturally. The method is a good method, but there is a problem, it is too energy-consuming to write, and in order to make the story more concise and exciting, it needs to be revised twice, which is not suitable for online writing.

Originally, I couldn't write well, and I always felt that it was a problem of my own ability, and my ability was not there, so I naturally couldn't write well, but yesterday I carefully analyzed the structure of other successful works, and found that it was not the case. Online texts have their own narrative structure, writing methods, and using a clever way to tell a story, using other writing methods will only achieve half the result. Writing an online article should be written in the same way as an online article (awkward nonsense).

Here's a report from last night's research until six a.m., plus some of the finishing notes in the afternoon:

The narrative structure of the online text (most of the online texts), Lao Li called it the twist method, its core is to advance through the entanglement of multiple clues, and the waves are uneven and rise again (key lines), so that the whole story has been in the climax. Because it is necessary to bury multiple clues and control the climax connection, it is no longer possible to use traditional novels to let the story develop naturally [this is easy to collapse, or cause the clues to be very messy], and it is necessary to use the size outline to accurately control the writing progress of the article [generally one to three chapters lead out (or foreshadowing development), and then five to seven chapters lead to conflict (that is, climax), and at the end of chapters one to two, the clues to the next story are led at the same time, and more than ten chapters are a small story].

This narrative has many advantages: it is fragmented enough, and it is usually a short story in five days to a week (shorter if it is fast), so that the reader does not need to memorize too many clues; The development of the story can be controlled, once a story has a bad response, then it will be over, and the story will not be deleted because there are too many clues; Crucially, the size of the outline reduces the difficulty of writing, and there is no need to spend too much brain power to calculate the evolution of the story, etc.

Of course, there are also disadvantages, which leads to the fact that the online text is similar to the Internet celebrity face, and the similarity is extremely high, like a product coming down the line. There are also works that have no spirituality, no characteristics of their own, for readers, I can read the mature works of a writer who has become famous, so why should I read your immature works?

So it's a paradox. Confucius once said that governing a large country is like cooking a small fresh. Writing is similar, the conflict is salt, the cool point is monosodium glutamate, the story is the ingredients, the writing is the heat, how to cut the ingredients, how to add salt, how much monosodium glutamate to add, how to stir-fry, all have to be just right, in order to fry a good dish, in order to write a good work.

Only by understanding the routine can you jump out of the routine. If you want to do a good job, you must first sharpen your tools.

Either don't write, or if you want to write, write the best work.

The old man is on the road, step by step, hoping to reach the end. Progress together~