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3rd Installment:

After inspection, there is a serious error in this post, and "Ultimate" does not belong to the category of "fantasy" but "urban ability". Pen | fun | pavilion www. ｂｉｑｕｇｅ。 info (I saw the advertisement of the starting point when I was looking at it, so I read it wrong.) I can't afford to read books seriously. Here is a confession... ）

However, I don't know how to change the post that has already been made, so I can't change it, so please forgive me.

Although there were mistakes, we analyzed them according to the original way of thinking, and we will re-emphasize them. Although the title of this book is not simple and easy to evoke associations in some aspects, it is not urban or urban to live in. Moreover, there are no more than three heroines, and if there is no orgasm at the first time, it must not be urban. Therefore, I would like to stick to the original verdict here: it is a mistake for this book to be classified as an urban ability.

Here begins the discussion of the fifth of the six points (1. The protagonist; 2, supporting roles [villains, heroines]; 3. The composition of the world; 4. Power system; 5. Plot clues; 6. Theme; ): Plot threads.

The plot discussion of the book has been preliminarily discussed in the first issue of the section on supporting characters:

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C: Different stages have different villains. For example, in the early days, the biggest villain was the U.S. government, or even the Chinese government. 1A's plan will inevitably clash with the native forces of the earth. At the same time, 1A will integrate the resources and forces of the entire planet. Otherwise, he won't be able to build a spaceship, and if he does, it will be difficult to fly out of the sky.

In the medium term, let's say the spacecraft has flown out of Earth and reached the nearest silicon-based civilization planet. 1A will rule the planet, integrate it, and then organize a force that can resist the Great Federation. Although there is a possibility that 1A will be discovered before it has even flown out of Earth, it is extremely low, after all, a group of monkeys is no matter how well organized. It can't handle the whole big federation. So, in the middle term, the villain is a conquered higher civilization. This is likely to be extremely high.

Then, in the later stage, it is probably time to unify the universe. It's a bit cliché, but it's also a bit unavoidable, so let's leave it at will.

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And in the comments on this post, the 12th floor imitation student has already given a part of the prediction: "... The story outline seems to be just the process of upgrading from level 35 to level 1, as for how difficult and painful the process is, that is a big problem to consider, we are just readers! Only one thing is almost certain, Xiaoyu should be schizophrenic in the end..."

This outline is too abstract, but in reality, it is inevitable. The concept of the thirty-fifth level of parasites is somewhat rough and easy to misunderstand: 1. The thirty-fifth level in the classification system of human parasites. If this is the case, then even if the protagonist evolves to level 1, he is just a parasite, and he is not a life with normal rights, just like the livestock raised by humans, and the top livestock is just a beast. From this point of view, it is very problematic to imitate the predictions of classmates. 2. There are many levels of life in the universe. Humans belong to the thirty-fifth level, and probably the real monkeys on Earth are the thirty-sixth and the dogs are the thirty-ninth. According to this theory, the first level of life is a life like 1A. It is also possible that 1A is a second-level life, and if it is the top level, he will not be forced to the indigenous star by the Great Federation of Universes. It is also possible that there are higher levels above the civilization level where 1A is located, and there may be many of them. In any case, if this is the case, it is very possible to imitate the predictions of classmates. In my personal opinion, the first one is more likely. In other words, this classification is only applicable to the inferior ones that do not have sovereignty and are used by parasitic life. So, the protagonist will one day break through this classification. After all, as Mr. Lu Xun said, no matter how perfect a fly is, it is just a fly after all. The protagonist can't be a parasite forever, he can't be a monkey forever.

And here comes another problem. The significance of the protagonist's strength and upgrade is not as great as imagined. According to the previous one, the protagonist will play a game with the local power, and then he will fly out of the earth to master the intermediate (at least silicon-based) civilization, and then he will face the Great Federation of Universes. Obviously, even with 1A's ability, in the past 10,000 years, his battle with the Cosmic Federation was not so ideal.

At this point, there is another statement about the classification of this book in the second issue. That is, the book is divided into urban categories, not science fiction categories. Here's the problem. If the work is urban, then there will be a problem with the previous line about the author flying out of the earth to conquer the intermediate civilization and the advanced civilization to finally dominate the universe. Because this kind of line looks like science fiction rather than urban in any way.

However, no matter how incomprehensible, the book is urban rather than sci-fi. Now the standard of the definition of "urban" is temporarily lowered here, there is no need to push more than three heroines, and the protagonist is not required to reach the climax in the first time. Just in the city, then, the main story should take place in the city and not in the middle of the laser fire of the universe.

And here is an explanation, Xiaoyu once said after reading the first issue of this post: "Only the part about the villain is on the side." In other words, it is possible that the protagonist will take the route of conquering intermediate and advanced civilizations, but he will face the Cosmic Federation at least once. When Xiaoyu-chan was in close contact with the Universe Federation, he would definitely not be as naked as his love is now, and at that time, he should have at least tens of thousands of fleets. But how about evolution, it's more like a science fiction essay than an urban one. Therefore, I would like to criticize Xiaoyu's fallacies and mistakes in the choice of literature again.

Now that we're here, let's revisit the thread of the book. Here, there are several options:

1. Take the conventional, old-fashioned route. That is, the hierarchical conquest route analyzed earlier. Until then, the parasite will integrate all aspects of human technology and manufacturing capabilities. Then build a spaceship with the ability to leap into the universe. And in fact, with the logical criterion of 1A. He will not stay on Earth, train the indigenous civilization of the entire Earth and the advanced civilization, and use it as a base to fight against the Federation of Universes. In fact, it's just too inefficient. The best way is this: spaceship, just one ship. Student 1A will quickly fly away from this damn indigenous star. It's better to build a good nest by yourself than to occupy a good nest directly. And in fact, 1A has done exactly that for tens of thousands of years. So, 1A won't stay on Earth as a monkey head, he's not the Monkey King. Nor will he be the guide of the monkey civilization to lead the evolution of the indigenous stars. All he wanted was a springboard. However, as things stand, this springboard is not very resilient. He couldn't move. So, he had to do something, and that's all he could be.

At this point in the analysis, the shadow of the book belonging to the urban category is loomed again: if this book really wants to be called urban, then the book should be over when 1A builds a spaceship. Because, after that, it will belong to science fiction and not to the city.

2. Unconventional routes. Here, to quote a very good idea from the first issue:

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D: The most mysterious possibility: 1A discovered that the ancient civilization of the earth had a special power system. For example, cultivating civilization and so on. The emergence of this new power system made 1A discover that in fact, carbon-based creatures are the most powerful, and only carbon-based creatures can cultivate the truth and enhance individual strength beyond scientific and technological civilization. So Xiaoyu and 1A both practiced to the extreme. At the same time, Xiaoyu opened a sect to rebuild the Xiuzhen civilization on Earth. Turning the entire earth into a powerful being. So, Comrade Xiaoyu led the earthlings to conquer the universe. ......”

In fact, Xiaoyu doesn't seem to like this idea. But I personally support this idea. If the earth is just a springboard, the significance of Xiaoyu's personal progress is too small. Because 1A is strong enough, but he can only conquer and dominate in the same way as his devil. A shot from the ship's main cannon can also hurt him, causing him to flee in a hurry.

It seems that only this strength of individual strength can make the confrontation between 1A and the Federation of Universes achieve a different ending. At the same time, this is the only way to keep 1A from giving up on the earth. Finish the book with the earth as the main setting. Otherwise, in the middle and late stage stories, except for mentioning the earth when mentioning Xiaoyu's life experience, most of the time, we will not see the word earth. The book will only become less and less urban.

That's it for this analysis, so please look forward to the next one.

Finally, I affirm that this post was first published on the special forum of this book, at least, some words there will not be replaced by **. Thank you for your support.

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